ADIYA OS -A Phone call!

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@Coffee_Chips

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Sumi, this was so apt with regard to what will happen ahead & I was imagining the story literally. This was a feel good OS & could relate to the emotional turmoil Zoya was facing. Lil request, why don't you continue with the phone conversation? The way Adi reacted hearing Zoya's voice was sweet & Zoya feeling refreshed was nice 😊

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Thank you all you guys for your lovely comments and encouragement...I will reply to all, just in some time!

Thanks a lot!!

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The_RomancePen

@The_RomancePen

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Hey sumi

Are u sure this was u first time in writing ? 😲

I did not feel so

It was awesome

I love your way of writing The Emotional turmoil she was going through her inner thoughts were perfectly knitted

please do come up with new ones and do pm me when you write

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Prizi
amazing os

Thank you Prizi!😊

BTW, is that ur baby in ur DP?

V cute!!

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: plmzaq
Lovely os
Love it

Thank you!😊

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -Tulips-
It's lovely. I loved the way u started and ended it. I was actually imagining Harshad and Jenny while reading this.
Keep writing more such scenes! U r an awesome writer

Subha!😊

Thanks for your encouraging words,always!!!!

Ya, was imagining their expressions while writing it too!

Thank you once again for always saying so!! Will surely write more!

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Divya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#27

Beautiful OS.. 😳

Please continue..

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ikhtiyar

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Sumiii! Finally you wrote an OS! It's beautiful you captured the Adiya in the show so rightly. Please write more.. always a pleasure to read your posts.

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Silver_Shiver
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ok..wait for ur views😊

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#30

Originally posted by: jasleen77
I loved it! It was sweet and a breath of fresh air, especially with all the drama that we're seeing in the show right now. I love how Roshana was the one who pushed Zoya in the right direction, but it was Adi's words that actually convinced her to make the decision. Also, the fact that just talking to Adi made all the suffocation she was feeling go away was a nice touch (it kind of reminded me of how he made her calm down after her panic attack in jail). All in all, it was a wonderful story, and I'd love to read more from you! :)

Thank you Jasleen😊

@bold- Exactly!! You captured the emotions behind this post and thank you so much for that!!

I will surely try!

You guys r giving me so much encouragement!! 🤗

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