ADIYA OS -A Phone call! - Page 4

Originally posted by: Maryam2

Beautiful

Originally posted by: AYUSHIVISHU

awesome os yar

Totally loved it

zoya is wrong in being harsh on Aditya

wat Mr hooda said may be wrong but their was no other option at that time

Originally posted by: KhwabonKiRani

Awesome os

Originally posted by: SewwiVB

Sumi, this was so apt with regard to what will happen ahead & I was imagining the story literally. This was a feel good OS & could relate to the emotional turmoil Zoya was facing. Lil request, why don't you continue with the phone conversation? The way Adi reacted hearing Zoya's voice was sweet & Zoya feeling refreshed was nice 😊

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

Hola Sumi

🤗.

remember me? fellow SwaSan'ian.

was fortunate enough to read your works on SwaSan but your very first story starring AdiYa is whole new level of beauty.

now this is what i call .. sixer on first ball. you knocked it off the stadium.

beautiful beautiful story. the thehrav, the calmness, the simplicity ... would love to see this in the show.

cheers to the beginning of journey as a story teller (writer that you were always one) (one fascinating journey this would be i am sure) Sumi. hope there are many more stories and sagas to be penned down by you.

best wishes.

Originally posted by: coolgal270

Oh god Nimmi? 😲😳🤗

After Ages!!! Remember me MATLAB?? How can I forget yaar!! Aisi dosti hai kya apni??

Sumi..

🤗🤗. was just pulling your leg yaara. great to see ya. such a warm fuzzy feel to meet an old mate.

And my tareef coming from you is like shower of blessings😆.

i yam feeling a sudden surge of divinity coursing through me.😆.

You are a star writer, someone who I have always looked upto!!

awww.. thank you. thank you re. you are too kind. and not to mention sweet.

Coming from you, this appreciation and encouragement, means a LOT..

Thank you my friend for this!! I love you!!

trust me Sumi you deserve all the love and appreciation here. this story is just SO beautiful.

love you back *big hugs*

I always wanted some sensible talk between roshana and Zoya...

And good that in yesterday's epi it happened! I think in future it would be Wasim who would tell zoya that he see the goodness of Adi and how perfect he is for zoya!

Ditto. instead of story going on steroids i wish the characters would just sit down and talk. so many likeable characters and bonds. i wish for this thehrav and simplicity in the show that you crafted so beautifully here.

would love to see wasim having a father daughter conversation with zoya.

if not in the show i will wait for such serene and touching scenes being penned down by you. 🤗

And that means you are watching Bepannaah??

started fairly recently. caught up with Adiya scenes in voot. and just done with current episodes on tata sky recorder. yet to develop crazy connect with the show but finding it VERY interesting barring few blips here and there. got my eye of Aditya. huge potential here😈.

Yay!! That means I get to read your posts?? Double yay!!

love ya mate. *hugs*

Plz plz plz do share your views!! I will be waiting!!

and i am stalking your posts. you created more write ups right. will check them all out. a suggestion. more of request Sumi. could you open an Episode discussion thread. we could get it sticked on main forum. wherever you post your thoughts here you can post a copy of those beautiful thoughts in that sticky thread too. this way they wont get lost and more readers like me won't miss out on those beauties. this forum moves in super active pace. and we can discuss show and the characters and the episodes in general there.

once again.. happy to meet ya sumi.

and thank you for this absolutely beautiful touching nugget of a story.

cheers to many more to come.

much love.

Muaah

Originally posted by: sh_aarohi

Hey sumi

Are u sure this was u first time in writing ? 😲

I did not feel so

It was awesome

I love your way of writing The Emotional turmoil she was going through her inner thoughts were perfectly knitted

please do come up with new ones and do pm me when you write

Originally posted by: Banjaaran.

Sumi..

🤗🤗. was just pulling your leg yaara. great to see ya. such a warm fuzzy feel to meet an old mate.

I know!!! I feel so ecstatic seeing you here!!

i yam feeling a sudden surge of divinity coursing through me.😆.

awww.. thank you. thank you re. you are too kind. and not to mention sweet.

trust me Sumi you deserve all the love and appreciation here. this story is just SO beautiful.

love you back *big hugs*

Thank you so much! It means a LOT!

Ditto. instead of story going on steroids i wish the characters would just sit down and talk. so many likeable characters and bonds. i wish for this thehrav and simplicity in the show that you crafted so beautifully here.

would love to see wasim having a father daughter conversation with zoya.

if not in the show i will wait for such serene and touching scenes being penned down by you. 🤗

Aww thanks...will surely try!!

I was thinking to write a parallel Adi's POV... Like here when she is thinking abt what she said, he has his own thoughts sitting in Mumbai!!

Same time!!

Not sure should I go ahead?

started fairly recently. caught up with Adiya scenes in voot. and just done with current episodes on tata sky recorder. yet to develop crazy connect with the show but finding it VERY interesting barring few blips here and there. got my eye of Aditya. huge potential here😈.

Oh yes...have u watched any previous show of HC? He is an acting dynamite!! I have been in love that man since ages..😳

love ya mate. *hugs*

Love ya right back!!🤗

and i am stalking your posts. you created more write ups right. will check them all out.

Yes the usual episode analysis that i use to sometimes write for SR!

a suggestion. more of request Sumi. could you open an Episode discussion thread. we could get it sticked on main forum. wherever you post your thoughts here you can post a copy of those beautiful thoughts in that sticky thread too. this way they wont get lost and more readers like me won't miss out on those beauties. this forum moves in super active pace. and we can discuss show and the characters and the episodes in general there.

I think we already have a EDT...let me find out!!

Can I PM you my posts? (Lol,talk abt self promotion)😡

once again.. happy to meet ya sumi.

and thank you for this absolutely beautiful touching nugget of a story.

cheers to many more to come.

Thank you again nimmi!so glad to see you in this forum!!! I am gloating since you replied!! Banajaran praises coolgal!! Wah wah!! Muaaah

much love.

Muaah