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Posted: 10 years ago
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whoa! Update kr diya!! Wnted to comment first! Bt hv NT yet read it! So will read it nw n will comment again!:):)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Destiny_rose


Yup sure dr

I ll pm you from the next update , btw I ve already posted chap 3

Bye 😊

thnks for buddyin me dear! May I know ur name pls?:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
That was quite smthin you see
Loved this update of yarss

"Zain leaning against the open door. Shirtless. Oh. My.
I couldn't form words. The only naked male chest I'd ever seen was Shawn's. And that had been back before my mom got sick when I'd had time for dates and fun.
"Are you enjoying the view?" His amused tone didn't escape me. I blinked and lifted my eyes back up to see the smirk on his lips. Dangit. He'd caught me ogling him. "

that was so much fun . I loved the drooling part . oh my . oh my

"Do you do that often?" I asked before I could stop myself.

Aaliya is so innocent and straightforward . She can bear a girl being treated like that.

And the part where Aaliya explains about her mothers death , ya know it was touching .

Cant wait to read more . Can you please post Zains POV too . It would be amazing to know whats in his head too ...

Update soon yaar , I am hooked .

Thankxx for the pm too
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
all chapters amazing
continue soon.
by the way i am priya...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: HARSHTA

amazing update dear!!:):)


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

all chapters amazing
continue soon.
by the way i am priya...


hi Priya

I m Dhanya ... thank you for reading 😃

Yup , I ll continue soon


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Posted: 10 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: Destiny_rose


hi Priya

I m Dhanya ... thank you for reading 😃

Yup , I ll continue soon


nice to meet u dhanya
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: darkvampire

That was quite smthin you see
Loved this update of yarss

"Zain leaning against the open door. Shirtless. Oh. My.
I couldn't form words. The only naked male chest I'd ever seen was Shawn's. And that had been back before my mom got sick when I'd had time for dates and fun.
"Are you enjoying the view?" His amused tone didn't escape me. I blinked and lifted my eyes back up to see the smirk on his lips. Dangit. He'd caught me ogling him. "

that was so much fun . I loved the drooling part . oh my . oh my

"Do you do that often?" I asked before I could stop myself.

Aaliya is so innocent and straightforward . She can bear a girl being treated like that.

And the part where Aaliya explains about her mothers death , ya know it was touching .

Cant wait to read more . Can you please post Zains POV too . It would be amazing to know whats in his head too ...

Update soon yaar , I am hooked .

Thankxx for the pm too




Thank you for finding it amazing , and yes Aaliya is innocent and straightforward

Zains version I ll think about it but not so sure 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good chapters continue soon !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: KitkitMkb

Good chapters continue soon !


Thanks a lot ...

And yes , I ll continue soon 😊

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