||Ye Laal Ishq Laakham FF ||chapter 5 pt 1 (page18) UPDATED !! :D - Page 8

Originally posted by: ..DRoadSoFar..

keep calm baby 🤣😳

Chapter 3

Hola peeps 🤗 kaisan ba sab 🤔 🤔 ... pheww ab jaakar time mila update karne ka 🤔 Bahar mausam bahut hi achcha hai its raining outside & mood bahut hi achcha hai. So i thought lets update with chapter 3... Issey pehle mai chapter likhna shuru karun... i would like to share some few lines with you all 🤗 coz i miss Laakham. shakti thakur is hotwa and there's no doubt. But usme Laakhan wali baat nahi dikh rahi hai 🤔..

"Iss baarish mei bheeg jaaun mann karta hai,

Laakham ke haseen Lamhon me kho jaaun ..mann karta hai

Wo Laakhan ka Poonam ko har baar saza dena
Wo poonam ka darr ke maare sehem jaana .. 🤔

Wo Poonam ka geele baalon ko jhatakna...
Wo laakhan ka poonam ke baalon ko suljhana...
Aaj mai ye phir se dekh loon mann karta hai

wo laakhan ka poonam ko har musibat se bachana
wo poonam ka laakhan ke liye aansoo bahana...yaad aata hai
phir se iss lamhe ko apne nazaron me utaar loon... mann karta hai 🤔"

hayla... ye kya ..Saba tapak padi yahan 🤔

saba: Nihu... koi edit bnayi hai to dikha de

Ritu : maine to rotiyan bana kar khaa bhi li 🤣 phir bhi isne apna FF update nahi kiya...Baah thakurain😡😆

Deepu : keep calm ritu baby 🤗 she'll defo update her FF 😛

Meenu : 🤣 🤣

Sonu: isko ka ho gaya be ...🤣 lagta hai...paglait ho gayi hai

Bishma: Nihaaa😆 kahan hai be tu

Cyndu : sab soch rahe honge ki nihu kab update karegi... Lekin Nihu mujhe hi FF dikhayegi

all the chant saheli's have gone paglaitwa 🤣... in between lemme update my chapter further.. Hmm after sharing intimate moments , Poonmi returns home happily.. . She is in the world of Laakhan Thakur. Poonmi shares her happiness with guddi.. Guddi says tabhi mai sochu ki humari pyaari si Poonam Kumari ki khushi ka raaz kya hai . Sach me Poonam tumne humare bailbuddhi Laakhan bhaiyya ko pyaar karna sikha hi diya 😳. Guddi closes her room's door & play's music on loud.. Poonmi and Guddi starts dancing together . Itne me Pintoo and Soni joins both... and they are non stop dancing . Poonam is soo happy ... awww she's dancing on the song mere khwabon me jo aaye... haaye DDLJ yaar aa gayi... 😳. She feels that She's dancing infront of Laakhan in her dream world and no one's around except Laakhan n her..😳... eeeshhh. Suddenly she stops dancing and she shuts off the music...🤔 ...hayla...Laakhan Thakur was really watching her dance ... La La Laakhan Thakur... aap kab aaye yahan 🤔 poonmi is nervous now 🤔. Baah Poonam Kumari kaa naache hai aap 👏. his tone is teasing one. Waise aapke khwab me kaun aata aapko chedne zara hum bhi to sune. He begins to move towards Poonam.. Wo wo Laakhan Thakur..Haan bolo poonam hum sun rahe hai... both are lost in the eye contact. Suddenly Poonmi screams...aaahhh...Choooha 🤣 ..Laakhan looks here and there in panic 🤣 kahan hai chooha ...kahan hai.. poonam says o dekhiye wahan... 🤣 Poonam itne me kisses Laakhan's cheek... and runs away in hurry... Hum aapko nahi btayenge Laakhan Thakur... 😛 & she shows tongue like a baby ... 😛 😛 . Achcha !!! humko ched kar chali bhi gayi Poonam kumari... Guddi, Pintoo, Soni and Maya bhabhi secretly watches ... humari Poonmi to bahut hi tez nikli😳👏. Laakhan ko pappi hi de gayi...baah... . Guddi nods her head in excitement.. Humari Poonmi me woh baat to hai kadwe ko bhi meetha bna deti hai...ye to Laakhan Thakur hai. they are unaware that Laakhan is listening to their gossips ...instead of being angry... he gives a sweet wali smile .

