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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hi guys! Sheesh, its been ages! I've been inactive coz of all the exams that I've been having lately. I'm still pretty much gonna be inactive on the forum for a while but the christmas holidays are coming up, so I thought I could write something. This is just the preview, I wont be updating until Christmas i guess. Btw, this preview is also a result of my khushi 😆. No not the IPK khushi, i'm talking abt the literal khushi 😆. I turned a crazy creative (yes, I'm shouting the news everywhere! 😆)! I found out a week back but i wasn't really able to get any time to write this coz of heavy heavy exams, i still do have a couple of exams left, but I've got a bit of time right now so I'm posting this. And guys, I'm not sure if this is gonna be a TS or an OS. I'll let u guys know when i update this.

Before u guys start reading, just a lil not, the preview is a whatsapp convo between Zain and Rizwan. Don't ask me why they're not texting coz u'll find out when i update the story (I've already written a part of the update, but I'm not gonna post it coz I'm mean 😈 😆). And this story is partially AU(alternate universe), I mean everyone's related to each other the same way but the story line is not the same. And also the character sketches are a teeny bit different.

Ok I'm gonna shut up now and let u guys read now:

| ~ G a t e c r a s h ~ |

- Preview

"I think you might have just managed to damage my right ear with all that screaming you did on the phone. Anyways, just be at Phoenix in a hour. We'll take you from there."

"Naa, some other day."

"It's a party, Zain."

"When did say it's a funeral?"

"And when has it ever been in the hsitory of man kind that Zain Abdullah has given any party a miss?"

"History shall change today."

"Yeah, we'll see about that. And anyways, why don't you want to come?"

"I've got other plans."

"Like what? Gatecrashing a party in Vegas?"

"Bro, you are a genius."

"Not that I didn't know. So gatecrashing it is, then?"

"Yup."

"A party in Vegas? :p"

"Dimwit. No."

"Funny how you first call me a genius, then a dimwit. Anways, gatecrash a what then?"

"A wedding."

"What?"

"I'm gonna gatecrash a wedding."

"Have you lost your brain, Abdullah?! It's not that you had one to begin with but who's wedding exactly are you talking about?"

"Mine."

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So yup, that was the preview and I hope u guys liked it! But another thing, I'm not gonna update this until I'm satisfied with the no. of likes and comments I get, it kinda sucks that u send PMs to more than 200 ppl and most of them don't bother giving any feedabck. Fair enough if ur from another forum but from the same forum, I will not be happy sending pms when i don't get response. So hit the like and COMMENT! Ur reviews help me write better. I'm sending PMs to everyone so I demand feedback.😆

Ramya :)

P.S. Buddy me for PMs.

Edited by ..Ramya.. - 11 years ago

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@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 11 years ago

RES. LOL

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Ramya, seriously? Gatecrashing his own wedding? lolol you cracked me up 😆

This really makes me doubt what Gatecrashing is! - Entering Unwanted or Uninvited right? How is he unwanted for his own marriage? 🤔 Or i got it wrong?

Anyways, mersalayiten, literally Ramya, I am mersal-ed 😆 you're very creative and you have very different concepts and ideas in your mind. 👏

Update Soon Girl! Otherwise the meaning for this mersal can change too 😆

Edited by Tit_For_Tat - 11 years ago

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
RES. LOL

Am i gonna get old by the time u unres? 😆

Just curious 😛

Coz for never again i think i grew 2 weeks older by the time u unressed 😆

I'm sure I'm gonna get wrinkles this time 😆

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@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

Am i gonna get old by the time u unres? 😆
Just curious 😛
Coz for never again i think i grew 2 weeks older by the time u unressed 😆
I'm sure I'm gonna get wrinkles this time 😆

U.N.R.E.S.E.D. -_____- (😆)

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Iridescence

@Iridescence1

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Posted: 11 years ago

Great preview :D

haha gatecrashing his own wedding...color me intrigued!

continue soon, Ramya!!

Edited by .LionHeart. - 11 years ago

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Revelio

@Revelio

Dazzler

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat
RES. LOL
-~-~-~-~-~
Ramya, seriously? Gatecrashing his own wedding? lolol you cracked me up 😆

This really makes me doubt what Gatecrashing is! - Entering Unwanted or Uninvited right? How is he unwanted for his own marriage? 🤔 Or i got it wrong?

Anyways, mersalayiten, literally Ramya, I am mersal-ed 😆 you're very creative and you have very different concepts and ideas in your mind. 👏
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Update Soon Girl! Otherwise the meaning for this mersal can change too 😆

OMG U UNRESSED!😲😲 *faints for a moment and gets back up*😆

That's what i wanted! 😆

That's exactly the definition of gate crashing but the rest is known as suspense 😆

I'm not gonna give away everything, but in this story,not everyone are gonna consider it gatecrashing, actually hardly anyone. U just have to wiat till i update to find out why zain is gonna gate crash his own wedding! 😛😆

What on earth is a mersalayiten? The first thing i got reminded of when i read that was a lobster 😆. I'm gonna check the definition of that word 😆😆

Yes me's creative and me has very different(weird) ideas 😆

@Bold I got what that meant 😆. I just wanna clear it out, i have not changed the meaning of gatecrashing, o very well know what it is 😆😆

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: .LionHeart.
Great preview :D
haha gatecrashing his own wedding...color me intrigued!
continue soon, Ramya!!

Thank u so much daya! :)

I will!

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@4bottlevodka

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ..Ramya..

OMG U UNRESSED!😲😲 *faints for a moment and gets back up*😆
That's what i wanted! 😆
That's exactly the definition of gate crashing but the rest is known as suspense 😆
I'm not gonna give away everything, but in this story,not everyone are gonna consider it gatecrashing, actually hardly anyone. U just have to wiat till i update to find out why zain is gonna gate crash his own wedding! 😛😆

What on earth is a mersalayiten? The first thing i got reminded of when i read that was a lobster 😆. I'm gonna check the definition of that word 😆😆
Yes me's creative and me has very different(weird) ideas 😆
@Bold I got what that meant 😆. I just wanna clear it out, i have not changed the meaning of gatecrashing, o very well know what it is 😆😆

Mersaliyiten is just like anger or a stunned expression that is what i told, i am stunned with your work and I might get angry if you dont update soon 😆

And don't get shocked and all I do unres soon 'sometimes' 😆

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

U.N.R.E.S.E.D. -_____- (😆)

I didn't get any wrinkles?! 😲😆

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Revelio

@Revelio

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Mersaliyiten is just like anger or a stunned expression that is what i told, i am stunned with your work and I might get angry if you dont update soon 😆

And don't get shocked and all I do unres soon 'sometimes' 😆

Yeah i just saw. I was thinking it was some Shakespearean word(my brain is accustomed to reading words in english when i dont immediately recognize its in another language 😆)and i'm like avi knows Shakespearean language and then i see the actual meaning and internally punch myself 😆

Ur stunned with the fact that Zain gatecrashed his own wedding?😆

Kidding! Thank u avi!

Gosh, i always read in between in the lines 😆