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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

😃 I know you all are not used to so sluggish updates from me, but I am really overworked. Apart from a kid, research I am a big Harshad Arora fans and his constant updates thanks to Indonesian trip are a big distraction for me.

This will be a biweekly update, depending on how my schedule is. I am still not happy with how this story has shaped up, maybe BIshq is still lingering in my mind.

I also have a non zaya story a pretty good one on Whattpad, http://www.wattpad.com/myworks/41139502-the-convict, if you have time do read it.

Thanks for your lovely words and encouragement, love you all,

Enjoy

Sim


Chapter 2

Pehli Mulakaat

As the bell rang ..the inner voice jiggled ...

Tam tam tara ...tam tam tara ...uth jaa Zain ...Abdullah ..Tam Tam taara ...

Oye abhi ...bahar nikalkar dhoondh usse ...shayad bahar hi hogi ...uss khadoos professor se milne ruki hogi ...ID ..hai na unke paas ...chal utha apni tashreef ...aur bahar daud...

Zains body had gone stiff, as though he was paralyzed...after 20 mins of struggle he finally got up and took his first baby step

Ya Khuada ..tu chal raha hai ya reng raha hai ...isse jaldi life mai chala nahi kya kabhi ...chal jaldi paav badha ...daud ...daud ...

As he quickened his phase and peeped out ...there was no one in the corridor ...everyone had left ...it was the last class and he had spent too much time ...boosting his courage to step out ...as he again dragged himself out ...and looked ..left right ...no one ...the college would be closed in 15 minutes ...

His face showed his disappointment ..he had missed the golden chance of seeing her or talking to her ...

Sab tera kiya dhara hai...aur ban satya vadi ...itna bada bheja dya hai uppar wale ne ...bilkul khalli ...zero...empty ...

ab baithkar umra bhar soch ...kya tha uska naam ...samjhe ...bevakoof ...

As he finally spoke to his inner demon...his old habit of talking to himself...

Maine kya kiya ..tujhe pata hai na mai jhoot nahi bolta ...toh aaj kaise apne ussol badal deta ...

Toh ab baithkar uss sach ke makbera mai akele tehlna ...bhoot ki tarah ...besharam mimicked his voice

Oye tu mujhe aise kyu dhamki deta rehta hai ...mai kya kissi se darta nahi hu...

Accha ..the female voice reciprocated ..as he pondered how come the besharam zain was talking in an feminine voice today...

Teri Avaaj koh kya hua ..aise ladkiyon ki tarah kyu ho gayi hai ..he giggled ...

Kyunki mai ladki hu ...Chasmish jara palat toh shai...

As Zain turned his voice squeaked a silent death in his throat ...

Ya Aallha ...yeh ladki toh pathaka hai pathaka ...besharam zain was admiring her again from top to bottom ...as he eyed her shy ..

Jee ...aap...

Haa Mai ...

Tahjub hua ...mujhe yaha dekh kar ...

As Zain nodded his head and looked away shy ...

Kyu ...Bahut shaukh haina tujhe sach bolne ka...jaant hai...mai kaun hu...

He looked up as besharam pointed out ...wahi toh jaane ki koshsih kar rah ahu..pooch usse pooch ...goonge

Jee nahi jaanta ...

Bacche mujhse panga lekar theek nahi kiya tune ...teri vajah se mera ID japt ho gaya ...

ab tera woh hashar karungi ..ki tu aur tera yeh chashma kahi muh dikhane ke layak nahi rahenge ...

He tried looking up...but his fears had overcome again ..the shyness almost frightening him now ...

Mai ..lekaar aata hu aapka ID...

Tu lekaar aayega ...

Haa

She smirked...tu toh gaya ...ab teri khair nahi ... she snapped her fingers at him

As she pulled her bag over her shoulders and started walking away from him ..his heart stopped ...as besharam protested ...rok rok ...chaar gali aur sun ...par rok ...

Before he could speak ..she turned back...

Aaliya Haider ...teri woh halat karegi ki teri kahani ka iss college mai chapter likha kaayega, chasmish khuda tere hifazat kare mujhse ...Samjhe ...

Zain looked down again ...besharam was mocking him ...

Aaliya ...the name gave him a smile...such a beautiful name...for such an angelic face ...as she walked away ...Zain smiled ...and slowly murmured Aaliya ...Aaliya ...

Mai ...Zain Abdullah ...aur tum Aaliya ...

As besharam shouted loudly in excitement ..Aaliya ...Zain Abdullah ...wah kya naam banega ...wah ...

Teri noor ...ek qayamat ke tarah mujhe chukar gayi...

Purani zindagi bhi ab nazar aati hai jaise nayi...

SIM

Precap: A love lorn Zain and an angry Aaliya ...dhoom dhadaka

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
Hello darling ..
How r u
.
Well i m.glad that u r writing this story..
Well coming to the first chapter ..
The zainu baba. N his inner voice were ver nyc ..
Haye aliya zain ka kiya hashar kare gi ab ..

Or yeh kiya ..
Zain or woh bhi un fit ..
Am i sleeping .

Running to read part two
Lots of love
Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
Hehhehehehe
Aliya toh patakha nahi missile nikli ..
Ab zain ki band baje gi ..
Haye aliya zain abdullah the way besharam was excited ..it was very good to read ..
I want part 3 ...
I m running now ..n will run till i not get my part 3
Lots of love ..
Alina
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
I am lovin the phatuu zain and aaliya oho its gonna be fun
And take your time to update I will wait to read it
zayalove thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Zainedil

is anyone reading this ?

yes i m am infact i m still on a running mode until i not get a new chappy 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Amazing story ...
Loved phattu zain :)
Continue soon !!

Thnxx for pm ..!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Haha besharam zain is awesome :)))
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Oh God!
I am so Zainish... Or maybe Zain is Me-ish.
No,no! I am not a nerd...But I am telling about talking to ownself... I could only smile and giggle and smile and giggle.
I could imagine Harshad in "Pyaar tune kya kiya" form(not personality,but attire with chashme)
Of course ,nothing can be predicted... Pretty excited to read further...
Amazing update!
Thanks for pm.
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Read both the chapters , so you are back , something different i like it , the phattu zain and the patakaa Aaliya , do continue soon !!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#20
It was an wonderful chapter
Poor guy zain wondering what aliya is up to
Take ur own time to update no problem

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