Tears I Never Shed - ZaYa OS - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: preeharsharora

i love d story its so relatable bravo ur wrds r so apt so heartfelt as if i'm seeing d whole thing happening in frnt of my eyes each nd every wrd u wrote touched me frm within ..amazing superb



Thank you SOO much πŸ€—
Seriously thankyouu 😳

Originally posted by: iluvuzaya

It was superb ...
Really heart wrenching...
Pls continue it I want to read more...



Thank youu! 😳
Haha, it ends here. I don't have anything else in my mind πŸ˜›

Originally posted by: katmaan

Shit man I don't want this to happen in the soap ...but loved it I mean I was too and I couldn't bear it I was also crying the momeontt she stared crying...how can aalah be so unfare to her how can he be unfair to his laadli



Same pinch πŸ˜‰
Allah is not unfair to her, it's her destiny 😳 And after all, our parents do pass away and we have to live alone 😳

Originally posted by: Priyakna

wow it's sooo beautiful portrayed n I love Aaliya had not cried for almost an year n when she did it took all her pain away from her heart physically because she let it out :)



Thank youuu Divyaa πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: jazly_zayafan

really emotional
vry well written
keep it up



Thank youuu πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
Edited by -ZaYalicious- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
amazing amazing .. very emo .. . pls do continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sabse pehla question sachi this was your first time...??😲 u r awesome writerπŸ‘ u seriously brought tears in my eyes...😭but I hate tragic endings next time koi tragedy mat likhna nhi toh I will not commentπŸ˜† mazak kar rhi...keep writing stories that have a happy ending...!!πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Simply superb dear πŸ‘πŸΌ
everything was brilliantly penned down
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25
Dekha! Maine kaha tha na people will like it. πŸ˜ƒ
Aisay hi nervous ho rahi thi tum. πŸ˜†
Thanks for giving me the credit. Mujhe umeed nahi thi ke tum mera naam mention karo gi. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
I read it again. It's really good. πŸ˜‰
Do write more! Just for practice. School mein kaam aye ge yeh experiments. πŸ˜ƒ
Jeeti raho Behna. Sada suhagan rahi πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wowww
It was superbb!!!!
Is there gonna be a part 2 for this @-ZaYalicious-
Thxx for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: minihashu

amazing amazing .. very emo .. . pls do continue


Thank youu πŸ˜³πŸ˜ƒ
It's a OS.. ive nothing in my mind to continue 😳

Originally posted by: craziness05

Sabse pehla question sachi this was your first time...??😲 u r awesome writerπŸ‘ u seriously brought tears in my eyes...😭but I hate tragic endings next time koi tragedy mat likhna nhi toh I will not commentπŸ˜† mazak kar rhi...keep writing stories that have a happy ending...!!πŸ˜›


Yeah first time Aastha. Poora forum check karlo. I've never written anything on shows before πŸ˜›
Thank youuu πŸ€— I love sad endings SOO much isliye kuch happy likhne ka dil nahi chahta πŸ˜†

Originally posted by: -harshikazaya-

really beautifull os
great


Thank youuuπŸ˜ƒ

Originally posted by: .Anisha.

Simply superb dear πŸ‘πŸΌ

everything was brilliantly penned down


Thank you SO much Anishaa πŸ€—

Originally posted by: Beintehaa_ZaYa

Wowww

It was superbb!!!!
Is there gonna be a part 2 for this @-ZaYalicious-
Thxx for the pm


Thank youuu πŸ˜ƒπŸ˜³
No, there's no part 2 😳 It's just an OS πŸ˜‰

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Emaani.95

Dekha! Maine kaha tha na people will like it. πŸ˜ƒ

Aisay hi nervous ho rahi thi tum. πŸ˜†
Thanks for giving me the credit. Mujhe umeed nahi thi ke tum mera naam mention karo gi. πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†
I read it again. It's really good. πŸ˜‰
Do write more! Just for practice. School mein kaam aye ge yeh experiments. πŸ˜ƒ
Jeeti raho Behna. Sada suhagan rahi πŸ˜›


Bhai kyun mention na karti. Asal words tou tumharey hain πŸ˜›
Zaroor πŸ˜†
Bar maza at hai hindi bolnay mein? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ye kb likha :o koipm kyun nai????
Amazing hermain. Marvellous. Kitna acha likti hai.
Nw u cn assist emaani like she did. Thoda jaldi mill jaye update!
Write more. Nd pm me. K?
Edited by arshipotterfan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: -ZaYalicious-


Bhai kyun mention na karti. Asal words tou tumharey hain πŸ˜›
Zaroor πŸ˜†
Bar maza at hai hindi bolnay mein? πŸ˜‰πŸ˜›


Haha thanks πŸ˜›
Haan maza ata hai. πŸ˜†

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