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Posted: 10 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: coderlady

Love Som's dialogues. He is a gem. Pratap and panditji really do need him to win their wives back.

Oh yes they definitely will need som's help. I love to portray characters in their naughtiest😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Enjoy the update friends. Since i got delayed in updating the part, here is a long update for you'll. Read, like and review😊

PART 8

DAY 2

This morning ajabde woke up earlier than pratap and completed her tulsi puja because she didn't want to again fall a prey to his irresistible charms. When pratap woke up and saw the puja place with hopeful eyes, he got a little distressed on knowing that she was not there but he knew he had this deepening effect on her. So he quietly left the place and started preparing for executing his next move.

On the other hand, our panditji was waiting in the cowshed for bhago. He knew she would come there to feed the cows and that he will not let her go this time without talking to her. Chakrapani's wait ended pretty soon. As bhago went to feed the first cow, Chakri made his presence felt by holding her hand and moving her around. She was about to shout by this sudden stimulus but seeing her husband out his hand on her mouth calmed her nerves.

CH: saubhagyawati it's me your husband. What are you trying to say?

Bhago indicated towards his hand and he removed his hand.

BH: Panditji what kind of a behavior is this? And what are you doing here at the cowshed? Leave from her at once.

CH: No I won't without talking to you. See saubhagyawati I know baujiraj has hurt bhabhisa a lot but he is honestly trying to mend things. I tried to stop him but please understand even I have got some limitations. I know you are frustrated on both of us but saubhagyawati I need your help in uniting baujiraj and bhabhisa. Even you want that they unite again don't you? Then please help us saubhagyawati atleast for the future of your friend.

BH: Okay panditji. That even I have noticed that KP is really sorry for what he has done. I will help you fully from my side. Just tell me what has to be done.

CH: Thank you so much. Yeah so first you have to bring bhabhisa after dinner to the bridge on the riverside rest all baujiraj will handle.

BH: Okay panditji.

It was late afternoon. Lunch had been over. Pratap had been reading his verses the whole morning and afternoon and ajabde was preparing garlands for the puja. Suddenly, the head woman priest entered ajabde's room and said,'Beta, why are you not wearing bangles? These four days are very auspicious for a married woman and you are moreover pregnant. Bangles are a symbol of happy marriage and an indication of a bright future. It would be really appreciable if you arrange for some bangles my child.'

Ajabde nodded her head and took her leave. She had anyways finished her work and wanted an excuse to go out and wander in the mela. She was glad she got one. Ajabde left for the mela which was held in the celebration of the upcoming puja. There she went to the shop of jewellery. Coincidently, pratap had also come to the mela to look for some weapons. He saw ajabde having a look at jewellery and asking saubhagyawati about her choice and so he went there to tease her. Seeing pratap approaching, Subhon left from there. Ajabde was lost in her own world. She didn't sense subho leaving. She asked subho(actually pratap) How are these bangles subho? Will they suite my hands? And what do you think about those earrings? I want to look exceptional in the puja. KP should know what he has lost. Answer na subho!

Pratap: kp already knows what he has lost. And you don't need jewellery to ascertain your beauty. You look exceptionally beautiful even in the simplest of dress just the way you do now.

Ajabde was shocked to hear her husband's say that. She turned around and saw pratap staring fondly at her with his intense gaze. She started her usual blabbering,'What are you doing here KP? Is this the way to talk with anyone and listen to their conversations? What do you intend on doing KP? It is against your values to overhear someone right? Then why were you doing that? And...

Pratap: QUIET AJABDE you speak so much when you are completely affected by someone's presence isn't it?

Ajabde: Who said I'm affected by your presence?

Pratap: I never talked about my presence.

Ajabde was in a spot. She had herself spilled out her feelings. Damn such a fool I am she thought while pratap was grinning at his innocence. On seeing him smile, ajabde said,' What are you laughing at KP? Oh yeah! It's always so delightful to you when you see me losing to you

Pratap: Loosing to me? Ajabde I have lost my heart to you, my self to you and you talk about loosing yourself. And well, talking about my values, they don't restrict me from coming near to my wife.

Ajabde: Fine then I will only go from here. Bhaiya ji, here is the money.

