Tears I Never Shed - ZaYa OS - Page 2

Omg.. this is ur first try?.u write so beautifully...superbbb update..👏... u describe emotions wonderfully...loved it ..❤️

Wow beautiful os

story and narration is too good...u r very good in words...keep writing...loved it...next one with happy ending plz...

brilliant
while reading this update I had tears in eyes

Originally posted by: harshadcrazyfan

First of all, really beautifully written. Loved how you penned it down! Awesome!
And was this your first one? Great for the first time dear!
Keep writing.
And me too, i love sad endings.
But really wish this doesn't happen.
Try to go for a happy ending next time.
Would be waiting for the next one.
And do you mind sending me pm next time you write something?
Would be waiting...

Thanks a lot and take care.
Lots and lots of love,
-Tanu.

Thank you SO much Tanu 😳
Sad endings have their own charm no? 😉
Yeah sure I'll pm you but it depends on my next try 😛 I don't like to write stories LOL. But the new promo got me interested in writing this OS 😉

Thanks once again 😃

really emotional
vry well written
keep it up

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-

Thank you SO much Tanu 😳
Sad endings have their own charm no? 😉
Yeah sure I'll pm you but it depends on my next try 😛 I don't like to write stories LOL. But the new promo got me interested in writing this OS 😉

Thanks once again 😃

You are absolutely right! 😉
Please keep writing. This was really beautiful!😃
And no need to thank me dear! It was my pleasure!🤗
Keep writing and take care!

-Tanu.

Originally posted by: riakhan364

V brilliantly written.continue plz...

Thank you Ria 🤗

Originally posted by: RUHANIKAA

Omg.. this is ur first try?.u write so beautifully...superbbb update..👏... u describe emotions wonderfully...loved it ..❤️

Yes, my first try 😃 Thank you SOO much Ruhanikaa 😳

Originally posted by: Humzy

Wow beautiful os

Loved it

Very nicely written

You portrayed the emotions and feelings so beautifully

Thank you so much 🤗😳

Originally posted by: preeharsh

brilliant
while reading this update I had tears in eyes

Thank youuu 😳
Aww 😳

Originally posted by: sunithi

story and narration is too good...u r very good in words...keep writing...loved it...next one with happy ending plz...

Thanks a lot 😳
LOL okay I'll try. But I'm not really fond of happy endings 😛

Originally posted by: vinu127

reswa..lamba hai..

and comment short hoga but late hoga.. i'm goin to temple now..

shravanas noe...

unres

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shukar manao ki maine unres kiya!

I HATE tragedies!

phir bhi i'm commenting for you!

and this was very well written Herm

you are a really good writer..

u must write more

but NO tragedies please..

write some cute stuff😳😳

Hhaha, shukriya aap ne unres kardiya 😛
Thank youu Vinuu 🤗
I'll try 😛

Originally posted by: Tit_For_Tat

Res!Okay Hermain i have a lot of Res-es to be Unresed!So i will be a bit late!sorry.

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Superb!This is very well written!Perfect.

Vaise Usne gusse mein Talaq diya na?Its not considered na Hermain?I read it somewhere!😆

She is losing all of her loved ones!😭 You made me cry Hermain!I hate you..hmph!

I love this one!Though it is sad!

I cannot hate you anyway! I love you!

Write More!👏

Nahi gusse mein do, ya khushi mein do, ya drunk state mein dou.. Talaaq is talaaq 😆
Thank youuu SO much Avi 🤗
Hahah, I'm glad i made you cry. This proves that my words had depth 😆
Love you too 😳