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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Thanks to you dear for giving us such a nice start for story of Kunwar Pratap & Ajabdeh



I can't tell you how much it means, thank youuu sooo much 😳 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PrAja :) Part 2
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Ajabde singing akhiyan hari darshan ko pyasi
Pratap turns around the corridor smiling and follows that beautiful voice he knows is ajabs
He sees her and stand beside her with both hands joint together and can't stop staring at her ... Her long pretty hair, her eyes closed, she looked like a angel he thought
US: WOWW, such a pure innocent voice, Jb no no, this is not her voice then...who?
JB: (preparing for her puja)
Wow, who is this?
( JB and US clash and then they both say)
Who is this with such a sweet voice

They see that it's ajab and then they both look at each other and smirk
And join Pratap and ajabde behind them

A: Akhiyan hari darshan ko pyasi
Akhiyan hari darshan ko pyasi
Dil kyun chahat kamal nayan ko
Nish din rehat udaasi
Akhiyan hari darshan ko pyasi
Akhiyan hari darshan ko pyasi.
( she finished her puja and is shocked to see them all)

US: very good, ajabde
JB: wow, you are really good and sing very well, just like your mother told me
P:yes yes, rani maa ajabde is amazing, just too good. Even in bijolia when I and chak...
(All three JB US and Ajabde look confused)
P:ummm...anyway...
A:(goes and takes blessings from US and JB)
JB: wow ajabde wow, your voice is so sweet and...
P: just like yours rani maa
Us: (he is very impressed by ajab and thinks as her as there daughter-in-law but realises he wants more power so will stick to what he decided and get pratap and phool married)
Pratap I need to talk to you now
P: yes
(They both go away from ajab and JB is looking suspicious)
Us: I have chosen you a wife
P: what, but how and who
Us: phoolkanwar
(Phool is listening to the convo)
P: no, sorry but no, phool is just a friend nothing more and nothing less.
US: but...
P: forgive me for raising my voice, but I can't marry phool..NEVER
US: who will you marry!!! You declined all the other princesses and phool, then who
P: (he takes US JB and ajab to the main palace room-phool follows still teary and calls all his friends to confess his feelings)
Chakripaani: Why have you called us all here friend
P: because I have something very important to confess
US: then go ahead...WE HAVENT GIT MUCH TIME( he's verrryyy angry because pratap disagreed :/)
P:( walks towards ajab) A girl who I know truly loves me, someone with long beautifull hair, such worried but gorgeous eyes, who's always there to solve any problem she or the ones she loves face,someone who is known by the name...Ajabde
(Everyone Is shocked- mostly ajab)
US: so do you want to marry ajabde!?
P:( comes a little closer to ajab and goes down on his knees and eye lock )
Ajabde... I know that you too have feelings for me, and I just want to let you know ajab that... Ajabde...I.i..love you
(JB looks at US and smirks-she knew it all along I mean she is his mother ;) )

And for phool - Zor ka jhatka haaye zoron se laga, haan laga ❤️ ❤️ lol love PrAja sorry guys had exams----so I didn't get much time to do this but hope you liked it ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update. Pratap proposing Ajabde by going on his knees!! Its a little to filmy! But no problem, after all its a fiction! And its fun to read. Ab shows mein yeh sab dekhne ko kahan milega? HEhehehe!
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely read, looking forward 2 next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Celana

Nice update. Pratap proposing Ajabde by going on his knees!! Its a little to filmy! But no problem, after all its a fiction! And its fun to read. Ab shows mein yeh sab dekhne ko kahan milega? HEhehehe!
Please continue soon and thanks for the pm.



😃 haha thank you and I will update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice part and i am waiting for ajab reaction for pratap proposal...

continue soon and do pm if u can
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: niveasree

nice part and i am waiting for ajab reaction for pratap proposal...

continue soon and do pm if u can



Yes I surely will pm you and thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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suprb updt realy vry romantc..
lvd it updt nxt.1 n pm me..
gd bless u
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: khusam

suprb updt realy vry romantc..
lvd it updt nxt.1 n pm me..
gd bless u



Thank you means ALOT 😃 and I will surely pm you :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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res...
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unres... :D
bhai...bang on proposal!!!!
i so wish that Ajab doesn't act mahatma here... but i so love the confession part!!!
and the part 1...it was so cute...update soon dear... :)
Edited by Aru_A - 11 years ago

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