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Posted: 7 years ago
#71
nice promo dear
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the scene well written with song
and with pictures..
nice update
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Chp 5: ArYa Engagement And Twin Truth

Shanaya was walking in the rain, just then a car stopped before her and a man with greenish yellow eyes came out with umbrella towards her. 'Watch where you go, I would've mistakenly injured you,' he said and Shanaya felt familiar with his tone. 'But you didn't, so its OK,' she replied and was about to go. 'I can drop you if you want,' he said and she stopped and turned towards him. 'I don't sit in stranger's car,' she replied and turned her back towards him.

Jism ka ruhh sey,
Kyun lagey hai faasla,
Mein hu yaa bass hai meri,
Yeh parchaiyaan...

Hai bichi bass zameen,
Rastey hai lapata,
Lawas hun main ankaha,
Hai yeh saachayian..

[Pre-Chorus]
Mere seeney ki khala,
Jaise janamo ki baala,
Kyun na saasoin sey mitey,
Hai ye tanhaiyaan...

[Chorus]
Koi aandha sa kuann,
Mere aander hai chupa,
Mujhe milti hii nahi..
Meri gehraiyaan...

'Once we get to know each other then you will? Well I don't need to as I know you,' he said and she turned to him again. Her big round eyes stared at his eyes. 'Oh come on, stop joking, how will a mere stranger like you know me? I told you I will go by myself so stop trying to convince me,' she said and he showed her a photograph. She stared at the photograph and then at him. A smile came on her lips as she realized who he was.
'Sh-Shaurya, you here? When and how you came here? Buddhu, why didn't you tell me before? I can't believe my eyes.'

Sard si aahate meri humnava..
Dard ki humnava meri dastaan..

Raat ko bandh kar rakh du mai kahi..
Roshni ka seeraa jo mile kahi..

[Verse 3]
Aainaa odhe khamoshiyaan,
Bat mujse ye karta nahi..
Kyu lage ye muje har dafa,
Mai chalu aur thame ye zamin..

[Pre-Chorus]
Mere seeney ki khala,
Jaise janamo ki baala,
Kyun na saasoin sey mitey,
Hai ye tanhaiyaan..

[Chorus]
Koi aandha sa kuann,
Mere aander hai chupa,
Mujhe milti hii nahi..
Meri gehraiyaan...

'Yes its me, now sit in my car, I will tell everything on the way,' he said and she nodded smilingly and sat on the passenger seat while he sat on the driving seat. She rested her head on his shoulder smilingly. 'I came here yesterday in search of you, right now I was just driving in the rain as I love it and look at my beautiful fate, I found you also, but don't worry, mom isn't here,' he said and she smiled. 'Where shall I drop you?' he asked. 'Hospital,' she replied. 'But why?' he asked dazed.

'Because Maya isn't in a good mental state, even Durga has got a plastic surgery after the recent accident, don't know anything about Aarohi, Arjun is also very tensed for Maya, Kabir and Sanjana were already married and they betrayed my sister and what not? Leave all this, drop me outside City Hospital,' she said and he drove all the way to the hospital and stopped the car. 'Bye Shaurya,' she said and stepped down the car and waved at him and went. Shanaya walked inside the hospital and towards Maya's ward. She saw that Arjun was sitting there with hand on his forehead as if he was tensed.

'What happened? Why are you so tensed?' she asked. 'Maya was crying in sleep and wasn't waking up, she muttered that Kabir please leave me, give me my daughter, I m very tensed for her, we made her away from that hospital and shifted her here but no difference,' he said totally irritated by his fate, he never thought he would see her like this one day. 'There's only one solution to this, you should get engaged to her and make her believe that very soon her daughter will be with her.'

'Do you really think she will believe in marriage all over again?' he asked. 'Why not? If a lover is like you then anyone can love you crore times, and once you bind yourself with her, she will become fine,' she said and he agreed. 'I will go and see Maya,' Shanaya said and went inside the ward and looked at her sleeping sister and sat by her side. 'I took such a big decision before asking you but its for your own good, hope you understand,' she said and caressed her hair. She woke up. 'Chhoti,' Shanaya said and smiled.

'Di, when did you come?' she asked. 'Just now, I have a good news for you, your engagement is fixed with Arjun,' Shanaya said and she smiled and sat up. 'Di I love you, you're the best sister of the world,' she said and hugged her. Very soon I will tell you the twin thing too, Shanaya thought. After a week, the day came for Maya and Arjun's engagement. They exchanged rings. He held her hand. 'I promise that my every decision will be according to you,' he promised and she smiled back at him. 'And I also promise that I will be a very good wife after marriage and now also,' she said and he kissed her hand and they embraced each other and everyone clapped.


