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Posted: 11 years ago
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JB: I have found my daughter-in-law, and I'm sure pratap will also agree
US: well who is she, it takes a lot to impress you, and I know 😆
JB:(blushes 😳 ) umm, yes ajabde...ajabde will be pratap's wife and my(pratap interrupts)
P: WHAT!!! 😡 (he's angry and confused) With ajabde, never.. She doesn't even know what she wants and what she doesn't
(Ajabde can hear but ignores it and carries on with what she was doing)
JB: pratap calm down, we can talk about this calmly...
US: this much anger, one day you'll have to marry pratap, I mean if me and (jb interrupts..."what he means is pratap you will marry one day")
😃
P:(he has flashbacks about how ajab has been ignoring him and gets even more angry)
No rani maa, I don't want to marry, I am happy the way I am right now, and ajabde she never knows what she likes or who she likes
(Jb and us look at each other and smile)
A:( she's had enough..and because she loves him deep down she is very upset with what he has said) STOP!!! I haven't came all the way from bijolia just to marry you and for your information I have no feelings for you anyway...
😲
Awkward silence
( ajab feels bad about what she said and that to In front of jb and US
Jb: calm down
US:both of you calm down
Pratap and ajabde at the same time say: sorry 😆 and then there's a eye lock...
Jb and Us cough and prAja go back to do what they were doing
Jb: what do you think Rana ji, will this couple...
US:yes, I do
(US is looking at Jb saying I do, US it's not time for u to romance it's time to get PrAja together) 😛 😆
P:(mumbling to himself) what have I said, ajabde must be feeling very bad, I should go apologise
(And theirs ajabde saying..)
A: what have I done, even In bijolia Kunwar Pratap felt bad because I told him to leave and now.. I need to apologise
(They both go to see each other and ajabde had a thaali of flowers in her hand and they both clash- the flowers fall and don't stop falling on them 😳 ) PrAja eyelock and there smiles :D 👏
A:(first one to break eyelock...always lol)
S..s..sorry K..kunwar pratap I didn't mean what I said
P: me too, I am very sorry, when I hear about my marrige w..w...with you I didn't know
(Awkward silence again...!!)
A:it's ok(ajabde forgets about phool liking pratap and gets lost in his eyes)
P:ajabde ajabde!!!! 😆 😉
A:yes yes...sorry
P: I needed to ask you something
(Jb and US watching behind curtains smirking )
A: ji...
P: when I gave you the mala, why didn't you accept it, honestly I felt very bad Ajabde
😭
A: I'm sorry I'm VERRY sorry...( she forgets about phool 😃 )
And tells him all the mala story (FINALLYYY)
JB and US look at each other and say: perfect
P:(comes closer to ajab and ajab breathes heavier)
A: Kunwar pratap
P: stop ajabde(he's really close and takes his mala in slow motion and puts it around ajabdes neck)
Jb imagines the same wedding scene as Hanse Masi ji did 😆 😳
US: what happened, are you ok
JB:(crying) yes, infact I'm VERRY happy

BACK TO PrAja
A: blushing and smiling (hehe)
P:(holds her hand) you are my friend, a very close friend Ajab, and I don't want to lose this friendship...ever so promise me if ever there is a misunderstanding between us we will still fight for our friendship
A: I promise

THATS PART 1 friends hope you all like it... I can't wait for you to read when they express their feelings to each other 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh dear I really want ajabdeh to forget about that ignorant phool bai .nice part 1
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Wow buddy. I just loved it. Very very very much. Do update the second part and please pm me when you do so.
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Very nice start. Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: KratikaTheDiva.

Oh dear I really want ajabdeh to forget about that ignorant phool bai .nice part 1



Me too...and thank you 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: iHarshilP

This one was perfect.



Thank you sooo much 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Celana

Wow buddy. I just loved it. Very very very much. Do update the second part and please pm me when you do so.



Thank uuu...and I will pm u as soon as i update to part 2 😊 😃 thank you again
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Means alot,thank you 😊 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nethravathi

Very nice start. Update soon



Thank you and I will try to update very soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Realtalk



Thank you and I will try to update very soon 😊

Thanks to you dear for giving us such a nice start for story of Kunwar Pratap & Ajabdeh

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