Praja ss - Truth -Painful & Rewarding Last part Page 9 10/1/15

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Hi all,
I have had this idea in my mind for a long time now but never got around to actually typing it up😆 so finally here it is i hope you like it

Part 1

The story starts at the point where Pratap finds out that Baijilal is Ajabde on the day of donating jewellery and decides to leave. He writes a letter to Patta and the thing that is different is that he successfully leaves before Ajabde comes there to stop him.

On his way he is angry but sees Meera ma and ends up at Vaikunth (I know that geographically vaikunth is not in between Bijolia and Chittor but please for the story lets assume it is). Once he reaches there he finds his mother near a temple. So he goes near her and greets

"Khama gani"

She turns around to greet him but before that he touches he feet. As he does that she feels something

"Pratap?"

He gets up with tears in his eyes,

"Ranima"

She gets really happy and touches her face and shoulder.

"aap... kitne bade ho gaye hai ap. Kaise hai ap... yeh sab chodiye aap chaliye bhojan ka samay ho gaya hai na aur aap lambi yatra se aye lag rahe hai, chaliye, humare saath chaliye."

She takes him with her and feeds him.

"Abb bataiye sab kaise hai mahal me?"

"Sab theek hair anima, dajiraj aur chotima apko yaad karte hai. Aur ab toh humare mahal mein humari do behnein bhi hai. Maan kawar aur chaand kawar."

"Acha, yeh toh bohot achi baat hai. Lekin apne yeh nahi bataya ki humari pyari si beti, Ajabde kaisi hai. Aur aap dono ke bache hai ya abhi bhi hume dadima nahi banaya apne?"

At this Pratap gets up and turns his face before speaking with barely supressed anger

"Rani ma apka dil bohot bada hai, jis ladki ne apse apka sab kuch chin kar apko apne hi mahal se nikal diya aap unko aaj bhi apni beti manti hai?"

Hearing this JB's face pales and with feeling of nervousness holds Pratap's hand and turns him before asking

"Yeh kya keh rahe hai aap. Kis.. kiski baat kar rahe hai aap Pratap?"

"Ajabde... unhi ki wajah se aapko majbur ho ke chittor chodna pada lekin aaj bhi apke man mein unke liye itna prem? Kyun rani ma?

"Ajabde ke karan? Yeh apse kisne kaha?"

"Apke patra se yeh baat sidh ho gayi thi"

"Shant ho jaiye aur yahan aram se baith kar hume puri baat bataiye. Kya hua tha humare jaane ke baad mahal mein?"

Pratap follows her orders and tells her everything till Ajabde's fathers death and US's apmaan and how everyone avoided going to Bijolia personally

"Hey bhagwaan, yeh humse kaisa paap ho gaya. Pratap, yeh baatein shayad hume aapse nahi karni chahiye. Lekin aab ap bade ho chuke hai aur kyunki iss baat ka prabhav apke vivahit jivan par itna gehra pada hai isiliye apko yeh janana avashayak ho gaya hai"

She tell him what she was planning for VB and what happened and why she left.

Pratap didn't know what to feel, and do but in a scared voice tells her about the current situation of bijolia. After this they decide to go to Chittor first clear all this and then go to Bijolia with sena.

So they go to Chittor and US gets very happy and asks JB to come inside. But she tells him that she will only come to this mahal after she has said her side. They then ask for privacy and only JB and US goes to a kind of out house outside the palace. Here she tells everything to US, including current conditions in Bijolia. While Pratap meets Rawatji and tells him everything about Bijolia's situation. Rawatji goes to get ready for war, but at that time US says that he will go to Bijolia first and sort out personal problems and they should come afterwards with the sena. Otherwise Bijolia people might think we are attacking them.

Pratap agrees but says that it wouldn't be safe to go as Rana US so they decide to go in disguise. Pratap still as Ashwapalak and US as his father. But JB says even she will come as their mother. Even after both Pratap and US says no she is firm. So they go with a palkhi for JB. But as they are about to reach the border of Bijolia they start going on feet and only three of them go forward.


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so how was it? i hope you like it... please reply, if i get atleast 5 replies i will post the next part tomorrow


Part 1 - above

Part 2 - Page 2

Part 3 - Page 3

Part 4 - Page 4

Part 5 - Page 5

Part 6 - Page 6

Part 7 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Please do continue with more updates. It was nice reading the updates and next part should be even better.
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Originally posted by: arpit2525

Please do continue with more updates. It was nice reading the updates and next part should be even better.


hey thanks for the comment i will write more soon and hope you will like it... the Praja romance might be slow as i want to get the misunderstanding sorted first but it will come for sure.😉
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Very nice start plz continue ur SS !!
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Wow. Its superb.. i didn't knew u write also.. itsamazing.. in serial they r not showing prtap regretting n all infact ajabde was asking for forgivness in last episode n i hate it soo much.. stupid prtap...humm..
But the story is good continue soon..
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great its good do continue !! 😊 steps to clear Ajabde's name ...
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Originally posted by: prishna_fan

Very nice start plz continue ur SS !!


thank you will post he next part today 😳

Originally posted by: sweetmogini

Nice ..please continue soon


Thank you


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Originally posted by: Divi.C

Wow. Its superb.. i didn't knew u write also.. itsamazing.. in serial they r not showing prtap regretting n all infact ajabde was asking for forgivness in last episode n i hate it soo much.. stupid prtap...humm..

But the story is good continue soon..


