Pratap's true strength - Praja SS - Final Part pg 2 3/8

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Hi all,
So I am very disappointed with the CVs again I was hoping that now that JB is back he entire truth will be out and Pratap will finally apologize to Ajabde. But CVs ne pani pher diya😔

Also I know that my favourity FF write Garima is travelling and will not be able to write anything on this.😳so I wrote this SS based on how i thought JB's entry should have gone.

This story is dedicated to Garima as well. As she is one who always updates her stories regularly😳

I started it with thinking it will be a OS but it kept on writing itself and now its a SSšŸ˜†

So here is a first part... it will be a two part story.

PART 1

After Mewar was lost to Akbar, Pratap and US were broken. They decided to go and assassinate Akbar, believing that after Akbar's death Mewar will be free. Not knowing what can of worms they might open on the entire Bharat.

However the wife of Dheerbai had one thought in her mind. She wanted to stop Pratap and US from going and hence save their lives. Hence she wrote a letter to the only person who she thought could stop them - Rani Jaiwantabaiji.

Rani Jaiwantabaiji who had taken sanyaas years ago in hopes to wash away her sins and get away from the politics, was now a sadhvi. She had gained even more insight in her vision and could be balanced in any situation. She realised that this mission of Pratap and US would not only kill them both, but killing Akbar will throw the entire nation in a state of chaos. Akbar had no successor and hence there was no guarantee on who might snatch the power! Mewar would never be free as after Akbar it was possible that an equally or even more cruel king would seize the kingdom and then there would be no Pratap to save the commoners.

Hence she was guided to come back and stop this tandav of vinaash.

Obeying the divine message she came back and made US and Pratap realise that where they are going is a suicide mission and there will be no benefit from it.

Once this was done there was an even bigger mission for her - to make Pratap understand. To give a suitable response to all of his unanswered questions, that rose after her sudden departure.

Pratap, had by now been forced to learn to live without his mother. Who was still living in a duality. he knew that the love of his life and his beloved wife could never say anything to his ranima that would make him go away. But then why did his mother go away? Even though he had accepted Ajabde back in his life, he never apologised to her for leaving her on the stairs of the temple, or not being there for her when her father died or all those years.

He always felt that she must not have meant it and hence he had to forgive her. She was his responsibility. He had killed most of the love from his heart and had never showered her with the love as he wanted. He had told his newly wedded wife that both of them are equal, but after her mistake, he never treated her the same.

Now as he stood infront of his mother he blamed her. He did not want to be close to her again, did not want to open his heart again. He knew inside him that Ajabde was not at fault, but in one way or another he still blamed her. Hence he was scared to hear the real reason behind his mother's sudden departure.

So when she told him that she won't go, he became adamant at knowing why she left. He told her that he is no longer a child and wanted to know the reason.

"Theek hai Kuwar Pratap. Hum jante hai, ki aapke liye ye sun pa na kathin hoga, parantu ab app itni zid kar hi rahe hai to humare pas aur koi vikalp nahi choda hai apne."

"ranima, aapke jane ke baad humne jo saha hai, us pida se adik kathin aur kya hoga?"

JB continued as if Patap never spoke

"Aapke Dajiraj ne apke vivaah ke kuch hi din purva ek aur vivaah kiya tha. Rani Veerbaiji se. Yeh toh aap jante hi hai. Aap yeh bhi jante hai ki iss baat se kitna bawaal macha tha pure mahal mein. Ek stree ke liye, apne pati ka dusra vivaah dekhna kitna katheen ho sakta hai, yeh socha hai kabhi aapne KP?"

When she saw a confused look on Pratap's face she explained further

"aapke vivaah bhi ho chuka hai Pratap, sochiye, agar Ajabde kisi aur se viv..."

"ranima!!!"

she laughed

"Gussa aya na? aap yeh soch bhi nahi sakte ke aapka jiske saath vivaah ho chuka hai, woh kisi aur se vivaah kare... lekin yeh, hum striyon ke jeevan ki saachai hai pratap. lekin hum iss peeda ko bhi sehen kar liya, jab ranaji ne veerbai se vivaah kar humare dil par ek aur ghav diya. Aur apne Maharani hone ka kartavya nibhane ke liye humne veer bai ko jitna h sake utna apnaya. yahan tak ki, jab Ranaji ne unhe patni ke roop me nahi apnaya, toh humne un dono ke beech ki duriyon ko kam karne ke liye unke kaksh ki sajawat karvayi aur Ranaji se vinanti ki, ki ve veerbaiji ko patni ke roop me apnale"

"Bas ranima, hum apke jane ka karan janana chahte hai lekin aap yh kaisi batein ..."

