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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: edwebllalover9
awesome concept and update.zaya cute fight.waiting for next update.

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!😃

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: Javeria3991
Awesome start
Aliya is favorite of her mama and mami. I am glad that Mami is very nice and a positive character.
Looking forward to read the story

Thanks for the review!

Glad you liked my version of Maami!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Jyo.
Lovely start. Please do PM when you update :)

Thanks for the review! Sent the Buddy request!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: rinku95
amazing start continue soon

Thanks for the review!

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: asadzoya-12
Its really Good, do PM me the next part

Thanks for the review!

Edited by Kalpana_Writer - 11 years ago

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Kalpana

@Kalpana_KaCy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: Silver_19
it's awesome..nice refreshing take on the whole story 👏 I loved it.

Thanks for the review! Glad you liked it!

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pinki123

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

wow amazing!😉👏

cant wait!!!👏

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Kalpana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Originally posted by: Zindagirocks_21
Nice story.

Thanks for the review, Lil sis!

Though it was hard for me to imagine this couple since I haven't seen this show but I liked it :)

If you cant see the show, atleast check the cast in the cast section of this forum! You will get an idea of how the character looks and it will be easier to enjoy it! And check wikipedia for the basic plot of the show! It will be easier for you to follow some of the future scenes!😃

You always come up with something interesting and it's always something that I look up to.

Thank you!😳 Really happy that you like my work so much!

Well I seriously have no idea what else to say. But I through reading this Aliyah seems like mami and mama favourite. Which is so cute.

In show, Maami is negative but you know me! I love to take a negative character and turn it positive!😆

And wah kya naam hai larke ka. Zain!
I'll be glad to read this story since the characters in there are Muslims. And obviously the dialogues. Like haye Allah.

Ya Allah is something Aaliya says so used that! I am trying to keep both the leads in character but as I have not watched the show much, it is a bit tough but glad you liked the work!