Besharmiyaan barbaadiyaan
Hain ishq ki shaitaniyaan
Yeh fitoor jo, sar pe sawaar ho
Jeena bhi phir, dushvaar ho

Kiski majaal koi rok de
Kiski majaal koi tok de
Ishqe junoon, rukey nahi

Hai bawari, yeh aashiqui
Gustaakh si, yeh aashiqui
Bebaak si, yeh aashiqui

Badi hai ajab kaisi yeh talap
Hai yeh aashiqui..
Ziddi badi, badi sarfiri
Hai yeh aashiqui..

Hota hai yun iska asar
Duniya jahan ki na khabar
Mazhab yahi, khuda yahi..

Hai bawari, yeh aashiqui
Gustaakh si, yeh aashiqui
Bebaak si, yeh aashiqui
Bekhauf si, yeh aashiqui.. aashiqui..

Jo yeh rang chadhe
Jo yeh sang chale
Toh kya fikar koi, kya kahe

Yeh woh aag hai, jo na bujh sake
Aisi baarishein, jo na tham sakein
Ishqe junoon, ruke nahin...

Hai bawari, yeh aashiqui
Gustaakh si, yeh aashiqui
Bebaak si, yeh aashiqui
Bekhauf si, yeh aashiqui

(Yeh aashiqui, baawri
Yeh aashiqui
Gustaakh si..)

'Congratulations chhoti, I mean Maya,' Durga said and hugged her. 'Thank you Nitya,' she said and saw that Dev was standing next to her. 'Jeeju, aren't you supposed to stand beside Durga di and not her?' Maya said breaking the hug and Durga realized the bitter truth that for her, she is Nitya and Shanaya is Durga. Tears came in her eyes and Karan came forward. 'Exactly, she is Durga only my dear.'


'Are you my jeeju only? Because I can't believe you are calling another woman as Durga di, she's Nitya and she's Durga di,' Maya said pointing to Shanaya. 'Tell her to go, I don't want to see her face. She's trying to ruin my sister's life,' Maya said angrily and Durga ran out of there followed by Dev. After sometime the function ended and Maya was brought back to hospital. 'Di, if I ask something, will you tell me?' she asked. Shanaya nodded. 'Why did jeeju say Nitya is Durga di?' she asked and Shanaya's eyes pooled up with tears. 'What are you saying? Leave all this, you need rest,' she replied and was about to lay her but Maya took her hand and kept it on her own head. 'Di, aapko meri kasam,' she said. 'Ok, I m Shanaya and Nitya is Durga, we are twins, and in total we are four siblings, you, me, Durga and Aarohi,' she said with continuous tears flowing down her cheeks. Maya moved her hand from her head.
Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#74
wow shaurya shanaya scene. I was waiting for their scene as i love vatsal sanjeeda pair. their scene was so sweet.conversation was very cute.if you can please show their scenes in future parts too with their pics.happy that arya got engaged.the ring exchange and their promise to each other with pics looked very romantic. nice pics of nitya.sad that thinking that dev is with nitya instead of Durga Maya scolded Durga.sad for Durga.finally shanaya told the truth to Maya.now how is Maya reacting?can't wait for the next part.beautiful pics
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Posted: 7 years ago
#75
Superb awesome update dear
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Posted: 7 years ago
#76
Awesome update...so beautiful scenes of shaurya and sanaya and arjunMaya...waiting for next one...
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Chp 5b: Aarohi And Tara

Maya took off Shanaya's hand from her head and nodded in disbelief. 'You didn't do good by not telling me, you betrayed me, you're an impostor, if you would've told me, would I have eaten you up? I would have been happy that I have two elder sisters instead of one who are just like a mother for me. But you didn't tell, you acted as Durga di but in reality you are Shanaya di, Durga di has suffered so much because she couldn't meet me, if you would've told me, then I wouldn't have scolded her,' Maya said angrily.

'Chhoti, what could I have done? You weren't fine and you were worried for her but she had her face changed so Arjun called me and,' she was cut in between. 'Oh so he also knew this,' she said and ruffled her own hair and tears made their way out of her eyes and Shanaya cupped her face. 'How will I face her? She did so much for me and I did this to her, I m such a bad sister,' she said cryingly. 'Shaant ho ja, I can't see you in pain, I can't see your tears,' Shanaya said cryingly.

Arjun came inside and saw Maya crying hugging Shanaya. 'Maya, what happened baby?' he asked and she broke the hug and looked at him. 'I am shocked to know that you also knew she is Shanaya di and Nitya is Durga di, you also didn't tell me, look what I did today, I broke her heart, how will I face her?' she spoke in a broken voice and he wiped her tears and kissed her forehead. 'She will forgive you don't worry,' he assured her. 'Don't know what she might be thinking of me,' she said bursting in tears, he hugged her.

