praja ff :love is never wrong ( completed) - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank u @annei123,@people1234,@swara98,@nandini 6,@aayu6,@Natasha 1234
And I'll update soon and yeah I also love jealousy part so my next ff is love amidst jealousy
Love u all...and keep commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32
jalao pratu ko jalao...woh isi layak h...nice one dear..loved reading
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33
Don't worry @sam622 pratu ko toh abhi bahut jalna h... keep enjoying
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34
Superb. ..will love the jealousy track
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want Ajabde to choose Aki and uss Pearl ko tadapne do phoolwati ke saath. ..
Can't wait for all the fun things that happen in Goa and Haan please don't show Ajabde jealous or heart broken instead show her having fun with Aki please re

Love the chapter and looking forward for more
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
@twilightlover29 ajab is my favourite character so she would'nt be jealous...thanks for reading it and enjoy
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Posted: 10 years ago
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@jyotic74 u know I also love jealousy part... so just wait for more
Thanks for commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38
chapter-4
the plane landed and phool and pratap came down first...they both were holding hands...it meant a lot to pratap as she was his first gf bt for phool it was no less than a deal in which she was ready to do anything for money...then came the sweetest couple ajab and aki...before they came out praphool had already left...
they both were not holding hands or doing any kind of pda bt still they looked the best...
a-aki lets go to the beach our hotel has a beach just beside it naa
aki-ajab first lets get freshen up
a-i'm all refreshed u go to the hotel and take the luggage wid u
aki-okay and take care

ajab went to the beach
pratap's room
p-phool come naa lets go to the beach
ph-pratap i'm not feeling well u go and enjoy
p-okay take care bye love you
pratap also went on the beach
ajab was lost in her thoughts she felt aki was such a nice guy why he does'nt have any gf...i should find a girl for him she thought when she collided with a person she fell on the ground and as he lost balance he fell on her
a-pratap
p-ajab
they both were lost in each others eyes...when suddenly she heard the noise of the children playing on the beach and she moved a bit and stood up she gave him hand to stand
a-what r u doing here
p-i have come here wid phool just to u know enjoy
wat r u doing here
a-nothing just to have fun u know
he suddenly remembered it was her b'day after 3 days
p-oh so u have come here to celebrate...
he was cut off by aki who had seen phool and understood pratap was also there
aki came and held ajab's hand
for both of them it was normal but for pratap it was not...he was not feeling good seeing them together holding each others hand
aki did'nt hold her hand to make pratap jealous but he held her hands because he knew she was broken from inside on seeing pratap was with phool
aki-pratap sorry to itnterrupt but we are going for dinner so i'll catch u later bye
and off they went
pratap did'nt knew why he felt bad on seeing akbar holding ajabde's hand but then he removed all thoughts from his mind and went to his and went to sleep

the next morning

ajabde and aki left early for sight seeing and were returning when they saw pratap in the corridor of the hotel wid phool
aki-pratap u r in the same hotel as ours
p-oh wow wat a pleasant surprise
and then ajaba and aki saw phool she was wearing hot pants of pink colour wid a very tight black colour spaggeti
the way she was talking to the manager and looking at the other people in the restaurant was like she was trying to seduce them
and then pratap noticed ajab
she was wearing a white coloured knee length capri eid a green and blue colour mixed top and a white coloured hat wid floral print
on seeing her
p-beautiful
aki very possessively asked
aki-wat
p-a...a...the beach
aki-ooh yeah it is very beautiful
and then ajabde and aki went to their separate rooms and went to sleep

on the other hand pratap went wid phool for sight seeing
pratap very well noticed that she was giving wierd looks to every guy on their way as if calling them to the hotel wid her...
he told her to
p-lets get back to the hotel
ph-okay
she waved to some unknown guy and went to the hotel wid pratap
at night
both the couples were there for there for dinner
after having food aki asked ajab for a dance and she agreed so they both started dancing
pratap also asked phool but she said no and started searching for some hot guys around
ajab and aki were dancing when his phone ranged so he went out to pick it up and inside the hotel the game started
according to the game the spotlight will stop on a girl and a boy and they both would have to dance on the floor
the spotlight stpped on our pratap and ajabde
pratap came on the floor he asked for her hand and they started dancing
pratap pov
was she so beautiful all the time and i did'nt noticed...she looks like an an angel...why am i so atracted towards her
ajabde's pov
i have to control myself...he's not the right guy for me
and the stopped they both separated and aki came in and both the couple went to their respective rooms

plzzz comment guyz
precap- a fight😉

so stay tuned for more updates😊








































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Posted: 10 years ago
#39
Awesome update really loved it 👏
I just love jealousy wala parts so I'm loving the story. Update soon 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#40
Aww aayu thanks will update soon

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