"hum apko apke prashna ka uttar hi de rahe hai Pratap. Ab jab apne pucha hi hai yeh prashna toh uska uttar bhi suniye. Ranaji ne mana kiya, humne lakh samjane ki koshish ki parantu apne pati se pani peeda nahi chupa paye. aur ranaji ne, usi kaksh mein humare saath raat bitayi. hum bhavnao mein behgaye aur yeh samaj hi nahi paye ke yeh haq veerbaiji ka tha. subah jab hum bahar aye toh veerbaiji ne apni peeda ko humpe krothit ho ke jatai. tab hume abhas hua ki humne unka haq cheena hai."

"unhone humse kaha ki jab tak hum mehel mein hai, ve Ranaji ke nikat nahi aa paengi."

Pratap was stunned to hear that and angry at veerbaiji. But JB had her back to pratap and could not see the expressions on his face

"aur isi liye humne socha ki abb humari mehel main koi avashyakta nahi hai hai. aur jo paap humse veerbaiji ke haq ko cheen ke hua hai uska prayashchit karne ke liy hum chale.

uss din hum isi liye ja paye kyunki hum jante the ki aab humari parchai jesi beti humari bahu banke apke jeevan mein ayi hai. aur hume purna vishwaas tha ki ve aapka ache se dhyan rakhengi aur apko kahi bhi akela nahi mehsus karne dengi, apki shakti bankar apko humse dur hone ki pida se ubhar ne ka marg batayengi. Isi liye humne unhe patra likha aur unhe apki ruchi aur pasand ke bhojan aur aisi choti choti baatein batayi aur apka dhyan rakne ko kaha."

At this, JB wiped her face and turned around without looking at his face, held his soulder

"aur dekhiye, humari beti ne humare vishwaas par khara utar ke, hume kitna prasan kiya hai. Aaj aap humare samne khade hai, hum bohot prasan hai"

but as JB looked at his face, hiding her tears she saw that Pratap had gone in a state of shock and was crying continuously. after few seconds he looked at his mother and sat on the floor with a thud.

he told her how she was not right in her assumption and what had happened after she left. how he and the entire royal family blamed Ajabde and how till today he has an almost formal relationship with Ajab. How he lost that pure bond of love with her.

hearing this JB started crying and left from there. she hurried towards the temple, where she saw Amar running out and Ajab still sitting infront of the idol and praying.

"Ajabde?"

Ajab tuned and smiled at her and came to seek her blessings.

"nahi beta, humare karan jo peeda apne sahi, jo kasht apke jeevan mein aye hai, unke pashchat aap hume itna samman de, yeh hum aur bhi adhik glani (guilt) me dhakel raha hai."

"yeh aap kesi baatein kar rahi hai ranima? aap humari ma hai. humari ranima! aap hume koi kasht de yeh to ho hi nahi sakta."

"Kuwar Pratap ne hume sab kuch bata diya hai Ajabde. Hume maaf kar dijye."

"nahi ranima, aapka is mein koi dosh nahi, us samay paristhiti hi aisi thi. Aur parivaar mein choti choti an ban toh chalti hi hai. mahatva purna baat yeh hai ki iss kathin samay mein hum yaha apne parivaar ke saath hai. aur ab toh app bhi hai, toh hume purna vishwaas hai ki jald hi hum iss dukhdai samay se ubhar ke bahar ayenge aur apni shakti ko badhayenge. Uske pashchat, us krur akbar se apna ghar apna chittor vapas lene mein Kuwar Pratap aur Dajiraaj koi kasar nahi chodenge. aap dekh ligiyega"

"haan meri bachi, app sahi keh rahi hai. aur hum dekh sakte hai ki aap Kuwar Pratap ki patni hai. toh ab ap unhiki bhasha bol rahi hai"

teasing her thus she hugged her. this scene was witnessed by pratap, who was standing at the door.

as both Ajab and JB came out Pratap went to his room. He sat on the bed and was in deep thought. Not about his ranima (as everyone expected) but about Ajab. His Ajab, and how even he was cruel to her.

