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Posted: 10 years ago
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OMG garima u commented... I love all ur ff and right now I'm reading ur broken angel...loved it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great going girl a very interesting ff and i'm looking forward to read it. Update soon. Btw, what should i call you? I'm aayu and even i'm a sidyali fan😛😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey ayu thanks fr reading my ff and I'm mahima...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Mahima no need to thank me good writers deserve an appreciation 😊 do update soon 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
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THANKS TO AL OF U FOR READING AND COMMENTING ON MY FF AND HERE COMES THE NEXT UPDATE...
CHAPTER-3
AS AJABDE HAD GONE TO CHANGE IN HER ROOM...AKI WAS TALKING TO HANSA..
AKI-AUNTY JI WAT R UR PLANS
H-BETA MY PLANS ARE VERY CLEAR AND I'VE DECIDED HOW TO CELEBRATE HER BIRTHDAY
AKI-TELL ME ALSO AUNTY JI
H-LISTEN U BOTH ARE GOING TO GO TO GOA TOMORROW TICKETS ARE BOOKED FOR U TOO...SO GO THERE AND ENJOY
AKI-THANK U AUNTY JI BT ANY SPECIAL PLAN FOR HER B'DAY
H-YEAH THERE WILL BE A PARTY WHERE ALL HER FRIENDS WILL COME
AKI-AUNTY JI UR THE BEST BT WILL PRATAP BE THERE
H(IRRITATED)-WHY WILL HE BE THERE HE BROKE MY DAUGHTERS HEART HE HAS LOST THE RIGHT OF BEING HER FRIEND
AKI WAS LEAVING WHEN SUDDENLY HANSA CALLED HIM AND SAID-WHEN WILL U CONFESS UR FEELINGS FOR HER
AKI-ASAP AUNTY JI
H KISSED HIS FOREHEAD AND HE LEFT
AT NIGHT
A-MAA Y R U PACKING MY BAGS ARE WE GOING SOMEWHERE...
H-NOT WE U R GOING TO GOA WITH AKI
A-BUT Y
H-TO ENJOY
HANSA KNEW THAT THIS WAS THE FIRST TIME AJAB FORGOT HER OWN B'DAY BT SHE WAS HAPPY THAT AKBAR WAS WID HER WHO'LL MAKE HER NORMAL

PRATAP'S PLACE
HE HAD CALLED PHOOL TO HIS HOUSE AND JB WAS VERY UPSET AS SHE DID'NT LIKED HER
P-PHOOL I WANT TO TELL U STH
PH- YEAH TELL ME
P- I LOVE YOU...WILL U BE MY GF
PHOOL WAS NOT HAPPY AS HE DID'NT BOUGHT ANY GIFTS FOR HER BT STILL SHE KINEW THAT HE'S A BIG JACKPOT SO SHE SAID-YES YES YES I WOULD LOVE TO BE UR GF
PRATAP WAS MORE THAN HAPPY THEN HE KEPT AN ENVELOPE IN HER HANDS

SHE OPENED AND SAW THE PRESENT SHE GOT AND JUMPED ON THE BED AND HUGGED PRATAP TIGHTLY
P-WILL U COME WID ME
PH-SURELY I WILL... I LOVE GOA
AND AFTER HALF AN HOUR SHE LEFT HIS PLACE AS SHE HAD TO DO PACKING

NEXT MORNING
A-BYE MOM I'M GONNA MISS U
H-DONT MISS ME JUST ENJOY
AKI-BYE AUNTY JI
H-BYE MERE BACHHE
THEY BOTH ENTERED THE FLIGHT AND SAT ON THEIR SEATS IN BUSSINESS CLASS
THERE SEATS WERE AT THE BACK AND THEN SUDDENLY AJABDE FELT STH DIFFERENT STH SHE LIKED SHE HAD BUTTERFLIES IN HER STOMACH...SHE THOUGHT IT MUST BE DUE TO THE TAKE OFF BT IT WASN'T IT WAS B'CUZ PRATAP WAS ON THE SAME FLIGHT BT THEY BOTH WERE NOT ABLE TO SEE EACH OTHER...
ON THE OTHER HAND PRATAP ALSO FELT STH...STH HE NEVER FELT BEFORE...STH SOOTHING BT HE DID'NT KNEW THE REASON HE FELT THAT IT WOULD MUST BE B'CUZ OF PHOOL...
IT WAS A LONG WAY SO AFTER HALF AN HOUR BOTH THE GIRLS WERE SLEEPING
AJAB KEPT HER HEAD ON AKI'S ARMS AND HE FELT LIKE THIS MOMENT SHOULD STOP RIGHT NOW HE REMOVED THE FLAKE OF HAIR FROM HER FACE AND KEPT HIS HEAD ABOVE HERS AND WENT TO DEEP SLEEP...LOOKING LIKE A PERFECT COUPLE
PHOOL WAS ALSO SLEEPING WID HER HANDS ON PRATAPS CHEST AND HE ENTWINEDIS HANDS WID HERS AND WENT TO HIS DREAMLAND...

I KNOW IT WAS SHORT BUT U KNOW I'M NOT SUCH EXPERIENCED WRITER LIKE U ALL SO PLEASE TOLERATE ME AND COMMENT UR PRECIOUS VIEWS

PRECAP-PRAJA +AKI AND PHOOL IN GOA...MASTI LOVE JEALOUSY ALL ON THEIR WAY...
LOVE U ALL KEEP READING



Edited by sidyali4 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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LoveLy concept😳
Do update soon😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's great... everyone's going to goa, update soon, waiting to see the jealousy part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update mahima so everyone's heading goa waiting for the jealousy part 😉 do update soon 😛
Edited by swara98 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wohooo lovely update mahima though the couples are interchanged lol I'm enjoying the story 😆
Can't wait for the next part 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's amazing Mahima! Great job!! Update soon...looking forward to some nice scenes on goa

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