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Posted: 11 years ago
#41

Thanks 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
👏superb
hope yeh drama jaldi katam ho
this is far more better than serial bcz waha toh unhe koi akele hi nahi chodthe😡
awesome😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43
Wow it's superb!!! I started watching mp since only a few weeks and love praja! I hope they get married in ur story as in the serial Idk wen they'll marry! 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#44

PART 4 prAja...enjoy

A: the reason Kunwar pratap...your asking me for a reason then ok, the reason is that you have to marry phool in order to strengthen mewar
P: (pratap turns away because he's so angry and is scared he may say something wrong to ajab)stop it Ajab, I don't want to marry phool, I will fight until my last b...
(Ajab interrupts)
A: I have full faith in you kunwar pratap, I know you are so brave,strong,a person who will sacrifice his life to save Mewar from Akbar but then why can't you...you said you love me...if you can sacrifice your life then why not your love..and
P: STOP IT, you've said enough(pratap turned toward Ajab and we have a PrAja eye-lock )
I'd lose my life, but I don't want to lose my love, because my love is what gives me strength, gives me a reason to smile and your telling me to get rid of that strength(he goes away with tears)
A: (all the tears she had stopped for days had flown out and her knees were so weak she fell to the ground) why...every time i try to do something good why does the opposite happen, how do I tell you Kunwar pratap that I love you,not for days but for months...though my heart doesn't want him to marry phool,my mind can't resist but say it because a princess or any royal person cannot put love first,it has always been ways to defeat others,how...what do I do(she felt so confused and trapped from all four sides,first her friendship with phool,second Akbar taking over mewar but less chance if pratap married phool,JB wanting to see her son happy and finally her love...she closed her eyes and didn't want to open them because today she actually felt weak,she felt trapped...
And there was phool,listening to all of this,with a shocked face hiding behind the curtains feeling guilty she couldn't realise Ajabde and pratap's feelings for each other,to say a puddle of tears is not enough to describe how much she was crying,even she didn't want to believe it but phool the truth hurts naa?
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The dark sky stared right back at kunwar pratap as he glared into it, he went into the abyss of memories...how they first met,her beautifull long shining hair,her twinkling eyes which he can look into and know what is bothering her but today why couldn't he read her eyes, why couldn't he look into them without feeling angry(but he didn't know it was because he really loved her and she cared for phool not him he thought)

A:(she somehow found the ability to stand up and tell kunwar pratap the truth,because only then he will understand her point of view-she went to his room)
"Kunwar pratap" she said in a soft voice
P:now what do you want from me, haven't you asked for too much already,I don't want to talk to y..(ajab interrupts)
A:I LOVE YOU KUNWAR PTARAP(prAja looonnggg vala eyelock)❤️
Yes, not since today but since I saw you,I have loved you since, I'm sure you've sacrificed so much already but just one more sacrifice
P:now that I know you to feel the same I will never marry that phool(phool followed ajab and is listening and is sad but VERRY surprised ajab loved him all this time but never let her know,and realised that day when she hugged her with tears,those tears weren't for the reason ajab said but because she had to choose between new and old bonds...and she chose old)
A:Kunwar pratap...I too love you, but isn't out love for the whole of Mewar more...please sacrifice
P:even now you only see me sacrificing not yourself, this is why I fell in love with you not phool...

THIS IS IT FRIENDS, hope you liked and I promise next part you will be surprised ;) what do you think will phool sacrifice,or will ajab unknowingly actually save her love,or will pratap say no to phool and marry ajab...keep guessing anything can happen this is fiction heheheheh 😊 ❤️ 😛
Edited by Realtalk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45
Wow realtalk superb loved it now a fast update cannot keep guessing hehehe
Edited by jyotic74 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46
Wow, loved all 4 parts. Pls update soon. Waiting veryyy eagerly!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: jyotic74

Wow realtalk superb loved it now a fast update cannot keep guessing hehehe


Thank you,my name is Laila and I will try to update ASAP 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: PrajaRox

Wow, loved all 4 parts. Pls update soon. Waiting veryyy eagerly!!!!!



Means a lot thanks sooo much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#49
If uv written other praja then pls tell me where to find them
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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: PrajaRox

If uv written other praja then pls tell me where to find them



This is the only one I have wrote yet...part 1-4 and when I do hopefully soon I will inform you(pm you) next week I will add another one 😃

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