I know there is not much Praja in this part... but I promise next part is all Praja😳and will be updated tomorrow😊
Edited by pari0706 - 10 years ago

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Pari jaanašŸ¤—
You wrote a SS for me😳
Thank you so much and you made it on Ajabde's innocence I love you for this
Useless CVs I tell you but no worries when we have you😃
Love it and Pratap ki to zameen khisak gayi re
My Ajab is so good and caring
He doesn't deserve her at all
I love you so much Pari and thank you for dedicating this gem to me
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww awesome dude. Waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely SS šŸ˜›
Do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Beautiful SS plz update soon😃
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Pari jaanašŸ¤—

You wrote a SS for me😳
Thank you so much and you made it on Ajabde's innocence I love you for this
Useless CVs I tell you but no worries when we have you😃
Love it and Pratap ki to zameen khisak gayi re
My Ajab is so good and caring
He doesn't deserve her at all
I love you so much Pari and thank you for dedicating this gem to me


Garima my jaanšŸ¤—

I was so wishing for you to make the first comment on the storyšŸ˜› and babaji ne meri sunlišŸ‘

I waited and waited all weekend but no one wrote an SS or OS on this. Hence deiced to take things in my own hand.

Ajab has already been the best wife but even she is in guilt... you might just see the old Ajab.. Pratap has hurted her beyond his imagination

I love you too Janna for the amazing FFs that you wrote ... this is just a small token from my end 😳
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Originally posted by: Annei123

Lovely SS šŸ˜›

Do update soon


Thank you 😊

Update coming up


Originally posted by: vvishalini

Wowww awesome dude. Waiting for next part



thank you dear. Next part is coming up
Edited by pari0706 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sushma_marawi

Beautiful SS plz update soon😃


Thank you 😃

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Part 2

As it was almost night, soon Ajab came with food. Everyone wanted to give Pratap some space and hence didn't wait for him to come and have food.

As Ajab entered she saw Pratap in sitting on the edge of the bed in deep thought. She could see that he was very disturbed and hence thought to divert his mind. Thinking so she smiled and closed the door.

"Aree Kuwar Pratap, aacha hua aap hume yahi mil gaye. aap bhojan par nahi aye na, toh isi liye hum apke liye bhojan le kar aye hai. Chaliye bhojan kar lijiye."

saying so she put the plates on the table and arranged it properly. Once done she looked back to find him looking at her with lost eyes. She could see the pain of loss and guilt in hi eyes, but thought it was due to losing Chittor and hence didn't think much about it.

"aree ab ap hume aise kyun dekh rahe hai, jaise ki hum kisi aur bhasha mein bol rahe ho?"

getting no response she went upto him and pulled him up holding his hand and dragged him to the place where the food was placed. she made him sit, and started feeding him. All this while he just looked at her and obeyed whatever she was saying. When almost half of the plate was gone he held her hand.

Ajabde found this weird and looked at him. but before she could understand anything, Pratap took the morsel from her hand and fed it to her. Ajabe was surprised as he has never done this before. She had the food from his hand but as he kept feeding her, she remembered all the time she longed to have food from his hands and tears started flowing from her eyes.

Pratap on the other hand could not meet her eyes and hence kept feeding her without looking at her face. once the plate was empty, he looked at her to see the tears silently flowing from her eyes.

he wiped the tears and held her hand he kept caressing her hands and looking at it for few moments.

"Hume shama kar dijiye Ajab"

"Shama? Kunwar Pratap? aap yeh kya keh rahe hai? humari aur dekhiye"

She was confused and held his face with other hand and made him look up. What she saw shocked her. he was crying!

"Kuwar Pratap, aap iss tarah, aap"

"Hume Shama kar dijiye Ajab, gunegaar hai hum aapke."

"Aap yeh kaisi behki behki baatein kar rahe hai? humse shama kyun mang rahe hai?

"Vivaah kiya tho humne aapse, sab se lad pade the hum, aapko apni beendani banane ke liye. Har sukh dukh mein aapke saath khade rehne ka aur aapki baat ka aur appka sanman karne ka vaachan diya tha humne. Lekin ek bhi vaachan nahi nibha paye."

