FF Beintehaa Ishq [Zaya story with a twist]last chapter -pg106 - Page 61

Originally posted by: HarshikaAnuraj

First of all thanks for the dedication sim...

And yet again today i am commenting because of your way of writing.

The way you described aliya's pain while remembering the past and comparing what zain did to her with what she did to him...it was all very magical..

I am as usual looking forward to the chapters . Doesn't matter that they are dark. If its on my zaya and their mohabbat then its sure to be interesting..

I might start commenting a bit more often..now that my exams have finished...

Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Amazing chapter...
Loved it..
Beautifully written...
Zain cant eat any thing 😭
Zain is suffering so much to gain his love back...
Once again...awsome chapter loved it..
Cont soon

Originally posted by: Riya5666

Amazing chapters Sim!!

I have been feeling sad for both of them now, don't know what to do or rather, say.

But u know, this story is an addiction so i m sure i would not be able to leave it... I am having mixed feelings right now... I really want zaya to come together but then it would end this story of yours so i dnt want it to end also...

Tell me what to dooo...😕

And you told us to have faith in you, well... Given... I have total faith in you. You wouldn't give this story a tragic ending. You wouldn't, right? Well, i badly hope so.

I just don't know how to exactly respond so better yet, I am just saying, Please update soon SIM!

Waiting to know how this story goes further...

Love you...

Originally posted by: manny136

Great update. Man zaya r in so much pain but both of them have gone through so much so its gonna take time for it to get better. Aliya is trying so hard she is fighting a war within her n fahads call made it even worse like dude be more positive instead of being all discouraging lol it made her even more determined to get rid of zain. I hope her health doesn't suffer with getting dizzy n seeing rhea. Zain just soldiers on but this is getting crazy how much more can his body take lol Poor zaya need to really relax lol both their health is at peril lol cant wait for next chapter.

Originally posted by: Meghapaim

Wonderful update

Do continue soon

Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

A battle . A constant one between her mind and her heart . This chapter really defined Aaliya and Rhea . There is Rhea who cannot bear to see him in Pain and there is Aaliya who already has lost so much in love that shedoesn't want to risk her heart again . All the times he hurts her and all the time she hurts him , she does not want revenge she wants to be free from her pain and the more she hurts him more she realize that she is not able to bear this pain . Very excited for the coming chapters continue soon !

The idea of the cover is really funny but it really define the story !

😆

Originally posted by: AnnRosewood

this is true not just for Zain..but also in Aaliya's case...

For him its his guilty,his redemption,his undying love,his determination,his patience and the fact that a life wihout her wouldn't be a life at all...is dragging him into that darkness where sunshine seldom reaches..And for her..its the pain..the desolation..the hurt..that is reinforced by her brain...is what is driving her into that darkness..where there's nothing but hollowness..

Its rightly said that the brain is the bodie's most mysterious organ..and when its hurt..when its in danger..its becomes an even greater mystry..we often don't know what makes it tick..what makes it happy..what makes us sad..except the fact that it controls our emotions...

Sim,you say that I can make you smeel the rain..and you make me feel their pain..you make those small cuts and bruises in my heart...as if those lacerations are the reflections of the ones on theirs...

Im at a loss of words...

Love

Ann

Originally posted by: zayalove

Hello sim *hides behind the pillar *
Kafi late Ai na main ...
Shorry *kaan pakar k *

Well now coming back to the chapters .
They were osum as always ..
I can imagine each n every line happening infront of me ...

Their emotions are so well describes ..
Be it love anger hatred jealousy ...
Every emotion speaks their own self ...

Again u left me spellbounded ...
U r truly n inspiration darling ...

Plzz update soon ..
Take care ..
Stay blessed ..
Keep writing ..
Lots n lots of love to u .

Alina

Originally posted by: Deepika_Zaya

It was very touching update..
Aww..feeling very bad for zain..he is doing everything to get bk his aaliya..
Bt aaliya nw realized dat she was very harsh wid him..
U defined every emotion so beautifully..
Pls cont soon..

Originally posted by: harsh_pree

Very heart touching update...
Feeling bad for zain...he can do anything to get her back...
This is really owsom ...
Beautifully written
Loved it...
Cont soon...