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Posted: 11 years ago
#21
Yay! You're writing one on Zaya!

Loving the story! It's amazing so far!

Waiting for tomorrow!

Thanks for the pm! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinki123

wow amazing!šŸ˜‰šŸ‘

cant wait!!!šŸ‘

Thanks for the review!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Wahian4lyf

Yay! You're writing one on Zaya!

Loving the story! It's amazing so far!

Waiting for tomorrow!

Thanks for the pm! :)

Glad you liked it!😃
Thanks for the review!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Love it love it love it! There first meeting was amazing hahahaha how she's described to be scared of him tu when he accuses her she doesn't let it go! Amazing Uodate truly loved it :) plz accept buddy request and pm when you Uodate :) Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shiiya

Great start, do continue

Thank you and I will!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sweta...

Love it love it love it! There first meeting was amazing hahahaha how she's described to be scared of him tu when he accuses her she doesn't let it go! Amazing Uodate truly loved it :) plz accept buddy request and pm when you Uodate :) Thanks

Oh wow! Glad you liked my story so much!
Thanks for the review!
Are you Arnav Khushi fan too? Coz your id pic has them!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART 2. SECOND CRASH

Aaliya grinned as the groom arrived. Haaye! Nafisa Bhabhi aur Fahad Bhai ki Jodi kitni perfect hain, nahi? Ya Allah! Mere liye bhi ek aisa hi pyaar sa Shohar dhoondna! As the groom entered, Rizwan grabbed Aaliya and Aayat's ahdns and dragged them over to Fahad. He refused to let Fahad in unless all three were paid money. Aaliya and Aayat had bonded well with Rizwan in these days and hence, they also joined in his game. After lots of nagging and teasing, Fahad handed over the money which all three eagerly took away. After lots of teasing and jokes, groom was taken to the stage and Aaliya's eyes fell on Zain who stood beside Fahad with his eyes glued to some game in his mobile. Arre! Kitna badtameez hai yah! Aaliya wondered. Dekho toh! Bhai ke nikaah mein bhi mobile ke saath chipka pada hai! Thoda logo se mil leta, ghul leta toh kya jaata! Aur iski harqatein toh dekho! Koi bol sakta hai ki 25 saal ka hain! Harqatein toh bachchon jaisi hain! Zain looked at her and Aaliya's eyes widened and she looked down. Haaye Allah! Kahin uss Zaalim Abdullah ne mujhe dekh toh nahi liya! Bacha lena mere maula! She looked up nervously and saw Zain missing. She heaved a sigh of relief. Bach gaye! Chale gaye! Ya Allah! Mujhe us zaalim se door rakhna please!

Soon, the kaazi called up for the Bride as the time for Nikaah had arrived. As Nafisa had no parents, Suraiya decided to go and bring Nafisa down and called Aaliya to join her in bringing the bride down. Aaliya smiled and turned around only to crash right into Zainn. Suraiya had walked away and did not notice Aaliya stopping.

Aaliya's eyes widened in shock and she shouted, "Tum?" Zain was about to say something when Aaliya spoke up, "Dekhke nahi chal sakte tum? Har waqt takraana jaroori hai kya?" Even though Aaliya was still scared of Zain, she remembered their fight enough to feel annoyed at him. Zain's eyes narrowed. He remained quiet for few seconds and then as if coming out of stupor, he spoke up, "Tum Bhopal ki ladkiyaan apne aapko samajhti kya ho? Jab dekho ladne ke liye ready rehti ho! Lagta hai ladne ke siva kuch aata hi nahi hai tumhein!" Aaliya's eyes narrowed and she was about to reply something when Suraiya, who noticed her missing, hollered for her and she pointed a finger at Zain, "Tumhein toh main baad mein dekh lungi!" Zain rolled his eyes and she stormed away. But their fight was not over so easily. Another crash and bangs coming soon!

Buddy me if you want PMs

Next update will be up very soon.

Thanks, take care and have fun,

Kalpana

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28
I read both parts today..

Awsumm

continue sooon.. 😳

n lolz.. I didnt knw,, I would be frst.. šŸ˜†

plz add me in buddy list n pm me the nxt part 😊

Edited by -KitKit- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
awesome update
I wonder where will they collide again and how more will they fight.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
awesome update.both are always ready to fight with each other.waiting for next part.

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