Next Day, its a rainy day in Begusarai.. aaj sooraj devta bhi bahar nahi nikle hai 🤔 . Poonam kumari as ususal follows her daily routine. she's about to leave college on her scooty. Itne me dolt peeche baith jaata hai. Bhaiyya aapko kahin jaana hai Poonmi asks Dolt in a polite manner. Wo humko bhaiyya ji ke yahan drop kar do wo ka hai humko aur bhaiyya ji ko Patna ke liye nikalna hai 😆. Achcha bhaiyya... Poonmi nods her head in approval. She drops Dolt at Laakhan's House and makes her way to the college..In th class she's lost in the world of Laakhan Thakur. She talks to Laakhan on phone during free period. Begusarai mei zoron ki baarish shuru ho gayi hai mausam romantic ho gaya hai... plus sard hawayein b aa gayi hai. Poonam has made samosas, and pakoras😛 baarish me pakore khane ka aur hi kuch maza hoata hai. Sab ikaththe hote hai chai , samosa and pakore khane ke liye... Mithu bhaiyya ko khushboo aati hai... kisne pakore bnaye hai be... zara ek plate idhar bhi laana. 🤣 mithu bhayya... aap bhi na... Laakhan and Dolt has returned from Patna. Laakhan is so angry that jo bhi agar uske saamne aaya wo use chodega nahi. Mithu bhaiyya asks him about his angry mood. Wo bhaiyya Chuna yadav😡. Mithu bhaiyya... ab kya kiya us bhootni ke ne... 🤔. bhaiyya wo kaam me taang aa raha hai, agar badepapa ne kasam nahi di hoti to aaj chuna yadav ka kissa hi khatam kar dete. Itne me Poonmi chai and pakore leke aati hai. But Laakahn is in his anger wala mood. humko bhookh nahi hai 🤔. Par Laakhan Thakur...he shouts at Poonam... humne ek baar keh diya humko bhookh nahi..tumhe humari baat ek baar mei samajh nahi aati hai ka 🤔

Poonam is shocked...ki aakhir usne aisa kya keh diya ki Laakhan ne use daant diya. Poonmi wahan se chali jaati hai. Laakhan discusses Chuna yadav situation with Phoolan Thakur as well..Sasura bahut hi interfare karne laga hai Laakhan bursts out. Laakhan apne dimag ko thanda rakho .Phoolan Thakur calms him down. Usse ab hum niptenge. Tum aur Mithilesh kuch dino ke liye Patna jao aur chuna yadav ke jitne bhi illegal adde hai sab ko khatam kar do .. ss baat ki kaano kaan khabar nahi honi chahiye kisi ko. 🤔. Poonam is crying in her room... Aakhir aakhan thakur ko ho kya gya hai 🤔.Poonmi pretends to be sleeping so early..but the truth is she's been crying under her warm soft quilt. aww Poonam 🤔 😭. Next Day she gets ready for college and the weather outside is rainy again. Poonmi ka mood kharab hai. She starts her scooty and drives to college. On her way she sees Mithu bhaiyya, Laakhan, and Dolt but she pretends to be ignoring al. She overhears Laakhan's discusson with Mithu bhaiyya and dolt that they are going to live in Patna for 2 weeks , so that wo apne kaam ko anjaam de 🤔. poonmi ka rang udd gya hai.. Laakhan 😡😡 pehle poonmi ko bina baat ke daanta ab use phir se bina btaye Patna jaa rahe wo bhi 2 week ke liye... yaarrr... y Laakhan y. she thinks that Laakhan was joking... just only to tease her. but iss baar matter hi kuch aur hai 🤔 .. Curse you Chuna Yadav.. ab kaise bachoge Laakhan Thakur, Phoolan thakur ke keher se. Poonam calls Laakhan after end of the day at college. Laakhan din recieves her call. baar baar cut kar raha hai phone. Poonam thinks in her head..kuch kaam me busy hone Laakhan Thakur... tum bhi na baar baar unko tang karti ho. uska college heek e chal raha. She wants to get buried in books.. but Laakhan thakur ke baare mei och rahi hai.😳

After 2 days she again calls him and this tme Laakhan scolds her. Aapki problem ka hai Poonam kumari😡😡😡 hum jab baar baar phone kaat rahe hai iska matlab yehi hai ki hum busy hai. Wo wo Laakhan Thakur humei aapki chinta ho rhai thi tabhi aako phone kiya. Toh!! Laakhan's voice is rude waise bhi humaein kuch din aur lagenge. aap humein disturb na karen warna aap humara gusa to jaanti hai. Paarr Laakhan Thakur. Chup !! ek dum chup ab jaaiye and apni padahai par dhyan lagayein. Laakhan is so angry that usne apni bhadas Poonmi par nikal di.

