Broken Angel FF Update Pg 53- Complete!!! - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: rinall

Yooohooo !!!!!!!! What an update, Garima !!! 🤗

Hahaha...Pratap must be on the verge of bursting into a dam of tears !!! 🤣 And I'm happy !! 🥳I'm not one bit sad about his plight 😆😆... Jaisi karni, vaisi bharni !! 😡... He deserves every bit of what he's getting !! 😡 Pratap-US ko to sharm se chullu bhar paani mein doob jaana chahiye 😡🤢

A rousing applause for
JM== Dharti ka boj !!!! and DB==Bhootni 🤣

Dono ko nani yaad aa jaayegi is story mein !!


PS--- accha hai match nahi dekh rahe ho ... kuch dekhne laayak nahi chal raha hai match mein... 🥱 4 wickets down hai yar 😭 I'm praying that the remaining players play extremely well...



@bold: Woh toh hai and unka title hi unki pehchaan hai tabhi toh select kiya maine inko😆 abhi dekhte jao aage aage kya kya karwaate hain hum unse😉

Pratap is extremely guilt-ridden and yes he wanted to cry but knows that he cannot because his tears will hold no value like he didn't value Ajabde and her tears

@underlined: Damn right you are

Pratap-US: Dono ek jaise hainek dum nalayak - khud koi investigation nahi ki, khud koi thinking nahi ki bas Bhootni ka paan khaaya and khilaaya😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: Divi.C


😊 missed u too .n sorry for not commenting on your last 2 story.. Dam busy these days..but tdy couldn't stop my self to read this one as the title is my most favourite song.
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No worries re I get it sometime we get busy - Broken angel are you talking about the song by Arash?
If yes then it's one of my fav songs as well
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: twilightlover29



@bold: Woh toh hai and unka title hi unki pehchaan hai tabhi toh select kiya maine inko😆 abhi dekhte jao aage aage kya kya karwaate hain hum unse😉

Pratap is extremely guilt-ridden and yes he wanted to cry but knows that he cannot because his tears will hold no value like he didn't value Ajabde and her tears

@underlined: Damn right you are

Pratap-US: Dono ek jaise hainek dum nalayak - khud koi investigation nahi ki, khud koi thinking nahi ki bas Bhootni ka paan khaaya and khilaaya😡


@bold--- 🤣🤣 forget the father-son duo...yaha to is show ke CVs ne bhi Bhootni ke paan ka sevan kar liya hai... 🤢🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: twilightlover29



No worries re I get it sometime we get busy - Broken angel are you talking about the song by Arash?
If yes then it's one of my fav songs as well


Ya it's by arsash.. Though it's in different language i love the each word of it ..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Dharti ka boj 🤣 can't stop laughing

Waiting to see which option db chooses. I love jb.


Can't wait for Ajab's entry. Let me guess you are going to make Ajab save the diguised chittor family
Edited by pari0706 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: pari0706

Dharti ka boj 🤣 can't stop laughing

Waiting to see which option db chooses. I love jb.


Can't wait for Ajab's entry. Let me guess you are going to make Ajab save the diguised chittor family



Ohh well DB is trapped and Dharti ka boj is gayoo re

You are close but we have an interesting situation for her entry planned 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Let's proceed with another update folks!!!


Chapter 8

DheerBai had retired to her room while Uday Singh and Rawatji went to make preparations for their upcoming incognito trip to Bijolia. Pratap stayed back in his mother's room where both Maan and Chand were trying to be really serious but were giving the wrong reactions

Maan: There is no way Dada Bhai that this is going to happen

Pratap: Kunwar Jagmal is our brother and we will do everything in our power to protect him

Maan: That is what I'm saying Dada Bhai - we will do everything but what about the tasks he is required to perform will he be able to do them?

Chand: I'm more worried about Bhootni (everyone looks at her) sorry I meant Ranisa

JB: why won't she be able to do that - all she needs to do is observe fasts and do puja along with some work

Chand: BadiMa but she doesn't observe fasts well not since she fainted

JB looks at her astonished and Maan continues

Maan: There was this huge puja organised where everyone was supposed to keep a 2 day fast (no food and water not even fruits) and DB could not keep it - she complained of a headache within 2hrs and then went to sleep. When she got up she complained of fatigue and nausea and fainted so since then she does not observe fasts and if she has to then she locks herself in her room and does nothing except sleep

JB: Well if she doesn't observe these fasts then there is nothing we can do to protect Kunwar Jagmal

Chand: BadiMa is it alright if we came with you to Bijolia.

Maan: yes BadiMa we would love to help out in every way we can

JB smiles and gives them permission and they leave leaving the mother-son duo behind alone

Pratap: RaniMa

JB: Yes Kunwar Pratap she stares at her son who had grown up so much but right now in the moment he was still the same young boy who was feeling bad that he was not able to save his friend

Pratap: You know everything and yet you want me to speak

JB: By speaking you are acknowledging your faults and mistakes Kunwar Pratap. You are accepting facts that led to disastrous consequences and yes I know I should have spoken to you and not closed the doors on your face but at the time it was essential otherwise I would not have been able to complete my tasks

Pratap: I understand RaniMa but now what do I do? She wouldn't want to meet me after all I did- leaving her alone and helpless on the stairs of the same temple where you closed the doors on me - I walked out on her and when the news of Rao Mamrakh ji's death came I did not even go to attend the funeral rites worried that I might run into her

JB: We all made a lot of mistakes Kunwar Pratap and the time has come to make them alright or at least make an effort from our side to work them out for a better future. Come here

Pratap goes and sits by her on the ground he places his head on her lap and she lovingly rubs her fingers through his hair humming his lullaby while he falls asleep
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
I fatafat read all parts in one go😛 you are express so I too have to read fatafat na😉😆
superb story👏👏👏 I loved the plot very much specially the role of JB and Gurudev⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
DB toh gayi😛
plz make pratap to belo thousands of papad to get ajab back😳😉
waiting for ajab's entry😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
Oooh love this loved the bonding of maan- Chand and jb.

Something special for Ajab's entry huh. Waiting eagerly jaldi jjaldi

Between are you a gujju by any chance?
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
After reading your chapter, I hope one day they bring JB back. She's the perfect maternal character and watching her interact in your story I wish we could see some of that in real life. I love how you insinuated that pratap is basically grown up but emotionally he's still a child. I agree wholeheartedly. He's grown up but will remain a young boy because he never had the emotional relationships necessary to grow up. I can't wait to see what happens in Bijolia :)

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