Durga and Dev came back home, she was in tears. 'Maya doesn't identifies me even now, but why? Itna sab apnay k ilawa kon karta hai? She thinks I am Nitya and Shanaya is Durga, now toh I have started recognizing you that you are my husband, you toh understand my pain very well right? Then tell me what can I do to make her recognize me?' she said letting out her pain and Dev got thinking and seeing him quiet, she walked to the home temple and sat in front of Bhagwan's idol touching its feet.

'In presence of you, what is this happening maa? The innocent ones are suffering and the guilty ones are enjoying? Kabir is free, why don't you show a way to me to get him imprisoned? I want to win my chhoti's heart, I want to make her recognize me, give me your blessings maa,' she said touching her feet and bowing before her. Dev came and kept her arm around her shoulders sitting beside her. 'Get up, everything will be fine, so much has happened today, you need rest,' he said and she stood up and went with him obediently.

She went and changed her clothes, she came back and sat on the bed, he gave her the blanket making her lay and caressed her hair. 'Dev, its so long since you sung to me to sleep, please do it today,' she said and he nodded.

O re piya re.
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na.
O re piya re.

O re lamhe tu kahin mat jaa
Ho sake toh umr bhar tham jaa
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa.
O re piya re.
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye naa.
O re piya re. piyaa re.

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana
Khwahishon ki baarishon mein
Bheeg sang jaana

Dhoop aaye toh, chhaanv tum laana
Khwahishon ki baarishon mein

Bheeg sang jaana

Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re.
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re. piya re.
Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum

Jo mile usme kaat lenge hum
Thodi khushiyaan thode aansu baant lenge hum
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re.
Jiya jaaye na jaaye na jaaye na
O re piya re. piya re.
Muskurane ki wajah tum ho
Gungunane ki wajah tum ho
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na
O re piya re.
Jiya jaaye na, jaaye na, jaaye na
O re piya re. piya re...
Piya re...
Wo o ho... oo...

He saw that she was asleep and kissed her forehead and he too slept praying to God to fulfill her wish. Kabir came to his and Sanjana's room and kept a dress on the bed asking her to wear it and come down. He was about to go but she turned him towards her and slapped him. 'Now if you still think that we can reconcile even after so much happened then you are wrong,' she said and turned away from him folding her arms on her chest. 'Sanju, no arguments, come down straightforward, don't forget to wear this dress,' he said and went. She looked on and mimicked him. She looked at the dress and went to wear it. She went downstairs and he was mesmerized seeing her. He signed her that she's looking awesome, she ignored the comment and came down towards him. 'Now what's this new drama? Can I know please?' she asked totally annoyed and he blindfolded her and guided her forward.

A girl was driving the car recklessly and hit someone accidentally. She came out and looked at the boy she hit, she helped him stand. They were shocked to see each other. Their hands reached to touch each other as both of them thought that a mirror is placed before them but as their hands touched, they realized that the figure in front of each one of them isn't an illusion but real. 'We are look alikes,' they said in unison and giggled. 'What's your name?' the girl who had got hit asked. 'Aarohi,' the girl who had hit her replied.

'I am Tara,' the other one told him. 'That calls for a selfie. Let the others get shocked,' Aarohi said and clicked a selfie with him. 'First of all, I will show it to Shanaya di, she will be the most shocked,' Aarohi said and laughed. 'And I will show it to mom and dad,' Tara said and had a high five with him. They exchanged their numbers and went different ways. Aarohi sent the selfie to Shanaya. She saw it and was shocked but showed it to Maya anyways. 'Look, even our sister has a twin, but not really, they're just look alikes, maybe, just maybe it can happen that you also might be having a twin,' she said to her and they had a laugh.
(Credit of this edit goes to Jasmine Rahul)


Edited by salley145 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#78
Very emotional update. Loved Arjun"s bonding with Maya and her sisters.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#79
Maya is right.they should have told her the truth before.Maya is so guilty about hurting Durga.arjun consoling Maya was nice Durga is so upset that Maya is not recognizing her.her prayer was very emotional.hope Maya meets Durga soon and calls her Durga di like before .dev singing for Durga was lovely.dev Durga edit was perfect.arohi met her look alike Tara and they bonded very well.superb.happy to see my edit.wonder if Tara is only a look alike or arohi's twin like shanaya Durga.wonder if Tara is good or bad.waiting for deep's entry.loved sanjana slapping kabir.he deserved it.but what is he up to now?
Edited by jasminerahul - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#80
Nice part
Thanks for the pm

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