SS : Dhoom Dhadakka! COMPLETED! Link to Sequel on first page! - Page 5

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9

awesome update.both are always ready to fight with each other.waiting for next part.

Originally posted by: rinku95

Loved it

Originally posted by: Sweta...

Loved it the way Aliyah's innocence is shown through wanting to watch the qubool hai part of the wedding especially but because of her thirst and zain she missed it hahaha loved it the way he stood there with a smug smile and challenged her p! Thanks for the pm :)

Originally posted by: aashiqua

oh aalya..plz dnt keep d hope dat u wil nt meet him again..

Originally posted by: kingofme

this version of the story is also very nice...

pls cont soon...

thanx for the pm...

Originally posted by: luckyzaya14

Jusst lovved alll the parts. Ur doing a fab job dear 👍🏼
Would love to see how this story progresses.
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It's so nice and while reading I was having a goody goody felling, adding u ... accept n pm me from next... 😃

Someone is so excited for her honewale husband lol. Sometimes even I'm like ya Allah mujhe Aisa husband dena joh mujhe se Bohat pyar Kare. Silly It is but it's hilarious.

And obviously their nok jhok will keep going on. And that is a forever thing. Not even them getting married will stop that haha.

But I will for sure go and see what the characters look like and read the plot on Wikipedia to understand what is going on.
After Ipkknd I just stopped watching dramas. And I'm pretty sure it will take me sometimes to start watching it again.

Thanks for the update.
Loved it <3

I'll read chapter 3 tomorrow!

Read all 3 parts..
I am loving it.
Zaya ka Takrana and their Kitkit. <3
Waiting for Next Part :)

PART 4. TEMPORARY TRUCE

Zain Usman Abdullah was goofing around with his friends at the marriage hall while waiting for the car. All the family cars were now carrying the elders of his family along with the married couple towards Barkat Villa and would come back after dropping them to take the other guests. Zain and remaining youngsters were supposed to come in second round and hence, he and his friends were fooling around waiting for it to come. It was almost an hour after the nikaah happened and Zain was sure that the elders and the married couple must have reached Barkat Villa by now.

As Zain joked around with his friends he heard someone crying nearby. Zain turned around in shock. Who would cry in a marriage hall? Ignoring his friends, he spun around while looking for the source of the noise. He sensed the general direction from which the sobs were coming and marched towards it unnoticed by his friends. Once he reached the area from where the sobs seemed to be emanating, he was surprised to see no one around. Don't tell me ki marriage hall mein bhi chudail bhatakti hain! Zain thought as he looked around. Suddenly, his eyes went down and he noticed someone under the table nearby. He frowned; Kaun hai wahaan? Koi chudail toh nahi? He walked to the table and leaned down to look at the perpetrator. Imagine his shock when he saw Aaliya Ghulam Haider sitting under a table crying her heart out. She had her knees drawn towards her chest and her arms encircled it as she sobbed with her head on her knees. Zain's heart clenched at her crying and he could not resist himself. He squatted down and sat under the table right beside her in Indian style. Either she had not noticed him or she was ignoring him as she did not even look at him.

Aaliya sobbed her heart out as she hid under the table. She hid there as she did not want her younger sister to see her like this. Suddenly, out of nowhere a kerchief seemed to hang in front of her. She blinked twice and looked up to the owner of the kerchief. Her eyes widened when she saw that it was Zain who was handing her the kerchief. She took the kerchief but did not use it. She continued to bawl her eyes out.

Zain raised an eyebrow at her antics and slowly spoke up, "Aaliya! Rona band karo! Rone se kuch nahi hoga!" Aaliya looked at him and gave him a glare. She asked in between her sobbing, "Tumhein kaise pata hai ki rone se kuch nahi hoga? Kya pata? Mere rone se mera dard thoda kam ho jaaye!" "Dard?", Zain frowned. Aaliya nodded, "Haan! Dard! Abhi shaam ko hi hum log waapis jaa rahe hain! Mujhe toh Maamu Maami se alag hona padega na? Lekin yeh dard tum kya jaano! Yeh dard ko toh main hi samajh sakti hoon! "Zain rolled his eyes and was about to tell her that he even felt the same thing as he will be separated from his Phoophi and Phoopha too but before he could say anything, Aaliya started weeping again. Zain sighed; chodo yaar! He was about to get up when Aaliya caught his hand. He sat back and looked at her. Nothing could have prepared Zain for what happened next as the moment he sat back Aaliya lunged forward and hugged him tightly. Zain was stupefied for a moment and then slowly his arms raised and he hugged her back. They remained like that for a while as Aaliya sniffled and wept softly. After few minutes, Aaliya pulled away and wiped her eyes and cheeks with the kerchief he had given her.

Trying to give her some privacy Zain was again about to get up but Aaliya stopped him again by placing her hand on his arm. He turned and looked at her and she smiled at him hesitantly, "Shukriya!" Zain frowned and Aaliya continued, "Main tumhaare saath subah se lad rahi hoon aur tum ho ki mujhe dilaasa dene pahunch gaye! Shukriya!" Zain smiled, "Its ok! After all kuch der ke liye hum log jhagde ko side mein rakh sakte hain, right?" Aaliya giggled and nodded, "Lekin sirf aaj ke liye truce! Next time phir se ladenge!" Zain laughed and nodded, "Good idea!" He crawled out of her hiding space and stood up. He walked few steps and then stopped and turned around, "Miss. Khitkhit!" Aaliya, who was looking down lost in her thoughts, looked up at him. Zain continued, "Next jhagde pe milenge!" Aaliya gave him a bright smile and he walked away.

Aaliya sat at the place for a second remembering her and Zain's fights from the morning and the talk they just had. Suddenly she smiled widely, "Allah Miya! Zaalim hai, nakchada hai aur bahut mastikhor hai par itna bura bhi nahi hai!"

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P.S. All the reviews of earlier parts will be replied tomorrow coz today my hand is paining too much!