He stood up and faced away from her

"ghin ati hai hume apne app pe krodh ata hai, ki hum apne dukh mein apne dvand mein itne vyast ho gaye ki aapko akela kar diya. itna akela ki jab apke pita ki mrityu hui tab bhi hum apke saath nahi the. aapko baijilal bane ne pe majboor kar diya humne. Apne aap ko Mewar ke rakshak kehlate rahe, aur jok diya apko un dusht afghano se ledne ke liye."

He banged his hand on the wall

"yahan tak ki jab aap gaune ke pashchat vapis ayi humare mehel tab bhi apse ek duri banaye rakhi. hum jante the ki ranima ke jane ke piche apki koi galti nahi thi. aap kasurvar nahi thi. tab bhi aapko dekhte hi hume yeh abhas tha ki humare vivaah ke paschat humse humari ranima dur ho gayi. hum aapko nahi, apne vivaah ko koste rahe. aur aapko vo prem vo saman vo haq nahi de paye, jiski kalpana humne apse vivaah ke samay ki thi."

For a few moments pratap was lost in his thought and Ajabde was reliving her past. after sometime Pratap continued

"Phir bhi apne sare kratavya nibhaye. hume apne pas ane ki anumati di, apko chune ka haq diya? kyun Ajabde? humne apne vivaah ke ek bhi vachan k nahi nibhaya. sadev apne nirnay apne vichar ap pe thopte gaye. aur apse yehi apeksha ki, ki aap humara samarthan karengi. Jab ki vivaah uprant humne aapse kaha tha ki aap aur hum ek saman hai. lekin humne aapse aapki samanta cheen li. yahan tak ki hum sanyaas lene ka man bana bethe. bina yeh soche ki humare jane ke baad apka kya hoga. phir bhi apne uff tak nahi ki? aaj bhi hum iss abhiyaan mein jane ka nirnay karliya aur apse pucha tak nahi. phir bhi apne humari haan mein haan milati rahi?"

he turned around and held her by her shoulders whilst she just looked at him with tears running down her eyes.

"kyun Ajabde? Kyun karti rahi aap yeh saab kyun nahi pucha humse ki hum aapko us mandir ki seedhiyon pe yun akela kaise chod sakte hai. kaise hum aap par apna har nirnay thop te ha. Bataiye hume ajabde. Kyun kiya apne aisa? kyun uttar nahi manga humse?"

"kaise uttar mangte hum apse? jab ki dosh toh humara hai. Data sahi hi toh kehte the, hum ashubh hai. Jahan bhi jate hai, jise bhi apna rishta banate hai, unse kuch na kuch chin hi lete hai."

Saying so she took his hands off her shoulder and looked away.

"paida hote hi, humne apne bhai se unka jeevan cheena. Apne data ka sapna aur ma ki umeed chini. Unko ukh diya itna dukh ki data humara mukh bhi nahi dekhna chahte the. Phool jo humari sabse achi sakhi thi, ve humse sabse adhik prem kart thi parantu jab unke man mein prem ki bhavna uthi toh humne unse unka prem china. Aur aap, apse vivaah karte hi apko apki ranima se dur kardiya. phir humari asaphalta ke karan, data ki jaan gayi, aur Bijolia par musibat ayai. phir hum aapko kese doshi mante? Galti toh humare durbhagya ki hai na? aur jab aapki koi galti hi nahi toh hum apko kyun saza dete?"

she controlled her sob and turned around

"le ... lekin hum ... humara vishwas kijiye Kunwar Pratap, humne ... humne jaan ... janbujkar aisa nahi kiya... hum..hume sha...shama ...shama kar dijye, hum apka vishwas nahi jeet paye apko sukh nahi de paye. nahi ranima ki umeed par khare utar paye hum."

saying so she started crying and folded her hands and started stammering again...

"hume sha.. sha.."

But Pratap hugged her tight and cut her off...

"Nahi Ajab, apki koi galti nahi hai. Apne apne bhai ko nahi mara, aur nahi apke data ke dukh ka karan aap thi. Vo unki galti thi jo apko nahi samaj paye. aur Phool bhi apse rusht nahi hai. unhone swayam aapka vivaah humse karvaya. Aur rahi baat humari toh aapne apna kartavya purna tah nibhaya hai. vo hum the jinhone aapko niraash kiya."