She hurriedly threw some gold coins on the vendor's stall and was about to leave when pratap's comment made her embarrass all over again

Ajabde so generous of you. You gave the vendor the payment and didn't even take your materials. Such mistakes are only done when people are greatly shy and affected by someone's presence don't you agree?' Pratap knew he was torturing her but he just could not resist when he got a chance to make her red. Ajabde took her articles avoiding pratap's gaze and left from there fussing over her stupidity leaving behind a contented pratap.

AT PRATAP'S PLACE

CH: Baujiraj saubhagyawati is with us. Now it's just you and your proper execution of our plans.

Pratap: Great news Chakri. Now I will make sure ajabde falls for me again. Anyways let's start preparing now. SOM...SOM

Som: Yes baujiraj coming...all the preparations are done just get bhabhisa at the riverside after dinner.

Pratap: Yes that'll be done. Now let's leave for dinner.

AFTER DINNER

Ajab: Subho where are you dragging me so urgently?

BH: Just come ajabde I have seen a very beautiful flower near the riverside and I intend on making you see that. Come fast or else it will get wrinkled.

With this both of them made their way towards the destined place. On the other hand, Pratap had reached there and was waiting for his belle to come. Just then he heard sounds of anklets. He saw ajbde approaching the riverside with saubhagyawati.

BH: Ajabde you wait here I'm coming.

Ajabde: Subho where are you going now after being so excited to come here.?

BH: Just wait here ajabde I'll be back.

Ajabde: Okay be back soon. With a confirming nod, bhago left leaving ajabde alone to wander.

Ajabde was shocked by the way the riverside was decorated. There were tuberoses floating on the river and the foliage of the trees were complimenting the sparse growth of the algae on the river. The railing of the bridge were peppered with creepers entwined on the carved wood. But what caught her attention was the swing that was constructed efficiently by using ropes that were covered by climbers. It was suspended from the tree exactly above the edge of the river. She approached the swing and sat there. After making herself comfortable, she started to swing slowly by applying her meager force. But even the slow swinging was giving her the utmost pleasure. Her legs were touching the river water splashing the water on the lower part of her lehenga. She was enjoying the shower of lilies that were falling on her from the tree above. Her laugh was echoing in the placid environment which was making the whole scenic air merge her laugh as a melody into their winds that were blowing past pratap. Yes, all this was arranged by pratap to make her happy and he then intended to talk to her. But seeing her so free left him frozen at the spot. She was first of all looking ethereal with simple clothes, open hair and no jewellery and then her mesmerizing ear-to-ear smile made him go breathless. The warrior pratap could not move from his place because of a girl. Yes, this girl made him go on his knees and that is why he wanted her all the more. Collecting his dispersed senses, he went from the backside to ajabde so that she couldn't see him.

Suddenly, ajabde felt a strong push from behind. She looked behind and saw pratap smirking at her with the look of where-will-you-go-now. Ajabde abruptly got up from the swing trying to escape KP but poor girl didn't know that she was midway of her one round and so when she got up she was about to fall in in the river when KP rushed there with his lightening speed and caught her in his arms. Ajabde was gently cradled in his strong arms and both shared an intensive eyelock. Pratap started moving towards the grass away from the river with ajabde in his arms. Ajabde had lost all her senses to respond. All she could see was a genuine apology in his eyes. When they reached a safe side, Pratap gently placed ajabde on the ground and remarked,'So you intend on risking your life every time so that I can come and save you huh ajabde?' She blushed at this an said,'No KP I don't expect you to be there for me during my hard times as usual'. Pratap felt the pain in her voice. He said,'Ajabde, I'm sorry. REALLY SORRY. I got carried away by some baseless assumptions and left you. Now, I have realized my mistake. You mean the world to me ajabde,' he continued and held her hand near his chest,'This heart beats for you and currently it is racing because of your touch. Can you feel it?' Ajabe could indeed feel it and blushed at his comment. Pratap, seeing her melt, brought her near to him and held her waist tightly while ajabde lowered her eyes. Pratap concentrated on her luscious lips and came near to her to kiss her. As he was about to kiss her, ajabde turned away leaving pratap only a patch of her silky hair to hold upon. Pratap was confused at her sudden reaction. That was when the disappearing figure of ajabde turned back, smiled and said,'KP you have still a half brinjal to cut. Hope you are successful but yes, brinjals should be cut before they get spoilt.' With that she left. Pratap comprehended her comment easily and mumbled,'More two days ajabde and the brinjal will be cut without getting spoilt.

