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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter-5

in the hotel room

p-phool y u dont talk to me

ph-b'cuz i'm not feeling well

p-thats okay bt i request u not to wear such short clothes it just does'nt seem gud

ph(angrily)-pratap u r my bf that does'nt mean you will teach me wat to wear and wat not to wear its my life and my choice

pratap was shocked

p-is this a way to talk to someone

ph-just shut up u fool

ur just a fool u dont understand y am i wid u...i'm wid u only b'cuz u have money..

she confessed

thats when pratap came to know that she was drunk

p(furiously)-u bloody cheap girl i dont want to see ur face just go away 'go back to delhi

next morning

pratap was more than angry...but he was also happy as phool went back to delhi and he wanted to enjoy the place all by himself when he saw ajabde and akbar

they were splashing water on each other and talking also

a-aki u know i have found a girl for u

aki-oh shut up ajab

a-no i'm damn serious

aki(serious mood)-ajab u know na i dont want a girl in my life i'm happy the way i am

pratap could see that aki was talking rudely to ajabde and he felt to go and punch him and so he did

with a sudden punch on the face aki fell down and then he got up and gave a punch back to pratap

now they were punching each other and talking also

aki-y did u punch me

p-y were u talking rudely to ajab

ajab was shocked to see his concern for her

aki-she's my friend and i can talk to her anyway without ur permission

p-no you cant she's such an amazing person

aki-you dont have to tell me wat she means to me but y r u so concern wat does she mean to u

p-she means li..

he stopped in between he himself was'nt sure wat she meant to him

he was thinking while aki gave two punches on his face that got her nose bleeding

ajab stopped both of them

she went to her room wid aki

she was confused y was he so concern,does he really think i'm an amazing person

she was so lost that she did'nt hear aki's voice

aki- ajab ajab

a-h..haan

aki-do my dressing

a-yeah

she was doing his dressing

then he told her to go and give first aid kit to phool so that she can do pratap's dressing

on the other hand pratap was now sure that wat he felt for her was love...

he heard a knock on his door

p-come in

a-this is firat aid tell phool she'll do ur dressing

she was about to go when pratap said-she isn'nt here

a-where is she

p-we broke up and she went back to delhi

on hearing this news ajab was happy but also she felt this guy is good for nobody

p-ajab where are u lost

a-yeah okay then i'll do ur dressing

she did his dressing and he kept on staring at her

she looked so beautiful...suddenly a thought struck his mind i think i should tease her a bit..

p-you know wat i love someone

and once again ajab's heart which was repaired recently got broken

she controlling her tears said-who

p-i'll let u know tomorrow

though he was not sure but still he thought maybe she also like me

next day(ajab's b'day)

she did'nt remember her b'day as she was more lost in prataps words,,,who is she, she asked herself...

thanks for reading

plzz comment and sorry if it did'nt fulfill ur expectation

love u all...next one will be the last part

precap-ajab's b'day and something special for ajab and aki

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Posted: 10 years ago
#52
omg this part was superb 😃 the way u describe fighting,I can imagine 😉😛
phoolwati is out 😆 that's great👏
update soon 😊
Edited by dsm123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#53
Yeah phoolwati is out and thanks @dsm123
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update mahima so phool's out great do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#55
Thanks swara I know it was'nt that gud sry for disappointing u all...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Phool went!!!!! Yayyy!!!!! And ajab and aki 😊 that's nice as well...do update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: sidyali4

Thanks swara I know it was'nt that gud sry for disappointing u all...


Come on ya! You're awesome so u don't say sorry...it's not very often that there's a different concept and we really appreciate you for writing this story...you're updates are truly awesome
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats on becoming a groupbie!! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#59
You r so cute Sara and Natasha u told me then only I noticed I've become a groupbie
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: sidyali4

You r so cute Sara and Natasha u told me then only I noticed I've become a groupbie


😆 😆

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