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Hermain

@clockworknerd

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Posted: 11 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: arshipotterfan
Ye kb likha :o koipm kyun nai????
Amazing hermain. Marvellous. Kitna acha likti hai.
Nw u cn assist emaani like she did. Thoda jaldi mill jaye update!
Write more. Nd pm me. K?

Mai ne socha is qaabil nahi ke mujh se achay writers ko pm karun 😆

Thankyouu 😳😃

Hahaha, is chudail ka tou update dene ka irada he nahi hai 😛

Okayy 😉

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ZayaHarshika

@ZayaHarshika

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#32

Sabse pehle...i'm really sorry .. Bahut late comment kar rahi hoon.. Busy thi.. But finally i read it today..

N OMG hermain..
First time?? 😲 😲
I'm a sadist.. I such stories 😆 😆
But nahi this was just 👏 👏
Poor aaliya 😭
I luved it to the core Hermain..
Keep writing plzz...
U have a hidden writer in u .. 😆

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asyaarshilover

@asyaarshilover

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#33

lovely os and was emotional
amazing 👏

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: ZayaHarshika
Sabse pehle...i'm really sorry .. Bahut late comment kar rahi hoon.. Busy thi.. But finally i read it today..

N OMG hermain..
First time?? 😲 😲
I'm a sadist.. I such stories 😆 😆
But nahi this was just 👏 👏
Poor aaliya 😭
I luved it to the core Hermain..
Keep writing plzz...
U have a hidden writer in u .. 😆

Koi baat nahi. Aaj kal I'm also very busy , we're sailing in the same boat. No worries 😆

Thank youu Sumaiyaaa 😳😃

Hahah, Shukriyaaa 😛

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: asyaarshilover
lovely os and was emotional
amazing 👏

Thank youuu!!! 😃😳

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Sabrina

@SabrinaMalik

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#36

Allah Miyaan yeh kab hua kaise hua?😲

When did you write this? I was just clearing my inbox when I saw this.

Sorry for being late. I was in India I guess when you wrote this. So this is your first!

Lekin yaar,

Inta sad?

I mean, ITNAAA SAD? 😲

Mamu ko maar dala.

ZaYa ka talaaq karwa dala.

Phir Ghulam ko bhi...(That part was okay bacause if not for him, my ZaYa wouldn't still have been tadpofying like this 😭)

Allah Miyaan, what a sadist you are! I was thinking ki end mein they'll reunite or something but you! 😡

But still dude, you can write. I mean, despite the sadness galore, the feelings and stuff was described beautifully.

I liked the way Shabana was searching her pillow for tears but Aaliya's eyes had long dried.

And the last part when she finally cried. Cried for all the injustices and all the pain and all the mishaps.

But sad endings mujhe bilkul pasand nahin. 😕

Agli baar kuch happy happy likhna, theek?

Sorry once more for being THIS late. Pata nahin tum dekhogi bhi ya nahin. 😒

Aur tere exams and all kaise chal rahe hain? Kabhi kabhar IF pe bhi aa jaya karo yaar. Abhi sirf 9th mein hai tu! Behaving as if you're a Medical student or something. 😆

Take care ;)

Mein chali apni FF type karne. 3 weeks ho gaye hain last update kare 😛

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bloodsheds

@bloodsheds

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#37

It's so beautifully written 👏 👏 👏
I luved d OS so much 😊
Keep on writing more 😉

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Nivriti

@agreatperhaps

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

#38

A very carefully and beautifully worded piece. The way you put into flow is comendable. Very heavy on emotions and an interesting read. I am glad you kept the endning sad. Sometimes it just has to be this way. Your writing is very expressive. You gave the story a nice edge.

Good luck.

-N

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Hermain

@clockworknerd

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: NocturnalBeing
A very carefully and beautifully worded piece. The way you put into flow is comendable. Very heavy on emotions and an interesting read. I am glad you kept the endning sad. Sometimes it just has to be this way. Your writing is very expressive. You gave the story a nice edge.

Good luck.

-N

I'm definitely going to faint 😛

That is a LOT of appreciation dude. Cloud nine moment for me xD

Thank youuu! I'm glad you liked the ending.And yes, i wanted to keep it realistic that's why kept a sad ending. Because as you said sometimes it just has to be this way 😳