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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 3. EK AUR DHOOM DHADAKKA

Aaliya smiled happily as the Qaazi asked Fahad whether this marriage was qubool to him. She always felt this part was the most beautiful ritual in a marriage and she was always eager to watch it happening. As the Qaazi asked Fahad second time, Aaliya eagerly clapped along with everyone.

As Aaliya felt a bit thirsty she turned around to get some water and she came face to face with Zain. Luckily she did not crash with him right now. "Baaju hato!", she told him as she wanted to drink water without missing the Qubool Hai part. Zain raised his eyebrows at her, "Kya? Main kyun hatun?" Aaliya looked at him incredulously and huffed. Not wanting to create a scene she looked to her sides but unfortunately she was surrounded by people staring as Fahad was asked the third time whether the marriage was qubool to him. Her only way out was Zain moving and Mr. Zaalim seemed to be not interested in moving.

Aaliya glared at him, "Dekho! Mujhe ghussa mat dilaao! Hato yahaan se!" Zain smirked at her and folded his hands against his chest, "Nahi hatunga! Kya karlogi?" Aaliya's eyes narrowed, "Dekho! Mujhe ghussa mat dilaao! Main ghusse mein kuch bhi kar deti hoon!" Zain looked at her amusedly, "Achcha?" Aaliya nodded. Zain gave her a smug smile and leaned towards her. He whispered softly to her, "Kya karogi? Mujhe maarogi, peetogi ya kiss karogi?" Aaliya's jaw dropped open at his words. Ya Allah! Yeh Zaalim aisi baatein kyun kar raha hai? Abhi ise sabak sikhaati hoon! But before she could say anything the Qaazi announced that that Fahad and Nafisa were husband and wife. Aaliya turned around and looked at the couple in horror. It was her cousin brother's marriage and she missed the main ritual! All thanks to this Zaalim, she missed Fahad's wedding! Her eyes narrowed and she turned to look at Zain with anger bubbling in her eyes, "Tumen mera nikaah miss karwa diya! Nikaah ka mera favorite part tumne miss karwaa diya! Jab hat ne ko bola tab hate kyun nahi?" Zain just shrugged and looked at her innocently, "Tumne please nahi bola isiliye!" "Kya?", Aaliya asked in shock as Zain gave her a smirk and walked away leaving a fuming Aaliya behind.

Aaliya looked up and mumbled, "Ya Allah! Kis ghade se paala padwa diya aapne! Achcha hoga ki yeh Zaalim mujhe phir kabhi na mile!" She looked down and consoled to herself, "Bas Aaliya! Tum tension mat lo! Bas ek baar yeh nikaah ho jaane do! Phir tujhe iss zaalim ki shakal phir se dekhne ki koi zaroorat nahi padegi!" She looked on as Nafisa and Fahad were congratulated at getting married.

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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Both parts were absolutely brilliant...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: fffan123

Both parts were absolutely brilliant...

Thank you!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
Loved it the way Aliyah's innocence is shown through wanting to watch the qubool hai part of the wedding especially but because of her thirst and zain she missed it hahaha loved it the way he stood there with a smug smile and challenged her p! Thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35
oh aalya..plz dnt keep d hope dat u wil nt meet him again..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
this version of the story is also very nice...
pls cont soon...


thanx for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Jusst lovved alll the parts. Ur doing a fab job dear 👍🏼
Would love to see how this story progresses.
Do accept my buddy request nd pm me whenever u write 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: -KitKit-

I read both parts today..

Awsumm

continue sooon.. 😳

n lolz.. I didnt knw,, I would be frst.. 😆

plz add me in buddy list n pm me the nxt part 😊

Thanks for the review!
Glad you liked it!
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Kitkit is awesome choice!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Javeria3991

awesome update

I wonder where will they collide again and how more will they fight.

Thanks for the review!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: aashiqua

waiting for more takrar..

Thanks for the review!

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