praja ff :love is never wrong ( completed) - Page 7

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Posted: 10 years ago
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wah phool gone pratap ko ajab itni asani se nhi milni chahiye...
good update dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Sorry for disappointing u all but this is the last part...hope I'll like it and forgive me for bakwaas update[BR] Chalo now story time Chapter-6
]A-who is this girl... She was trying hard to find any girl whom pratap could like
Aki-ajab where r u lost...
Though he knew the answer that it was pratap..
A-h..haan woh kuch nhi
That's when he noticed wounds near his lips and forehead..
A-aki does it hurt
And she touched the wound
Aki.-aaah
A-ooh sorry
And she started blowing air on his wounds
Pratap was seeing all this he was all red and yellow wind anger and jealousy
That's when ajab noticed him... he clearly saw jealousy in his eyes but y was he jealous was the question in her mind...
Then both ajab and aki went for a walk
At evening after relaxing a lot they went to their hotel
Ajab went to her room and saw a beautiful blue lace dress...she loved it
She same out running and he was standing there...
A-this is lovely...whose is this
Aki-for u
A-but y
Aki-because today is our last day of trip...chalo now go and get ready while I'll also change
She went to her room and changed... she tied her hair in a beautiful bun
She went out he wasn't there his room was also open
Then she saw a chit sticked on the door
Dear ajab
Come down to the hall u'll find me there...
She was walking down the stairs and she saw down...
Everybody all her frnds were there she saw subho
She came running towards her and said happy b'day meri Jaan and hugged her
She was talking to everyone but her eyes were searching both her heroes
A-where is aki
Where is pratap but y am I thinking of him
P-b'cuz u miss me
A-no I never miss u
P-see I'm sorry for hurting u then and hurting ur best frnd now plzz forgive me
A-i don't wanna talk to u
Then she turned towards the stage and she had a smile on her face
Aki was there he was wearing a blue tuxedo and was looking hot and cool at both at the same time
Aki-my beautiful princess... u r the best thing that ever happend to me
U all know my family we all talk to each other and she is my family...ajab do u remember when we first met U were a newcomer in school and one guy was bullying u and u were crying I saw u and I came and said why r u teasing her and he replied none of ur bussiness and I said it is my bussiness she is my frnd and if I see any of u around her I'm gonna kill they ran away and u came and hugged me and I said u don't have to worry I'm there for u u know wat I don't dream for heaven b'cuz u made my life heaven happy birthday ajab...
She came running and hugged her tight...
A-i'll cry if I'll say more
Aki-aww my princess will cry
And they both were walking down the stage... when pratap said
P-i don't know u wanna talk to me or not but I will love to speak a few words
Ajab I'm sorry i really am... u remember our first meeting u were playing badminton u lost ur balance and fell right into my arms and just then it started raining... our first meeting was so magical b'cuz we were meant to be and no one even u cannot separate us... if ur angry shout at me slap me but don't go away I feel enraged and jealous when I see u wid anyone... I love u more than anything and I'll love u till the last breath
She had a serious look on her face and suddenly tears came down
A-stop it u no n aa I'm emotional still u said so much in one go
He was expecting an answer and just then he felt sth soft as feather on his cheeks...
Ajab kissed him on his cheeks and said I love u and I forgive u
Everyone was more than happy and started dancing they were continuously dancing and changing partner just then aki got this beautiful girl as his partner...they both were so lost in each other... everyone stopped dancing except them... just then there eye lock broke and they were all red... a-aki u said u don't wanna meet any girl[BR] She had a mischevious smile
Aki( blushing)now I don't want to meet anyone
He was staring at the girl
A-but u have to because she is my frnd ruquiya the daughter of the owner of this hotel she lives in Delhi and she is the one I wanted u to meet u both are perfect
Aki was so lost in her beauty that he in a flow said-yes we are
Everyone laughed and he came back to his senses... they both were all red
He did'nt knew her but he liked her... maybe b'cuz he knew
LOVE IS NEVER WRONG
THE END
Edited by sidyali4 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
It ended so soon!!! But the update was fabulous...love how PrAja got together and how Akbar experienced love at first sight...beautifully expressed...lovely story
Do write more...you can write nicely! Just keep writing and posting them here...I'll be waiting eagerly for another story from you ok?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I'm sorry Natasha that it ended so early... I'm not as gud writer as u r just trying hard and after a few days I'll start my new story on praja love amidst jealousy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update mahima loved the way pratap confessed his feelings and akbar found his lady love ruqaiya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#66
Thank you for writing this cute story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#67
Aww thank u so much for reading and commenting on it... BTW what should I call u @coderlady
And yeah I've started another ff on praja its name is praja ff love amidst jealousy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG! I wonder how i missed this wonderful story of yours!👏Read all parts in one go.This is so beautifully written and a happy ending for praja and ruqlal.😳I'm so sorry for replying so late.😛
But still i must say this was just amazing,mahima!👏⭐️Looking forward to read more from you!😃
Edited by crazy-for-praja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy-for-praja

OMG! I wonder how i missed this wonderful story of yours![8(][=D>]Read all parts in one go.This is so beautifully written and a happy ending for praja and ruqlal.[:$]I'm so sorry for replying so late.[:P][DIV]But still i must say this was just amazing,mahima![=D>][:*:]Looking forward to read more from you![:D][/DIV]


Thank u so much ramya... ur comments means a lot to me

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