ZaYa TS:Always mine!collab by me and ANOTHERADMIRER|pt3:pg8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys .. yes yu read the title right.
This is going to be a collaboration by me and zee (anotheradmirer).. zee will be writing the last part of this 3 shots.
Thanks u so much zee
TS:alia , you are mine!


The cool wind was breezing thru the window with the rays of sun, she stretched her hands and got up "uthgayi tum, ab jaldi se tayyar hojao" her ammi came to her room to keep her dresses .

"ji, ammi , par jana kahan hai" she asked rubbing her eyes with her palms still feeling sleepy "woh, sab nahi bata sakte beta" "ammi" she pouted and went to freshen - up

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"abbu aaj kya hai" she tried to get the answer from her dad, but every one was so busy in decorating home, even her sisters were unavailable to answer her.

"kuch nahi ,bas dekhti jao" he replied

"abbu koi bhi nahi bata raha hai aap toh..." b4 she could complete her sentence her ammi interrupted
"suniye ji " asking to order sweet from the mosr known shop

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She was not interested to go out of her room , she liked to give surprise but not being surprised.

"hadd hai yaar, aisa bhi kya surprise"she mumbled to herself taking sip of the cool sharbat.

"alia" she heard her ammi calling her from down stairs. "jee" she asnwered back but didn't got any reply from ammi

"ye kya ,bewajah hi bulaya" she frowned Suddenly she heard loud noises from downstairs As if everyone was so happy, she peep in throw the window but couldn't see anything

. "hmm ,"she sighed

"alia..." her mom called her again

"ji ammi , aayi" she said making her dupatta proper She opened the door and stepped out but bumped in someone chest and was about to fall when two hand embraced her making her feel safe She closed her eyes with the fear of falling !!!!


A/N: hie frenz, so how is this? Haan? 😳 this s my first TS in BI forum, so shower me with yua chocolates as incomments and hit Like! 😊

previous title.u r mine
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LilButterfly003 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! This was seriously amazing Mun!😳
Loved it and you perfectly nailed it as per what they show👏

I can't wait for the next part

Please update soon! Pretty please😛

Awesome!❤️

Edited by Butterfly003 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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beautifully written...
Update the next part soon..
cheers for the PM!

Edited by aNkItA.C - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. I believe its zain;) who holds her
Its good yaar.. u have done a good job
And about d less commnt I think people are expecting ZAYA scene in 1st part itself!
But yua have written well!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful start..👏
liked the way of writing 👍🏼
you have done a fab job ⭐️
will be waiting for the next update 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww! I loved it! This is my second time reading this!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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excellent😃 waiting for da next post
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Its Lovely ❤️
Great Start 👍🏼
Continue and PM Soon...!!
Pizzaologist thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG. I LOVE THIS <3
PLEASE CONTIUE SOON!

you're an amazing writer seriously.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow
Its amazing dear
Opening of the story is perfect
Plzzz update soon

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