||Ye Laal Ishq Laakham FF ||chapter 5 pt 1 (page18) UPDATED !! :D - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: crazy4ashu

very nice niha...ur ff is seriously mindblowing...


thank you 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 3 part 1

Hello ppl 🤗 kaisan ba sab😳. Mai bhi theek hun but kal wale episode ne mereko maar hi daala . I was looking at Shakti babu only😳👏 haayeee he looked sooo .. ye kya ... chant saheliyon ko kaise pata chala ki i m gonna update the chapter 3 🤣... p.s ye b kal ke episode ko dekh ke lost ho gaye hai😉😆😳
itne me Saba enters:

Saba: yaaarrr kya episode tha kal ka *fans herself* ek dum jabar. Niha edit chipka yahan jaldi se

Meenu : ☺️ ☺️ haaayeee koi to rok lo mereko 😳😆

Ritu : ye kambakht nihaa /ff update kab karegi aur kab me sapna dekhungi 🤣

Bishma: haaayeee ☺️ ☺️ kinna hot lag rha hai Shakti babu.. Nihu ee na chol be.. jaldi se FF update kar 😳

Cyndu : ab mai ka bolun 🤔 sab to inhone hi bol liya 🤔 🤣

all the chant sahelis starts fanning themselves😆 ab ka karein last chapter bhi kuch aisa hi tha. Now back to Laakham's La La Land😳😳 . Poonmi is wrapped in Laakhan's arms. Laakhan has hold Poonam so that he could keep her warm ... aaye haayeee... ☺️.. Warmth of his body gives a new life to poonam and she soon gains consciousness slowly slowly😳. She tries to get up but laakhan has hold her like she's a fluffy teddy bear of him. She sleeps again... the background music starts with the song mere haath mei tera haath ho 😳. Next day when she wakes up she doesn't find Laakhan . He has gone to his home . Poonam tries to get up and a voice comes the person sitting next to her ... It was Maya Bhabhi... she says Poonmi aaram karo.

Poonam: Laakhan Thakur aaye the kya... She shows some concern ☺️
Maya Bhabhi: Nahi to.. wo to patna se nahi aaye abhi tak 🤔 .. her tone is teasing one
Poonam: 🤔 Unhone humare baare mei ek baar b nahi poocha ki wo kaisi hai he tone is very sad😭
itne me guddi enters
Sukumari Poonam... ab kaisee tabiyat hai aapki and ye kya badki amma also comes and starts daanting Poonmi😡😆
Badki amma : aye Poonmi ka tha ye ... tujhe kuch ho jaata to hum daant te kisko.. she says in a worried tone .
Poonam: ab hum theek hai badi amma 😊..
Itne me phoolan thakur and bushan thakur enters with manchita kaka😳
ab ka haal hai humari poonmi ka Phoolan thakur asks. Poonmi replies very politely. Ab hum theek hai Bade Thakur😳

Poonam has been taken care of by Thakur Family. But tthe truth is it was Laakhan who gave her new life . Poonmi ki nazarein idhar udhar dekh rahi hai. Ka hua Poonmi ye tumhari aankhein kisko dhoondh rahi hai😳😉 Guddi teases her. Poonmi replies.. Nahi to hum kisi ko kyun dhoondenge aur hum Laakhan Thakur ko to bilkul bhi nahi dhondh rahe hai.😆 Chori pakadi gayi Poonmi ki Badki Amma interrupts her ...🤣 Everyone who's around her starts laughing and teasing her 🤣. Achcha !!! to Laakhan bhaiyya ko dhundh rahi hai humari poonmi ki nazarein. Hum abhi Laakhan Bhaiyya ko call lagate hai. Poonmi's reaction is... nahi guddi unko kyun phone laga rahi ho.😆😲 hum bol rahein hai na hum nahi dhoondh rahe hai Laakhan Thakur ko. Guddi beta tum lagao Laakhan ko... 😆 Bushan Thakur orders guddi to call his son.

Laakhan is sleeping so calmly at his home. Suddenly his phone rings and he disconnects the phone without seeing it. Guddi is like ... humara phone kaat diya Laakhan Bhaiyya ne 😡😆. Ruko main karta hun call and Bushan Thakur calls his son. Laakhan again disconnects it. Yaar Sone bhi nahi dete hainis ghar me .Laakhan's tone is irritating . He shouts ..Dolt !!!! Dolt.. ab koi phone aayega humara to btana ki hum ghar par nahin hai . Jii bhaiyya ji Dolt nods his head in approval.Bushan Thakur is furious.. humare bete ne humara phone nahi uthaya😆 pakka so raha hoga . 🤣

