Broken Angel FF Update Pg 53- Complete!!! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: nikkipeanu

I love it so far! Especially a strong JB and I am looking forward to whatever new avatar you have planned for Ajabde. She was such a strong character in the beginning after the leap, but one wouldn't be able to tell now. I am excited to see what you have planned. Please make Pratap beg a little and give DB what she really deserves :)



Thank you😊
May I please know your name -is it Nikki?
Pratap will have to work a lot and DB well let's say I have a lot planned for her and her son😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: pari0706

hmmm loved JBji... what happened why did the bell ring... was bijolia under attack



Thanks Pari😊 we will see that in the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
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An early update for you all as aaj toh India Vs Australia hai na!!!! go Team India #BleedBlue and haan mero ko reviews zaroor dena

love

Chapter 6

Two men stood on the doors of the palace they had injuries all over their bodies but were still standing. The men used to be Rana Uday Singh's spies who had gone to keep an eye out for the Mughal movement in the Rajputana borders and while returning they came across Bijolia where they both had been hiding for the last 6 years. Seeing his two spies alive made everyone at the court happy but when they demanded answers from him and Kunwar Pratap- the ugly side of truth revealed itself. The truth that cemented the guilt more and made the people realise the duties that had been neglected by the royal family

DheerBai on the other hand was thinking hard about Jaiwanta Bai's sudden appearance and her excuse for leaving the palace. She had left because of the harsh words said by Veer Bai after she (DB) showed the young bride both US and JB spending time together on her would be wedding night and even her letter stated that she was leaving to seek forgiveness for her sins but now Jaiwanta Bai was speaking about the evils that will befall on her Kunwar Jagmal. She is playing mind games with me but I will not let her win this easily DB thought to herself and called for Dhaman Singh her loyal servant

DB: Go and retrieve the letter

DS: What letter Ranisa?

DB: The original letter left by Jaiwanta Baiji on her departure from the palace 8 years ago

DS: There is no letter Ranisa

DB: What do you mean there is no letter?

DS: I mean that there is no letter - you ordered me to destroy all evidence which included MahaRanisa's original letter as well. I destroyed them by turning everything into ashes

DB: What??? Now how will I prove that JB is playing a game that there is nothing wrong with my son

DS: I apologise Ranisa but are you sure? DB glares at him but he continues

DS: Everyone knows that Jaiwanta Baiji is very particular about her puja, all ceremonies, rituals and traditions. She might have left for other reasons but maybe later on she was informed of the impending doom and the bad omens that surround Kunwar Jagmal. You know everything about him Ranisa - he is not a warrior - leave fighting he does not even pick up a sword, he spends his time either terrorizing young children and women or killing innocent small animals - you do remember the way he murdered Rajkumari Chand's rabbit don't you Ranisa

DB: Enough Dhaman Singh. Leave me alone

He leaves while DB is in full on thinking mode. On the other hand people gathered in the courtroom are stunned to see their spies alive. One of the spies comes forward and greets them all, he turns towards Ranaji and says

Ranaji you are our protector- we chose you as our king with the hopes that you will always look after the people and their well-being. Kunwar Pratap your son gave us the vow that whenever the enemies will attack then he will come to fight them then why are we fighting all by ourselves Ranaji? Why this injustice with us?

US, Pratap, Rawatji and everyone is stunned hearing these accusations

Rawatji: what are you saying brother? When have ever Ranaji or Kunwar Pratap not fulfilled their vows- whenever the need arises Ranaji makes sure to send protection and other necessary items

Spy: Forgive Rawatji I should have been a little clearer - why this injustice with Bijolia and its citizens?

Rawatji: Bijolia?

US: We have been sending regular aid to Bijolia for the last 8 years and that includes soldiers for protection

Spy: Really Ranaji then how come Bijolia and its citizens are defending their borders all by themselves against the Afghans. Baadshah Khan has attacked the Bijolia borders 6 times in the last 8years and every time he destroys more and more land. He has already acquired two nearby villages - plundered them, killed the innocent citizens and all that remains now are the ashes

Everyone is shocked to learn of this development

Pratap: Why did not Bijolia sent any messages for help?

Spy: Messages? Kunwar Pratap Bijolia has been sending messages for help every month for the last 6yrs after the first attack by the Afghans. Rajkumari Ajabde herself sent many of those to your name and even Ranaji. In fact we (looking at his partner) ourselves came here to deliver those messages and every time we met the same guy who would take them and not give us any response except remind us that Bijolia was no longer considered a part of Mewar. So we have come here today to ask ourselves - we have been trying to reach you for the last 3 months but today only we got the chance to enter as everyone was rejoicing the fact that MahaRanisa has returned

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Garima express...should I call you by this name?😛😆
I have not yet finished your previous story and you started new one too😛 I'm busy in studies so I may reply late,sorry for that😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: twilightlover29



Hi Aayu its nice to meet you 😊
Welcome to our lovely forum - please feel free to throw tamatar, joota, chappals everythinjg on our CVs when they irritate or try to distort history which they do often😆

Thank you loving my work and I hope your exams went well

I understand but check out the other stories as well in the forum and trust me those guys are like superb and amazing and just fantabulous😃

PS: Just saw your story - waill check it out and leave some love for you 😊


Thank you for such a hearwarming welcome 😳
Yes I have read all otger stories but commenting was a no no for me 😭
I was hooked to ur stories because of ur speed and u inspired me to actually write so thank you for that 😃
CVs are mad nd I hate them
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Hope you will enjoy my work also and leave my some extra love 🥱
Sorry lagta hae kuch zyada hi lamba ho gaya but I love to talk 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So my doubt was right ... Bijolia is in attack... i would love to see theri faces if they reach Bijolia to see Ajabde and other ladies fighting... update fast


and i Dhaman Singh toh gayo
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb story...i still didn't like the idea of bringing ajabde without seeking apology in serial n now she has turned in a pushy cat lady...she was lioness then..hope we can see her that avtar in yourvstory...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update... waiting for next.. update soon.. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read the updates just now ! 😃
Awesome updates, Garima !!! 👏 JB ne kya class li Pratap ki !!

Oh what the hell yar !! 😲😡 India ki 2 wickets down ! 😭😭
Edited by rinall - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: dsm123

Garima express...should I call you by this name?😛😆

I have not yet finished your previous story and you started new one too😛 I'm busy in studies so I may reply late,sorry for that😳



Dhanu no worries studies always come first - take your time in commenting I will wait😊
Garima express - hahahaha nahi re its just me trying to keep the forum active with my little attempts at entertaining everyone


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