Pratap's true strength - Praja SS - Final Part pg 2 3/8

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Pari

@pari0706

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aayu_26
Awesome story pari. I had tears in my eyes while reading the second part. Another beautiful story by you. Loved it. But just a small request, please please please extend the story for a part or two na, like how pratap and ajab get along with each other like before after the night, embarassing themselves in front of everyone and something like that. Please, it is just a request😊😛

Aayu my dear ... i am glad you loved the story...

extending the story... yaar i get the idea and it gets written i can't extend the story sorry 😭

but if i think of any scenes i will write a OS for sure 😉

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coderlady

@coderlady

Trailblazer

+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

This was just beautifully done. The show just keeps missing out on these details.

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Pari!🤗This was fantabulous!👏⭐️And very emotional one too.😭

I just love it.❤️I wish cv's had shown us something like this.😡🤢

Waiting to read more from you.😛😉

PS-How are you doing?

I wonder why you left my story halfway through?😲Well it has been almost 2 months since i finished 'symbol of love'!

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Pari

@pari0706

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: coderlady
This was just beautifully done. The show just keeps missing out on these details.

Hiya thank you so much for the comment...😃

show certainly does miss out a lot😡

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Pari

@pari0706

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja
Pari!🤗This was fantabulous!👏⭐️And very emotional one too.😭
I just love it.❤️I wish cv's had shown us something like this.😡🤢
Waiting to read more from you.😛😉

PS-How are you doing?
I wonder why you left my story halfway through?😲Well it has been almost 2 months since i finished 'symbol of love'!

Hello dear...

thank you for the compliment🤗

CVs 😡 don't start me

I am doing good just busy how are you

😲 did i leave your story in middle nooo i will re-read it again today and comment pakka wala promise... so sorry if i did tthat 😭

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Pari

@pari0706

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: twilightlover29
RESSS

waiting 😉

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VARSHAVJAIN

@VARSHAVJAIN

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

eawesome specially 2nd part loved it

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RuVa

@RuVa

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Hayye... Kaash aisa real mein... I mean, serial mein hota...

Chalo, koi nahi, you are here, then why we need it from the CVs? 😉

Thank you so much for this SS Pari... It's beautiful and so important! It touches upon all the issues that really were never dealt with after the leap by the CVs

Wonderful writing and beautiful portrayal of all of their emotions and their reactions!!! 👏👏👏👏

❤️ it!!😃

Thank you so much for this SS! And cheers on dedicating this to Garima! 👍🏼

Love and creativity,
RuVa

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Garima

@twilightlover29

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: pari0706

waiting 😉

UNRESS

Pari jaana 🤗

Am so sorry yaar maine jo comment kiya tha Woh post hi nahi hua koi nahi I'll say everything again

Pari you are a gifted writer and this short story proves that

You wrote on one topic jiske intezaar mein humne show ke 3 leaps jhel liye but woh nahi hua

Pratap's guilt and realisation if his wrong was strong while I felt the pain Ajabde felt kahin na kahin we forgot that small aspect of her character that she takes on the blame herself and dies not refute it like when she was a kid and always stammered shamma kijiye

I always wait for your stories because I enjoy them so much

Thank you for this gem

And you dedicated this to me😳😳😳 Thanks a ton abhi aajkal mere updates ki speed is a bit slow but promise when I'll be back home then will try to give speedier updates