Poonmi is feeling embarassed ... ki sab usi ke saamne laakhan ko phone laga rahe hai. Poonmi ke mann hi mann me laddo phoot raha hai 😳 but wo gussa bhi hai ki hadd hai Laakhan ko uski parwah nahi hai😆. Priyom enters and says ka baat hai kisko phone lagaya jaa raha hai 😆 . Everyone shouts at him Poonmi ke Laakhan ko 😳. Poonmi's face has gone red like tomato ☺️ ☺️ . Priyom says... ruko hum try karte hai. He calls Laakhan. Dolt pick the call Hello !! Priyom says in the voice of Phulan Thakur 🤣. arrey bhai Laakhan ko hum kab se phone laga rahe hai kahan hain wo. Ji bhaiyya ji so rahe hain. Aapki tareef. ji hum Phulan Thakur bol rahen hai 🤣 and Phulan Thakur is staring at Priyom 🤔 humra beta to humri hi xerox nikla 🤣 .
Dolt replies achcha Bade Thakur..aap 2 minute rukiye humm bhaiyya ji ko jaga dete hain. Dolt tries to wake him up but Laakhan says humein sone do. Dolt says Utho bhaiyya ji badi haveli se phone hai aapke bade papa ka. Laakhan wakes up and slaps dolt 😆😆😆 Ka be bola tha na hum yahan nahi hain aisa bol dena ...jiska b phone aaye. Priyom is like... saalaa bailbuddhi kahin ka😡😆. Papa ko mana kar diya. He sends his 2 idiotic darogas to Laakhan's house. Dolt interrupts both. ka be daroga and sipahi aaj yahan ka raasta kaise bhool gaye. Wo humein Phulan thakur ne bheja hai ka hai ki Poonam ji ki tabiyat phir bigad gayi hai😭 isliye phone kar rahe the.

Dolt is stunned😲😲😲 ab ka hua Poonmi ko... ji ab ghar jaakar hi pata chalega. ki poonsm ji ko ka hua haui. Doly then runs to lLaakhan's room to wake him up. Bhaiyya ji uthiye ..Dolt is crying😭 ..Laakhanwakes up and slaps Dolt again... saale ab ka hua.. Bhaiyya ji wo Poonam... Ka hua Poonam ko Laakhan comes back to his senses😲.. Dolt is crying... arrey bol be ka hua Poonam ko. wo Phulan thakur ka phone aaya tha ye btane ke liye ki Poonam ki tabiyat thek nahi hai . Tabhi humko phone [ar phone aa rahe the Laakhan murmurs in mind. Laakhan gets up takes shower and immediately runs to Poonmi's house. Laakhan is like agar Poonam Kumari ko kuch ho gya to hum apne aap ko kabhi maaf nahi kar paayenge. Udhar every one's at Manchita kaka's home enjoying tea and pakore 😛. Daroga informs Priyom on phone ki Laakhan thakur nikal chuke hain. Sab plan k according chal rahe hai. Laakhan soon reaches there and sees that everyone's sooo worried n crying 🤔 .. Poonmi is wrapped in 2 big sized razai😆 and pretending that she's shivering . Laakhan ki to jaise duniya hi khatam ho rahi ho.

Laakhan consoles every one and when he sees poonmi's condtion he is heartbroken. Doctor says to Laakhan halat mei thoda sa sudhar hai humne injection laga diya hai par dhyan rahe ki agle 24 ghante tak Poonam ji ka khyal rakhna padega aapko. Lakhan thinks that yahan rahegi to aur bimar ho jayegi. Inhe abhi humari zaroorat hai 😳. aisa ka karein ki hum dono ko koi disturb na kare. Dolt suggests him to kidnap her. Guddi suggests him to take her to their forest wala farm house 😳.

Laakhan later on Kidnapps Poonmi and takes her to the safe place. That is their jungle wala Farm house . Only dolt and guddi knows this😆 Laakhan ab poonmi ko apne kareeb hi rakhta hai. Farm house me dono hai aur unko tanhayi😳. Poonmi wakes up in the evening. She founds her self in some strange place as she doesnt know where she's been taken to. Ye hum kahan aa gaye hai aur kaun humein le aaya hai. she's shocked to see her dress style. ye kapde kisne pehnaye humein. 🤔. She's wearing multi colored harem trouser and a white colored camisole top 😳😳😳 she's looking sooo bold and beautiful. she wraps herself with a shawl. She comes out of the farm house . She founds Laakhan who just came from swimming. He's looking sooo wetty wetty ☺️ haayeee... Pooonmi blushes and goes back inside 😳. Poonmi in her mind Laakhan kitni parwah karte hain humari ☺️ she blushes so hard... and the song starts hua hai aaj pehli baar 😳. She comes outside the farmhouse and watches shirtless Laakhan from lil far. Laakhan is warming himself in front of bonfire😳... Poonam is about to turn and then she hears her name ...Poonam !!! its Laakhan Thakur who has already caught her watching him and blushing.
Poonmi is nervous.. Wo Wo Laakhan thakur .. wo wo humm...😳😳😳 Laakhan steps towards Poonam and she's stepping back and her heart is beating so fast that Laakhan is able to hear her heartbeat. Ab Laakham eyelock hota hai and romantic winds chalne lagti hai Laakhan's clothes re on drying wire supported by woodenpillar.😳 Laakhan whose shirtless...looks sooo hot ☺️... i would love to hear saba's reaction at this 🤣