Hey Divi ... so glad to see your comment here 😃... well i occasionally write i have written some more Praja scenes and FF as well ... about Ajabde apologising😡 i knew it i just knew it hence i didn't watch the episode and am trying not to watch till the misunderstanding is sorted😭 ... so my ffs are my way of keeping my mind.😆😉

here are the links


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Originally posted by: ash41900

great its good do continue !! 😊 steps to clear Ajabde's name ...


Thank you ... i will post my next part today only


the next part is below😊
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Part 2

US, JB and Pratap had to pass a forest but are caught in jaal soon and were handing from the tree (similar to how Ajab trapped Pratap and Chakrapani but with stronger jaal) and before they understand anything, they are surrounded by 10 Afghan soldiers.

"humare ilake mein ane ki jurrat?"

"ruko Mansoor, inke saath toh ek aurat bhi hai, dekhe to."

And they start going towards JB. Both Pratap and US are trying to come out of the jaal. But before anyone can do anything an arrow comes between that man and the place where JB was hung.

When Pratap look to the place where the arrow came from he sees Patta's jija with 4 soldiers. She is on horse whilst soldiers on foot. He is scared and relieved. Scared as they are only 5 people and the afghan's outnumber them 2 to 1. But relieved to get help.

He tries to break the jaal but it was much stronger than he thought.

"kisne ki itni jurrat. Samne aao."

At this Ajabde and her soldiers come forward and without another moment all 10 soldiers attacks them. the 4 soldiers each fight with one afghan leaving Ajabde fighting with 6. They all surround her and attack her at once. But she takes their swords on her sword (like how she did during BK's attack on Bijolia to kidnap Ajab) and she manages to defeat all 6 and help one of her soldier.

After brief fight Ajabde and her soldiers manage to kill all with no casualty. Just then Patta comes on horse with 4 more soldiers on foot.

"Patta, un teen logo ko upar se neeche utariye sheeghra."

"ji jeeja"

US and JB are very impressed with this display of bravery and sword fight. But are stunned when they heard the brave soldier speak in a female voice. That yoddha was a female?

Soon all three were released and JB had a ghoonghat. So Ajab was not able to recognise them, but she recognised Pratap as Ashwapalak.

"Ashwapalak? Aap?"

US and JB understood that this is patta and his jija that Pratap was talking about. And were very impressed with them. but decided to let Pratap handle the situation.

"Jee haan hum"

"parantu aapne toh hume patra mein likha that ki aap yahan nahi reh sakte?"Patta asked

"haan voh humare parivar par kuch sankat aa gaya tha, jiska sandesh hume mila, toh hum vahi gaye the. Aur humare mata pita ka vahan Chittor ke pass rehna surakshit nahi laga hume toh hum unhe lekar wapas yahan aap logon ki sahayta hetu aa gaye"

"Theek hai ashwapal, chalye yahan se. Yahan par rehna khatre se khali nahi hai. Afghan iss khshetra ko apne kabse mein lene ke liye prayatna sheel hai. Aur suraj bhi dhalne wala hai. Isi liye uchit yehi hoga ki hum vapis bijolia chale. Hume baijilal ko yeh bhi batana hai ki aap apne mata pita ke saath laut aye hai. Uske pashchat age kya karna hai yeh ve hi batayeingi." Ajabde commanded

"jee theek hai chaliye."

"rukiye, aap humare ghode pe sawari kijiye, rasta lamba hai." Ajabde tells looking at JB.

"hum? Parantu aap?" JB asks

"jija humare ghode pe sawari kar lengi" Patta replies.

To this JB agrees and sits on horse with both legs on one side as she cannot sit normally with her dress lol ;) and they all slowly goes towards Bijolia.

As they reach Bijolia's checkpoint Ajab gets down from the horse and JB follows. Ajab removes the cloth covering her face and orders the soldiers to tighten the security for night.

When Ajab is going to mahal after dropping everyone at Patta's house, US stops her and tells her that he wishes to apologise to Baijilal and Rani HB personally. First on behalf of the king for not helping and then for making Pratap leave Bijolia for sometime in such terrible situation.

But Ajab refuses saying she will give the message but before US says anything elseJB intervenes and folds her hands to request her.

Ajabde holds her hands and asks her not to do this as she is elder to her and she (ajab) respects her like her mother. JB tells her that if that is the case then accept her request.

Ajab agrees and takes them to Mahal even Patta joins in saying he wants to be there as well. Just as they enter the mahal, a dasi comes

"Khama ghani Baijilal, Ranima aap hi ka intazar kar rahi thi, ve bohot chintit hai aur hume adesh diya hai ki aap jaise hi aye apko unke pass le jaya jaye."

"theek hai. Hum jaate hai unse milne. Aur suno, aaj raat yeh saab yehi rahenge toh inke bhojan aur rehne ka prabandh kiya jaye."

"Jee baisa"

"aap log aiye, hume yakin hai ki maa aap logo se milkar khush hogi." And goes towards her mother's room

However, US, JB and Pratap are stunned to know that the female warrior that they were so impressed with was none other than Baijilal aka Ajabde!

But before they could understand anything Patta speaks up

"chaliye, ranima se milte hai."

And they all walk as if in trance. They realise that the danger is very big and are shocked to know that due to their misunderstandings their daughter in law is forced to go out and fight like a warrior. The kuwarni of Mewar has to fight for her life. They did not realise when they reached HB room.

Edited by pari0706 - 10 years ago

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