Post Leap Drabble - What If ... Praja OS

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Hi all,
here I am back with my nonsensical stories.. but i have been told not to delete any of my ideas... so i have decided to share this... this is basically one scene that came to my head after watching hte episode where Pratap is impressed by Ajab (not knowing who she is) but thinks that Ajab was weak


I hope you like it


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Patta offers Pratap a place to live when he realises that its due to him that Pratap has lost his job as care taker of horses.

The preparations of Diwali celebrations are going on in full swing. Pratap was trying hard to find out who is Baijilal and why are they preparing for Diwali, but did not find anything.

On other hand DB has sent out her men to kill Pratap and asked them to dress in such a way that no one recognises them to be from Chittor.

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Ajab is at Patta's house to discuss something but they are informed that there is an attack. So Pratap and Patta leaves and Ajab follows after changing into warrior's outfit. However, by the time Ajab reaches all the Afghans were defeated and Patta was helping the villagers get their belongings and getting first aid.


"aap fikar mat kijiye, ve log ja chuke hai" Pratap assured

"dhanyavad, parantu ve log dubara avashya ayenge. Inki fitrat mein hai"

"toh phir aap Chittor sandesh kyun nahi bhejti, sahayta ke liye?"

"kai patra bheje, parantu kisi ek ka bhi uttar nahi mila hume."

"Kab bheja apne patra?"

"pichle che (six) saal se har mah humne sahayta ke liye patra bheja hai"

Pratap was shocked with this information. He was about to say something when Ajab pushed him away and killed two men. But she was attacked from behind and got hurt before she had time to defend herself. Pratap quickly killed those two men who attacked from behind.

When he turned back he found that Ajab had a deep cut on her upper arm. He quickly called Patta who called other villagers and made arrangements to take his Jija (who by now was unconscious) back to his house.

"Jaiye aur inki masa ko suchit kijiye ki yeh ghayal hai. Aur aap shighra jayiye aur vaidji ko le kar aiye."

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They all went to Patta's house, and Pratap stood outside along with everyone else. This girl had saved his life. She was so brave so ... so.. something he wanted in his wife. But look at what Ajabde was, a bheegi billi. There was a time when he loved everything about Ajab but now... he hated any thing and everything about her.

As he was thinking this suddenly he saw Hansamasiji coming towards the house. He wondered why she was here, and where was this girl's mother.

But as HB came closer, vaidji had come out,

"Aab kaisi hai Ajabde vaidji?"

"ghav kafi gehra tha ranima, parantu ab ve theek hai. Humne unhe neend ki aushadhi di hai, taki ve aram kar sake. Unhe vishram ki avashykta hai."

"Krishna ka lakh lakh shukra hai ki ve theek hai."

Saying so she addressed the crowd.

"Aapki Baijilal theek hai, parantu unhe vishram ki avashyakta hai. Hum ap sabko unki sehat ki jankari dete rahenge. Aab aap sab ghar ja sakte hai."

As she went in after saying that

Pratap and Chakrapani stood there frozen. Trying to get their heads around the idea that Ajabde is Baijilal and she is none other than the brave girl they were so impressed with.


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zzinia2411 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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this is maddd cuttteee!!!! loveee it! you should definitely write more on PrAja!!!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wow...it was too good.. i would really love to know whats going on in Pratap's mindwhen he find out about Ajab!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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amazing! please write more about this and also about when Ajab comes to know about Pratap. Because Cvs se abhi to koi hope nahi hain. They'll take months for just revealing the IDs 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So breathtakingly amazing!!! Please continue =)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thanks all... not sure if i will continue this but i m glad you liked it
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Posted: 10 years ago
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itss simply wow..!! 😊
please please do continue...
really liked it 👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome...
Love to read more about Pratap's thinking about Ajabde
please do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing story 👏👏 i'm loving it 😳

Pratap hell shocked no doubt his bhigi billi became Sherani 😆

Update soon...looking forward 😃


P.S. if u don't mind then plz edit the title & write Post leap so every1 knows it. Else ppl will get confuse 😊 rest all is perfect !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Superb os. Plz post more on PrAja. Wud love to read them.

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