Broken Angel FF Update Pg 53- Complete!!! - Page 4

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Posted: 10 years ago
#31

Thank you for such a hearwarming welcome 😳
Yes I have read all otger stories but commenting was a no no for me 😭
I was hooked to ur stories because of ur speed and u inspired me to actually write so thank you for that 😃
CVs are mad nd I hate them
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Hope you will enjoy my work also and leave my some extra love 🥱
Sorry lagta hae kuch zyada hi lamba ho gaya but I love to talk 😆

Hey aayu
Am glad you enjoy my work - I like to update regularly as I'm a bit free nowadays and so can actually manage it...the others usually do it on their days off from studies and work

No worries about the length - jitna lamba lkikhna ho likho I will respond to all the love 😃
CVs are paan khaoing bhukads😆

Will do and I like your story -its an interesting take- looking forward in reading the next updates
Am really touched that I inspired you - so lets keep on writing and entertaining our friends here at the forum😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Divi.C

Superb story...i still didn't like the idea of bringing ajabde without seeking apology in serial n now she has turned in a pushy cat lady...she was lioness then..hope we can see her that avtar in yourvstory...



Divi I missed you

Thanks and yeah even I'm not a fan of Ajabde after the gauna -I don't like her this despo lady - but we won't have her like that in my story😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: pari0706

So my doubt was right ... Bijolia is in attack... i would love to see theri faces if they reach Bijolia to see Ajabde and other ladies fighting... update fast


and i Dhaman Singh toh gayo



PAri - yup bijolia has been under attack and Ajabde's entry will be an interesting sequence
Dhaman Singh will play a pivotal role - just wait and watch😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#34

Originally posted by: ApekshaM

awesome update... waiting for next.. update soon.. 😊



will do baccha and when are your exams getting over???
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Posted: 10 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: rinall

Read the updates just now ! 😃

Awesome updates, Garima !!! 👏 JB ne kya class li Pratap ki !!

Oh what the hell yar !! 😲😡 India ki 2 wickets down ! 😭😭



Rinal thanks yaara
Abhi toh class leni shuru hui hai 😆

Am toh not watching the match - mujhe to darr lag gaya😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#36
Time for an update...

Chapter 7

The entire court is saddened learning about the difficult situations faced by Bijolia and its people. Rawatji informs the spies that very soon the entire royal family would be visiting Bijolia to make amends with them but the spies tell them not to do that

People of Bijolia are hurt and angry with Mewar and its royal family so we request to re-consider your manner of trip. Bijolia would have revolted long back against Mewar if it hadn't been for Rajkumari Ajabde- she has been taking care of her land and her people for the last 8yrs like a true daughter of the soil. We do not know what she did wrong but we do believe that your son and this family do not deserve an angel like her. We will take your leave as we cannot stay in the place that humiliated our princess- as of now we are Bijolia's soldiers and not your spies

Both spies leave the court and go back to Bijolia. Pratap is overcome with guilt and pain so is everyone else - Rawatji couldn't believe that the girl he whom he chose as her niece has been fighting all by herself because of a misunderstanding created by someone who wants to harm the royal family but the question was who would do that?

GR kept his silence but knew that if he didn't speak up then nothing would happen

GR: So Ranaji what is your plan of action now?

Ranaji: What are we supposed to do Guruji? Bijolia has tensions brewing and if we go then surely there is bound to be friction

GR: But if you do not go then you would not be fulfilling your Dharma- your duty as the protector

Rawatji: Guruji is right Ranaji we need to go to Bijolia and we will go but in disguise so that we can see for ourselves the true reality and assess the situation

Everyone agrees and leaves to make preparations

Jaiwanta Baiji had called the RajPurohitji as she wished to discuss the alternate methods to protect Kunwar Jagmal from the evil omens that were out to get him- on learning about the visit DheerBai and the others also joined in including the two princesses Maan and Chand. Both the princesses were close to Pratap and had no feelings for Jagmal whom they considered as Dharti ka Boj while they called their mother Bhootni. They had met Jaiwanta Baiji and fell in love with the lady- she was BadiMa to them

RajPurohitji was tensed looking at the astrological charts making DheerBai worry more for her son- her son was her lifeline- he was going to fulfil all her dreams and desires and she was willing to go to hell and commit all sins to get him his desires and rights

RajPurohitji: I'm sorry MahaRanisa but the stars have changed course. All the good you earned while performing the rigorous rituals and puja have been negated by the sins committed against innocents by the family

DB: There is something we could do

RP: There are two ways but they are not easy

JB: Please tell us

RP: The first way is that Kunwar Jagmal needs to devote himself in complete and utter supplication for the next 16yrs. He is to lead a very normal life like a devotee and take pilgrimage to all the holy places where he will be required to observe strict fasts- no food and water for 2days, he will have to walk barefoot in the scorching heat and bear the chilly winds- he would have to open himself to nature and her elements completely and not only he even you as his mother will be required to perform certain rituals and observe fasts.

DheerBai is shocked while Chand thinks: there is no way Dharti ka Boj will be able to do that - he is the laziest person in the entire Rajputana - Bhootni hand feeds him his food and does all his tasks

DB: what is the other way?

JB smiles internally while RP says: The second one is also tough Ranisa

Those who have unknowingly or knowingly harmed the innocents need to seek their forgiveness. Once they are forgiven then the innocent person/persons will be required to observe a strict three day fast as well as participate in a puja to please the Gods while Kunwar Jagmal and you still be required to perform tasks throughout till the main puja is completed successfully


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Posted: 10 years ago
#37
really nice all update.
plzzz update sonn
nd plzzz pm me ur every story which u write in future nd for next updates of this story so that i could read
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Posted: 10 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: Marooshmalik

really nice all update.
plzzz update sonn
nd plzzz pm me ur every story which u write in future nd for next updates of this story so that i could read



thanks
I'm so sorry about the PMs it slipped my mind - but I will PM you from the next time regularly 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: twilightlover29



Divi I missed you

Thanks and yeah even I'm not a fan of Ajabde after the gauna -I don't like her this despo lady - but we won't have her like that in my story😉


😊 missed u too .n sorry for not commenting on your last 2 story.. Dam busy these days..but tdy couldn't stop my self to read this one as the title is my most favourite song..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Yooohooo !!!!!!!! What an update, Garima !!! 🤗
Hahaha...Pratap must be on the verge of bursting into a dam of tears !!! 🤣 And I'm happy !! 🥳I'm not one bit sad about his plight 😆😆... Jaisi karni, vaisi bharni !! 😡... He deserves every bit of what he's getting !! 😡 Pratap-US ko to sharm se chullu bhar paani mein doob jaana chahiye 😡🤢

A rousing applause for
JM== Dharti ka boj !!!! and DB==Bhootni 🤣

Dono ko nani yaad aa jaayegi is story mein !!


PS--- accha hai match nahi dekh rahe ho ... kuch dekhne laayak nahi chal raha hai match mein... 🥱 4 wickets down hai yar 😭 I'm praying that the remaining players play extremely well...
Edited by rinall - 10 years ago

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