Precap: KD's true colours

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Posted: 10 years ago
#63
Awesom and I forgive for the delay as you gave me a beautiful prajailcious update Aayu baby 🤗😊

Just make the next update soon as I cannot wait to see KD ki dhulaayi😉
And I win this time - am first to comment😃
Edited by twilightlover29 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: twilightlover29

Awesom and I forgive for the delay as you gave me a beautiful prajailcious update Aayu baby 🤗😊

Just make the next update soon as I cannot wait to see KD ki dhulaayi😉
And I win this time - am first to comment😃

Oh yess you are the first one. Thank you so much yaar. The next update should be soon enough😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aayu_26

Oh yess you are the first one. Thank you so much yaar. The next update should be soon enough😊



yipeee😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Great update dear. I just loved the market scene between pratap and ajab.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: vvishalini

Great update dear. I just loved the market scene between pratap and ajab.

Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#68
Nice exchange between Pratap and Ajabde at the mela. Loved the riverside and the swing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: coderlady

Nice exchange between Pratap and Ajabde at the mela. Loved the riverside and the swing.

Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Guys I'm sooo sorry for the extensive delay. But i was busy with the shopping and packing. Anyways here is the next long update. The next update will be the last. Read, like and comment😊
PART 9
DAY 3
In the morning pratap woke up earlier than ajabde. His house's window was exactly opposite to ajabde's room's window which was unknown to her. As he woke up, he peeped out of his window and saw ajabde sleepng comfortably on her bed. Oh! She looked so serene with sunlight falling on her face making her eyebrows meet together. Just then she woke up on which pratap hid beside the window. Both of them then left for their morning rituals. When pratap came back to his house, he saw ajabde having some diifficulty with pinning up her dupatta. He went to her room shocking ajabde to the core. Ajabde was flushed with embarassement since her dupatta was not on her upper body instead it flayed down below her abdomen as she was trying to place it up proportionately. In her haste to correct her dressing, she forgot to lock the door. Pratap remarked,
Kp: Ajabde it is bad to leave the doors unlocked when correcing the dress. Thank god it is me or else even a man of highest self-control would have lost his senses on seeing a damsel like you in this condition.
Ajabde was not in a condition to say anything. She continued to look down with red creeping all over her cheeks making her irresistible for pratap.
Pratap slowly moved towards her after locking the door and continued,' But i don't have that much self control and even the need to resist my beautiful wife especially when she is in distress. I think i only haveto help you'. With this he came very near to ajabde making her experience butterflies in her stomach. Pratap held the lone dupatta in one hand and pulled it towards him making ajabde trip over and get crushed with his body. Both of them had no gap between them. Pratap slowly left her dupatta and wrapped his arms around her. Ajabde was too shy to say anything. So she gave in. Both of them had a very passionate embrace. Pratap held her tightly assuring her that he will never let her go and also conveyed through his hold how much he missed her. Ajabde on the other hand also conveyed how much she wanted to be with him. Both of them poured their emotions in that hug. After some time which seemed like eternity, they broke apart. Pratap wanted to move further but he knew this was not the time to rush. Ajabde needed some more time. But today will be the last day for her anger. Pratap thought. He moved away from her somiling at her blushing figure. He then took her dupatta and then place it on properly on her right shoulder covering her bare waist elegantly. He then left with this one remark,'Day after tomorrow is the mahapuja ajabde. Be ready in your royal clothes since the kunwar and kunwarani of mewar would be sitting for the puja.' With this he left leaving behind a blushing ajabde.
AFTER LUNCH
Som: Bauijiraj only two days are left for the mahapuja. Have you succeeded in melting bhabhisa?
Kp: Yeah Som she'll be mine again today. Tomorrow she'll be busy for the preparations so i'll have to to do everything today itself. All arrangements done?
