FF Pyaar ya Waar [ZaYa redefined] End- authors note page 5 plz read - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
#21
Sim, this is different u.
Like the start and I'm looking forward to read another epic ZaYa story.
Good luck with this one.
All the very best. 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#22

I still feel no one is reading this, and that makes me less motivated to write. If you read do let me know, the more the readers the better i write. Its a direct proportion

Love you all

SIM

Chapter 3

Besharam Zain ke iraade

That day ...Zain was still blushing as he reached his bike...a modest Honda active ...a silver colored one ..that he had purchased with his own money...from the 'n' number of tuition's he had given to students ...

Though his dad had protested on his choice even offering him a more manly version of the bike ..Zain had refused ...this one went better with his personality ...

As he switched it on ...he saw Rizwan walking from the other side of the now empty and haunted parking lot ...

Aree Zain kaha reh gaya tha tu ...mai kabse wait kara tha ...

Sorry yaar woh ..kisise baat kar raha tha ...

Kisse ..Rizwans questions were non-stop ...

Zain smiled ...thi ek ...

Thi ..matalab ...ladki se baat kar raha tha ..

Haa..toh usme kaunsi badi baat hai ...as Rizwan eyed Zain ...

There stood a good looking man, his cheeks were fluffy. He loved to eat, food was his weakness and his mom was an amazing cook who added to his misery as well as Rizwans.

He was way too overweight and never exercised, how much ever Rizwan had coaxed and he had always refused. Too lazy to invest time in his looks his moral of the story, I could read three books in the same time.

He had never cared about his looks, hidden behind a thick black rimmed spectacle ...the hair nicely oiled and combed to perfection with a partition on the side ...the shirt an extra-long version and tucked with in his formal pants ...with polished black shoes ...

he was handsome, yet the appearance was so flabby ...if at all any girl would actually see his face.

His shyness and his book wormish attitude used to drive away girls...Rizwan who had average looks used to always plead him to change his wardrobe...which consisted of bland colors ..but he always refused ...

Its ok Riz...mujhe jaise kiitabi keede koh kaun dekhega ...aur who bhi itne mote koh as he used to look towards his stomach ...and laugh on himself

Bro...ek baar huliya toh sudhar kar dekh ...ladkyion ki line lagegei ...

Par mai jaisa hu ...theek hu...mujhe accha nahi lagta ...aur waise bhi mere surat dekh kar joh pyaar karegi ...woh pyaar nahi kehlata ...mujhe pyaar karegi toh aise , agar badlegi toh who sirf banavati hai

Zain had strong ethics and he would never change his standards for anyone...his present shy smile made Rizwan wonder what his friend was upto...

As Riz slowly hit on his arm....bolna ...kaun thi...

Naam Aaliya hai...he blushed ...

Hayye hayye tu sharmata bhi hai ...

He smiled...bahut cute thi woh ...par mujh par bhadak ke gayi...

Kyu..

As Zain narrated the whole incident Rizwans eyes widened...

Zain ...thoda kabhi apne dil koh bhi mauka dena chaiye...hope woh bhool jaaye sab ...

Hope so..chal ab ..Mom wait kar rahi hogi ...

Mummas boy ...he giggled ...

That night Zain couldn't fall asleep...as he went near the mirror ...Phattu Zain was blushing ...and besharam doing a bhangra

Pyaar ..pehli nazar wala pyaar ...hayee Allah mere pakode tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai

Chal hat ...kitabi batein hai ...asal mai thodi na hoti hai yeh saari cheeze, he spoke aloud

Ho gaya hai ...tujhe pyaar ho gaya hai Zain ...hmmm..ab sapne mai bhi wahi ...aas paas bhi wahi ..mandrayegi...yakeen kar mera, tere janaat ki huur teri malika aaj mil hi gayi tujhe..

He closed his eyes blushing, khoobsurat hai woh, bahut jyada bilkul pari ki tarah

Haa beauty and the beast ...as besharam laughed and made an appearance again ...haiii...mai toh usko kaske papi dunga ...

As Zain turned around ...smiling ..namakul aise koi batein karta hai kya ...ladki hai izzat kar..

Ladki hai tabhi toh aur bhi kaskar dunga ...hayeee kya short dress pehni thi usne ...aur who makhmali taange ..

Ya allah uthha le...is kambhakht koh utha le...itna khoobsurat lamhe koh ladai mai badal aaya yeh ...kuch toh feelings daalte aap isme ...

Maine toh poora irada bana liya hai, agli baar direct bahon mai lunga , tujhe chata mare to maare , apni hasrat toh kam se kam poora kar lu ...

Fatu blurted out, Besharam apni had mai reh....

Besharam winked ...had todne mai bhi apna mazaa hai ...allah us huur ki khair nahi ...ek papi aur pyaar ki jhappi toh banti hai dost , tum dono apne khandar mai rehna , bahar mat aana mai sambhal loonga

As both Fatu and Zain looked at besharam dancing ..with dead shock

Ek who majnu tha joh laila ke liye deewana ban gaya ...

Ek yeh zain hai jo hiss aaliya ke liye haste haste maidane jung mai utaar gaya

Allah ab tu hi meri hifazzat karna ...

Saheed na ho jau iss pyaar mai varna ...

Besharm had the last laugh

Pre-cap: A deadly encounter between chasmish and his hoor😃

Maneesha_Shanak thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Hahaha nice update
Loved it
Waiting for ZaYa's encounter
Zainedil thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
#24
Just one comment in 24 hrs I guess I should stop posting here
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Posted: 10 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: Zainedil

Just one comment in 24 hrs I guess I should stop posting here

No no please dont..its just that the forum is hell dead these days
Even i am going to get busy with studies in the coming days..
But please dont lose hope sim, we love reading your stories.
Ishita
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Posted: 10 years ago
#26
Such an amazing FF sim
really...
i read it bit by bit but now i completed 3 chapters and they are awsome really really interesting story...

Chp 1

God! Aliya's style... u defined her attire so beautifuly..really i just love love love aliya's character as bigri hui haseena..
and zain...rolf...but still he is cute.

Chap 2

Zain full on lattu over her...lol
and aliya ny bechary masoom student ki achi class li.

Chap 3

Zain blushing thinking about aliya...awww.
he's so cute...


Continue soon plzzz...
i know forum is dead and silent more than graveyard but still u r writing... a very big thanks for that...

Hania.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#27
I love the 2 versions of Zain it was so funny yaar , I can't wait for the confrontation of Zaya hope we get some nice kitkit and romantic scenes , but please do continue it !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Really nyc update sim .
Loved it .
Woahh precap sounds really interesting

Update soon

Lots of love ..

Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Chapter 1
OOohhh Sim! What a start!!!!
Motu Zain... Hahahahahahahahaha... I m gonna have a hard time picturing him!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#30
Chapter 2
Woww... Besharam Zain... I'm already loving him!
The conversation was soo nice... Loved the chappy Sim!!!

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