Ajabde realised the truth as well and both cried for the longest time in each others arms. For the loss of their childhood, their dreams, their togetherness, their married life and most importantly loss of their pure love.

After long time Pratap came out of the hug and cupped her face.

"Ajab hum vachan dete hai, aaj ke baad humare jeevan ka ek bhi nirnay hum aapse vichar vimash ke bina nahi lenge. aur aapse apne dil ki bhavnao ko nahi chupayenge. Aapko vohi prem aur sanman denge jiski umeed apne humse vivaah ke samay ki thi. hum aapko duniya ki sari khushiyan denge, aur aapki har baat ko sunge aur unka sanman bhi karenge."

She smiled at him and nodded

"Lekin hume bhi aapse vachan chahiye, ki aap humare saath humari shakti banke chalengi. aur humare samne yeh jo pahad jaisa vishal lakshya hai use pura karne mein humara sahyog karengi. lekin, humari voh sherni vali Ajab banke. yeh roti hui glani se bhari chui mui Ajabde baanke nahi"

saying so he wiped her tears and gave a small chuckle. even she chuckled at his attempt to joke and nodded. Vachan dete hai. Jai Eklingji.

He smiled and held her fist

"jai eklingji"

for few seconds they looked at each other with a smile.

"Waise, hume lagta hai ki aap bohot aalsi hoti ja rahi hai " he said looking teasingly

"Kya? Aalsi aur hum?" she said unbelievingly

"Aur nahi toh kya, Amar Singh ke janm ke baad apne kitni baar shastra abhyas kiya?" he asked accusingly

"Wo ... wo hum ..."

"haan haan boliye boliye?"

"aree hum Amar Singh pe apna dhyan kendrit kar rahe the, isi liye samay nahi mila. Aur aap he ki hum par hi dosh laga rahe hai. Apne bete ko dekha hai kabhi? bilkul aap ki hi tarah ziddi hai"

"kya hum aur ziddi?"

"aur nahi toh kya, jab aap koi baat ko than lete hai toh kisiki majal ki woh na hone de?"

"acha theek hai theek hai, lekin aab Amar Singh ko sambhal ne ke liye Ranima aur Choti ma dono he. isi liye aab ap har subah puja ke baad humare saath shastra abhyas karengi. theek?"

"uchit hai."

"waise, aab apko nahi lagta ki Amar Singh akela mehsus kar rahe hai?"

"Akela? hum samje nahi? Hum sab toh hai na unke saath!"

"haan woh toh hai, parantu agar unke saath koi khelne wala hota to?"

"Khelne wala? Kuwar pratap hum kuch samje nahi?"

"Phir Kunwar Pratap? aap bhool rahi hai ki apne vachan diya tha ki ekant mein aap hum Pratap bulayengi"

"aree par hum ..."

"Ajab?"

"Theek hai, Pratap, parantu hum apki baat ka matlab nahi smaje"

"Yeh hui na humari Ajab wali baat. Toh hum keh rahe the.."

saying so he held her by her waist and whispered near her ears

"Kyun na Amar Singh ko ek bha ya behen de hum? Kya vichaar hai?"

and looked at her tomato face.

"Aap ... Aap bhi na kaisi utpatang baatein kar rahe hai... chaliye chodye hume ..."

"nahi hum aapko kabhi nahi chodenge Ajab. Ek baar yeh galti kar chuke hai apko Mandir ki seedhyo pe chod ke. ab nahi."

"bhul jaiye uss baat ko. Abb toh hum saath hai na? aur hume humare liye, Mewar ke liye ek naye ujjwal bhavishya bhi to banana hai. hai na?"

"bilkul, aur uski shurvat aaj hum aapko voh prem de kar karna chahte hai jiske liye humara hriday (heart) na jane kab se pratiksha kar raha hai"

She blushed at his words and hugged him

All night he showed her how sorry he was and how much he longed for us.

Even though they were together all this while, they finally found their lost love after a heart to heart conversation.

They both knew they have a long road ahead, but they were confident that they will cross it. For now Pratap had his strength, his true Shakti with him, in the form of his sherni, his Ajab.

Edited by pari0706 - 10 years ago
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Such a beautiful SS šŸ‘
Loved the heart to heart convo of Praja 😳

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