Som: Yes baujiraj. As per my sources bhabhisa will be going to the forest to collect the herbs that will be used to make the paste which will be applied to Lord Vishnu on the day of the puja. She'll be accompanied by saubhagyawati bhabhisa who'll leave on the pretext of some work with panditji. You'll be following ajabde bhabhisa and when saubhagyawati bhabhisa leaves you will get enough time to spend with her alone.
Kp: The plan sounds interesting. I think it will work very well.
Som: And dare you mess up things baujiraj. Since you're so good at handling your personal relations, am i right?
Kp: Hmm sarcasm huh? You are right actually i do mess up things but this time it will be my heart speaking and not mind.
Som: Okay i think you should leave now or else it will be too late. All the best baujiraj. Bring bhabhisa back.
Kp: Thank you som. Yes that i will.
FOREST
Subho: Ajabde are you still angry with Kp?
Ajabde: I don't now bhago. But this time, his words, his gestures, they are very genuine. I can see the apology in his eyes. And the worst thing is that i can't even resist him.
Subho: Then why do you not forgive Kp?
Ajabde: I have already forgiven him the day i had a heart to heart talk with him. But i came here in Ujjain to experience a change in atmosphere. I did not want the memories on Kp leaing me to haunt me in Ujjain. Moreover, Lord vishnu's darshan has given me much peace and clarity in thinking. That is why, I have started to give in now. I appreciate his sincere apologies but still, it's my time now. Although Kp has understood that i've given in, he still knows i want a last assurance that he will not leave me again. Now let's see what happens.
Subho then left ajabde on pretext of preparing some work for her husband chakri. Ajabde was left all alone in the forest. She quickly took the herbs and was about to leave when she was stopped in her tracks by none other than her dear husband Pratap.
Pratap: So you want a final assurance that i won't leave you ajabde. That means you've forgiven me.
Ajabde was flustered to knoww that he was following them and had listened to their talks. Even subho was with them. She started her chattering
'No, who said i've forgiven you? Only because i couldn't resist your charms and had to give in to your gestures, that doesn't mean that i have forgiven you'
Pratap: So you agree that i have got charms and that you cannot resist me.
Pratap gaped at her innocence as she bit her lip realising how foolish se was.
Ajabde: No, i din't mean that. Ugh leave my way kp i need to go.
Ajabde made a move to the right but pratap blocked her. She then went towards left but was again blocked by pratap. Irritatingly, she said,'What are you upto Kp? What do you want?'
Pratap smirked and said,' YOU. I want you. Will you give me that?
Ajabde: Kunwar Pratap...
Pratap: Sshh ajabde. I assure you that i won't repeat my stupidity. I already felt the void in my life when i left you. That is why, I came back because i realised your importance in my life. I'm a very selfish person ajabde and i never let loose of the thing i love the most. And you are my life. So why do you think i'll let go of my life? Ajabde I LOVE YOU and won't ever let you go away once more. I know i'm very foolish in all this things but when my heart overshadows my mind, I definitely get the right track. And whenever i'm with you or when i see you, my heart does the talking and moving. And you had said that the heart is never wrong. So ajabde, don't you think i''ll pamper and live my life lovingly? You are my life and i can never let my life slip away from my hands.
Ajabde was overwhelmed listening to her husband. Yes, he spoke his heart out for the first time. Unable to control her tears, she hugged him and said,'I forgive you ajabde. It's like hell for me to live without you. Please don't ever leave me and go. '
Pratap hugged her more tightly and assured,'Never"
They broke apart. Pratap bent down a little and captured her lips in a heart-searing kiss. They poured all their missing and pain of seperation in it which got deepened. After a long time, they broke apart for breathing. Pratap remarked,' You know you looked stunning today morning with your...'
Ajabde said quickly,'Kunwar Pratap!'
Kp: Sorry but i could not handle the urge to compliment you for your beauty just the way i cannot control this' He kissed her again, this time passionately. Ajabde also replied by equal favour.
After they broke apart, She said meekle,'I think we should go now since tonight's dinner has to be prepared by me'. Pratap nodded in a yes and they left.
Precap: True colours of KD

I know i was supposed to show the precap in this part but i thought to give you'll a prajalicious update since i had delayed in updating. I will try to complete my stories before thursday since i'm off to south africa on Thursday😊
There is also a surprise for you'll which will be posted by midnight😃

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