ADIYA OS -A Phone call!

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Nimshad

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Posted: 7 years ago

#11

I luvd it...

It felt so real😃

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Subha

@Life_Is_Dutiful

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Posted: 7 years ago

#12

It's lovely. I loved the way u started and ended it. I was actually imagining Harshad and Jenny while reading this.

Keep writing more such scenes! U r an awesome writer

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Zenab78
Lovely OS
A simple phonecall can make a lot of difference

Thank you Zenab😊..

Yes it can, so many times!!!

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: geet0910
lovely os, loved it😳

Thank you yaar😊

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coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: Puja_07
Beautiful os

Thank you! Glad you liked it!😊

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Jasleen Atwal

@jasleen77

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Posted: 7 years ago

#16

I loved it! It was sweet and a breath of fresh air, especially with all the drama that we're seeing in the show right now. I love how Roshana was the one who pushed Zoya in the right direction, but it was Adi's words that actually convinced her to make the decision. Also, the fact that just talking to Adi made all the suffocation she was feeling go away was a nice touch (it kind of reminded me of how he made her calm down after her panic attack in jail). All in all, it was a wonderful story, and I'd love to read more from you! :)

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coolgal270

@coolgal270

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Posted: 7 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: princy48
A sweet one sumi..
his saying "Zoya" did it all ❤️

Continue writing sumi 😉maine bhi abhi try karna shuruh kiya hai 😆 its fun to write😳

Thank you yaar!!😊

Ya its fun to write! I used to write before too, just analysis though..

This is the first time attempting an OS!.