Dejected and devasted Poonmi decides to punish herself 😭. She stays in rain for continuous 12 hrs. Iss wajah se use sardi lag jaati hai. Poonmi is shivering... and crying. she calls Dolt whether Laakhan is fine or not . But Dolt b daant ta hai usey 😡😭.. Aww poor Poonmi 1 week has gone ..but Poonmi still hasn't talked to Laakhan. and Laakhan Thakur dint even bother to know about poonmi. I blame Chuna yadav 😡 an phoolan thakur for this.

Next Day poonmi so rhi hai wo abhi tak nahi uthi hai. Najma enters her room to wake her up. Utho Poonam college jaana hai .. but Poonmi dint respond. She touches her forhead and she's silent ..Ya Allah ye to behosh hai ... hai 😭. poonmi ki poor body akdi hui hai... Poori body ek dum thandi parr chuki hai. apne aap ko kitna takleef de rahi hai... ye poonam ut kyu nahi rahi hai...Sardi se poora shareer akad gya hai... Najma calls vimla kaki... hey raam ,...sardi ke karaan iska shareer to akda hua hai...saansein to chal rahi hai..lekin ye to thandi pad chuki hai.🤔 Isko garam rakhna padega warna iski jaan chali jayegi 😭Worried Vimla kaki sab priyom guddi , maya bhabhi ko bta deti hai. Maya bhabhi, priyom , guddi rushes to Poonmi's room.. Aye Poonmi aankhein khol. She's warming her up 🤔 Guddi is in tears... kya ho gya hai Poonmi ko. That 2 idiotic darogas bring doctor. He checks on poonmi. Doctor sahab ka hua hai poonmi ko. Dekhiye Inhe bahut sardi lag gayi hai iss wajah se poori body sunn o gayi hai .. Agar 24 hr tak inko hosh nahi aaya to ye nki sehat ke liye achcha nahi hoga. Abhi to injection laga diya baaki sab upar wale ki meherbani hogi 🤔. Poonam is still unconsious but she's uttering Laakhan's name in her unconscious state 😭

Itne me Mithilesh Thakur calls Maya Bhabhi ki unko kuch in aur lagenge 🤔 . Maya Bhabhi asks for Laakhan . Mithu bhaiyya replies ki Laakhan busy hai . wo baad me baat karga. Guddi Maya bhabhi se phone lete hue gusse se kehti hai Laakhan bhaiyya ko phone do. Laakhan takes the phone ..ka hua guddi kaahe itna pareshan kar rahi ho humko. Mthilesh bhaiyya ne kaha ki kuch din aur lagenge to ise hum ka kar sakte hai. .. dekho wapis aa kar batiyayenge 🤔.. Guddi now furiously says to Laakhan... nahi Laakhan bhaiyya aap udhar hi rahiye... jab poonmi ko kuch ho jayega tab aana wapis. Laakhan is shocked... Kehna ka chahti ho tum pta nahi aapne aisa kya kaha hai poonam ko ki poonam pichle 8 hrs se behosh hai aur agar Poonmi ko in 24 hrs tak hosh nhi aaya to Poonmi ki jaan bhi jaa sakti hai. L aakhan angrily scolds guddi ka behuda mazak kar rahi ho. itne me Priyom takes the phone from guddi. Dekh Laakhan Guddi jo bol rahi hai wo ekdum sach hai 🤔.

Laakhan Thakur is shattered now😭 aaj Poonam iss halat mei sirf humari wajah se hai 🤔 . kaash hum unko daant te nahi. Aur ka zarurat thi unko baarish me apne aapko bhigane ki. Unko bahut jaldi sardi lagti hai ye pata h na unko. Laakhan, Dolt, Mithu bhaiyya returns back to begusarai. Laakhan direct rushes to Poonmi's room and asks every one to leave from her room 🤔 & the song humari adhuri kahani starts in the background😭😭😭.. Poonam dekho hum aa gaye hai ab uth jao.Dekho Nautanki nahi chalegi. Laakhan's tone is very sad 🤔. Poonmi is shivering and uski body aur thandi padti jaa rahi hai. Laakhan closes her room's window and locks the door . Laakhan sneaks into Poonmi's bed and takes his stole and kurta off. he's now shirtless . He holds Poonmi very tight and sleeps .The warmth of his body gives a new life to Poonam and she soon gains consciousness 😃. Awww Laakhan .


to be continued ...


in next part there will be a Laakham confrontation 😳😳😳 after she gains consciousness😃

Originally posted by: Tanika_11

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