ZaYa TS:Always mine!collab by me and ANOTHERADMIRER|pt3:pg8 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11
Excellent!! Well-written. Update more pls.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Nice job!
Can't wait for the next one. ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13
Lovely beginning
waiting for he next part
continue soon
and please pm me when you update
😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Awww so cute !!! Pls continue
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
hi it was awsum dear..
pls pm me when u update..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#16
beautifully penned update soon 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Part2:
She thought she is going to fall terribly but she didn't, she opened her eyes and was greeted by a surprise, she widened her eyes seeing him He winked at her , she blushed.
"ab tak bhi wahi ho tum baccho jaisi" he said .
"haan, wo.."
"Mujhe yahan expect nahi kiya tha na"
"Kya"
"Behri hogayai ho kya mohtarma?"
"Shut up zain, Ab chodo mujhe , aise hi khade rahoge kya"she groaned and struggled to stand properly pushing his hands which had embraced her
"chodne k liye nahi aaya hun" with that he made her stand properly facing him .she blushed crimson red. They were mere inches apart
"zain koi dekhlega , haath hatao" she said checking if some one was coming
"koi nahi dekhega"he said taking a step closer still embracing her, th1ey could hear eachother's heart beating fast
. "itne saal baad mil rahe hai, kuch nahi poochugi" he asked caressing her soft cheeks.
She was controlling her tears, but she couldn't control anymore , a silent tear roll down her cheeks.
,"mujse milne ki khushi nahi hoyi shayad tumhe" he smiled wiping her tears .
"maine socha ke tum wapas nahi aaoge aur aur mujhe bhoolgaye, yaad bhi nahi kiya?"she stammered.
"kaise bhul sakta ho aliya ,tum meri ho! " he said bringing her closer and she smiled whole-heartedly and rested her head on his shoulder 😃
Edited by princesbarbie - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
wow amazing 👏👏
haayYeEe what an update 😃 though it was shrt bt lovd it ⭐️
update ua nxt part !!!

& do PM me 😳😳

Edited by lovergirlalina - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
it was a short n simple update.
do update soon n a lil longer the next tym 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Aaaw! This was very cute 😳
When she blushes and he blocks her, haiye

Loved it😳

Thanks for PM Mun⭐️

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