Laakhan is lost in Poonmi's eyes and he comes closer towards poonmi and winds start blowing fast 😳. Her shawl gets blown up😆😆😆 and poonmi is lost in Laakhan's eyes. Poonam's Lost and found Mode starts 😆. Hua hai aaj pehli baar song again starts in the background. Poonam turns around and takes a deep breath. Laakhan is now closer to Poonmi. He sees her half bare back. He badly wants to touch her.She wants to go but he grabs her from back . Poonmi closes her eyes and slowly keeps her hair aside and he kisses her bare neck from back 😳😳.. OOpsie... Poonmi's heartbeat is getting faster. La La Lakhan thakur she whispers.. ..Hmmm... he replies 😳 awww... Laakhan is in full form 😳😳. His lips now moves to her shoulders. Poonmi is feeling lost 😳😳. She's taking big breaths and Laakhan can't stop himself kissing her ... she wants to get rid of this... but Laakhan again grabs her. fists her hair and begins kissing her front neck and shoulder...😳 haaayeee...She then hugs him very tight...and he hugs her back... the intimate huggy 😳. then he steps bak and wraps her with that shawl... Aapko Thand lag jayegi Poonam. chlo kuch khaate hai... humein bhookh lagi hai. she nods her head in approval. They have dinner together. After Dinner they are sitting infront of bonfire and he teases her... 😆😆😆 waise aap in kapdon me jabar lagti hai... aap ye kapde pehen sakti hai ...poonam then says wo bhi aapke liye 😳 .Laakhan smiles.. 😃 aap to humein samajhti hai Poonam Kumari. Again Laakham eyelock starts... awww.. again Poonmi's shawl udd jaata hai..😳😳 and Poonmi ko phir pta nahi chala. Laakhan and Poonmi comes closer... Laakhan kisses on Poonmi's lips and cups her neck. and phir se intimate huggie 😳.. That was Laakham's bold confrontaton ... 😳 Laakhan recalls the previous moments when he scolded poonam and she was almost dead. he says sorry to her. Poonam hugs him😃.


Laakhan says to Poonam wada kijiye aap ki jab hum aapko bina baat par daantenge tab aap bhi humein daantenge. wada kariye aap kabhi bhi humse door nahi jaayenge. Pata hai aapki iss halatho dekh kar mai sehem gya tha ki kahin aapko kuch na ho jaaye... agar aapko kuch ho jaata to mai tto marr hi jaata... Poonmi kisses him back 😳 bas kariye Laakhan thakur.. Hum aapke ho chuke hai ... ab aapko safai dene ki koi zarurat nahi hai.😳😳😳

I LOVE YOU LAAKHAN THAKUR... hum aapse marte dam ta pyaar karte rahenge. I LOVE YOU TOO POONAM KUMARI😳😳😳 aap humari hai and hum aapke hai... yaad rakhiyega ..hone wali Thakurain. Both again tightly hugs 🤗 and Both spends 2 weeks together as they are on vacations 😳😳.


i hope u have enjoyed it 😳...

next part will be Laakham's nautanki wala nok jhok and a big twist😳😳😳
Edited by ..DRoadSoFar.. - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Is bar plz thoda jaldi.krna or os pe dhyan mt lagana pahle ek cheez compkete kr 😡




Starting was jbrrr. Phir to jb shuruwat achi to sb acha 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: Lakhanchamach

Is bar plz thoda jaldi.krna or os pe dhyan mt lagana pahle ek cheez compkete kr 😡




Starting was jbrrr. Phir to jb shuruwat achi to sb acha 👏





Phir se Gussa Gussa 🤔 ... I hope tujhe Ye update pasand aaya :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Ohoo,aur kitni baar imagine karoo sartless
Nihaa,kafi bold hui gawa 😉
Likhte raho,good ,humko bahut acha laga. 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nihaaa yaar kya kya imagine krwa rhi ho..😳 too good yaar..just cnt wait for d next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Dev ki chamiya.. Too good.. Apni Poonam ki dressing style top class..and the best was 2 weeks vacation..
Lob man 🤗

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awieee ☺️yeh parte waqt my dil was doing dhak dhak😳
jitna bold hai us se ziyada bold imagine kar liya☺️
vacation enjoying we too enjoying 😳
jaldi next update karna🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: lakhamcrazy

awieee ☺️yeh parte waqt my dil was doing dhak dhak😳

jitna bold hai us se ziyada bold imagine kar liya☺️
vacation enjoying we too enjoying 😳
jaldi next update karna🤗



soch mera ikhte tym kia haal hua hoga😆😳

will try to update soonwa😳😃😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90

Originally posted by: flat_everest

Dev ki chamiya.. Too good.. Apni Poonam ki dressing style top class..and the best was 2 weeks vacation..

Lob man 🤗


😳 thankoo

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