Pratap's true strength - Praja SS - Final Part pg 2 3/8 - Page 4

Originally posted by: VARSHAVJAIN

eawesome specially 2nd part loved it

Originally posted by: RuVa

Hayye... Kaash aisa real mein... I mean, serial mein hota...


Chalo, koi nahi, you are here, then why we need it from the CVs? 😉


Thank you so much for this SS Pari... It's beautiful and so important! It touches upon all the issues that really were never dealt with after the leap by the CVs



Wonderful writing and beautiful portrayal of all of their emotions and their reactions!!! 👏



❤️ it!!😃

Thank you so much for this SS! And cheers on dedicating this to Garima! 👍🏼


Love and creativity,
RuVa

Originally posted by: Nonie12345

<font size="4" color="#cc3366">Wonderful SS Pari😳</font>

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

UNRESS

Pari jaana 🤗

Am so sorry yaar maine jo comment kiya tha Woh post hi nahi hua koi nahi I'll say everything again

Pari you are a gifted writer and this short story proves that

You wrote on one topic jiske intezaar mein humne show ke 3 leaps jhel liye but woh nahi hua

Pratap's guilt and realisation if his wrong was strong while I felt the pain Ajabde felt kahin na kahin we forgot that small aspect of her character that she takes on the blame herself and dies not refute it like when she was a kid and always stammered shamma kijiye

I always wait for your stories because I enjoy them so much

Thank you for this gem

And you dedicated this to me😳😳😳 Thanks a ton abhi aajkal mere updates ki speed is a bit slow but promise when I'll be back home then will try to give speedier updates

Originally posted by: aditi_angel

Pari this was fab.
Soo amar Singh wants a younger brother well it looks like he will get it soon 😉
Lovely story
Do right more...