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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aru_A

res...

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unres... :D
bhai...bang on proposal!!!!
i so wish that Ajab doesn't act mahatma here... but i so love the confession part!!!
and the part 1...it was so cute...update soon dear... :)



Thank you so much...and I'm a girl lol 😆 my names Laila haha but you can call me bhai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Realtalk


Thank you so much...and I'm a girl lol 😆 my names Laila haha but you can call me bhai 😆


khikhikhikhikhikhikhikhi!!!!!
thanks for giving me the liberty, girl(i know ;P)... 😆😉😛
Actually...bhai and bro...very common with me...i address everyone, girls or guys with bhai or bro...take it like my habit... 😲
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 3 PrAja:)

US is shocked and can't believe what he is hearing in fact everyone is shocked...but mostly Ajab,for a minuet she can't stop looking in his eyes, full of beauty and honesty...but then has flashbacks about how phool said she loves pratap(sorry guys but drama is bound to happen in prAja's life but don't worry ending will be happy)

Ajab moves back realising she can't hurt phool for pratap but inside she wants to tell him she loves him and wants to be his wife,she wants to be by his side and overcome the troubles in life with his hand in her's- but when she thinks she's can't...it's impossible she is hurt and angry and accidentally says...

A: NOO what are you saying, do you even know what you've done...why do you always cause trouble in my life,I have told you before and I'll tell you again, I have NO feelings for you and I never can

JB is in tears, she can't believe ajab has said so much and yet she knows it may be ajab who's saying all this but there has to be a reason.
Pratap is crying,remembering all the memories in bijolia, the nice ajab..what happened he thought for a second

JB: I think we should leave these two alone to sort out the matters which only concern them( but JB secretly wanted to stay and tell ajab to tell the truth that she loves pratap)
They all leave except our PrAja 😉
Ajab was running to get out of this situation when all of a sudden her scarf fell of...ajab is motionless and doesn't know what to do

P:(pratap walks slowly towards ajab, she was breathing heavily...he picks up the scarf and turns ajab around, then in slow motion puts the scarf how it should be...and he's doing all this while staring at ajabdes worried face...he thinks in his mind"how can someone be so beautiful,such expressive eyes and long flowing silky hair,an angel" he fixes her scarf for her
A: T..t..thank y..you
(And turns away)

P:what do you think ajab..that you'll hide your feelings and I won't know, ajab why are you doing this, in bijolia from the first day I fell in love with you, you were different, very different but that's why I love you..you don't look like a princess but know that there are no words to describe your beauty. You were my friend which I could share anything with...Ajabde, why(and starts crying because he suddenly feels like he's not worthy of such a ideal wife)

A:(turns around) it's not because your not worthy(she knows he's thinking this) but kunwar pratap there is a reason why we can't be together, there are some things that are better unsaid

P: Ajab but I won't stop loving you no matter what the reason
(PrAja loonggg eyelock)

(all the time first to break the eye-lock)
A:I should go I have a lot of work
P:stop...I won't let you go anywhere until you tell me the reason to why you have to stay quite about the love you feel...
A:the reason is...

Hope you guys enjoyed it

😉 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aru_A



khikhikhikhikhikhikhikhi!!!!!
thanks for giving me the liberty, girl(i know ;P)...😆😉😛
Actually...bhai and bro...very common with me...i address everyone, girls or guys with bhai or bro...take it like my habit...😲



Hheehehee okay 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oyeee!!!!!! Mahatma!!!!!!!!!!
and i have a feeling that she will act mahatma again while telling him the reason in the next part...
But i always have a favourite...PrAja alone was...i dont have words for it...slow motion...
And what happened to Phool,wasn't she watching from behind the curtains????
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loved the first part ❤️
Good that Ajabbdeh forgot abt Phool
Continue pls
Do you pm ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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2nd part :
awesome confession
luvd it <3
phool🥱
-going to read part 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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3rd part :
luvd it :)
no don't let ajab tell the reason pls
phool kanwar
update soon pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Aru_A

Oyeee!!!!!! Mahatma!!!!!!!!!!

and i have a feeling that she will act mahatma again while telling him the reason in the next part...
But i always have a favourite...PrAja alone was...i dont have words for it...slow motion...
And what happened to Phool,wasn't she watching from behind the curtains????


Thanks buddy and you'll just have to wait for the next part to find out if phool was listening!! Hehe 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanz_sejal

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">2nd part :</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">awesome confession</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">luvd it <3</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">phool🥱</font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2"></font>
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">-going to read part 3</font>



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