FF--Circle of Love---Sequel--Upd 2/5--Pg 96 - Page 74

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Vidyaa thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awe-Inspiring job done Nishi , throughout the FF!
Loved each and every bit of it sooooooooooo much!
Really a pleasure reading your updates...
Great!👏
You're a gifted write Nishi!👏👏
You're worth alllllllllllllllllllll the accolades that you get !!!
Great Job Done Nishi !!
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I'm sure I need not say anything more..😊
You were at your best !! Couldnt have been better than this...
Just Palmary updates time and again..
Enjoyyyyyyyed them allllllllllll!!
Thanks a tonnnnnnnnnn for such wonderful updates!
Loved them!
Thanks a lot !
Love
Vidya😊
Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Isha

Hello friends,

THANK YOU SOOOOO much for all the wonderful comments. I am so humbled by those. I almost cried when I read the reviews.
I thought the ending was rushed and horrible! But you guys are soooo nice. I am so happy that you liked the story.
Some of you wanted an epilogue and some of you wanted a new story. Honestly I don't feel like writing anymore. But since you guys have been nice and I had a story in mind, I will think about a sequel to this story. Its going to be about Amar and Divya's son Sagar. Now the problem is Sharad and Sarah's daughter has to be named after AD. Can their daughter be called Adeeba Vidya Malhotra? Is this a okay name? Would the story be weird if Sagar and Vidya were the main protagonists?
Let me know! I have think a little but last night when I was busy procastinating, my favorite pass time, this story came to mind and it would go nicely with AD and SS's friendship!
About "unexpected" I have no idea when I can get back to it. I will definitely try. I hate keeping things unfinished but I don't like to compromise and write something that you will hate! I know you will never say that to my face!! I saved either way. haha
I am so sorry for not replying to you individually. But each review, each comment meant the world to me. Thank you! I love you more than you know!

No way Nishi , It wasn't horrible at all !!Though I supposed it was unplanned..but it was wonderful..😊
Ufff!! Kitni baar ek hi baat ko samjhana padta hai !!😛
👏Great to know you're planning to start another FF.
Well, Adeeba Vidya Malhotra...A bit odd name ...but chalega!
A tiny name wouldnt matter much in front of you super - duper updates..😉😊
Keep procastinating taake you come up with such brilliant ideas.
Eagerly waiting for your another fantastic start !
All the best!
And Thanks for the updates..😊
Thanks a lot.
Vidya😊
Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
go ahead with the story yaar....
amar and sharad kids!!!! wow!!!! i'm sure it'll be gr8!!!! since they'll be knowing each other as kids!!!! hope you make it a story a la indienne!!!! very hot and spicy!!!!😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
A Sequel?? that sounds fabulous Nishi, so no we defintiely don't mind, depending on how early you write it! 😉😳

Love you,

Meera
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Posted: 16 years ago
Nishi... we love u loads too.. words can't describe it..😉

great idea..
can't wait for the new story..
it would b perfect to see SV again with your writing.. I m sure it's going to be a fabulous story as usual..

loads of luv,
prayers sealed with hugs n kisses
-shobby😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
Thanks a whole lot everyone. Even though I declared I won't write anymore but I take that back. I thought of a story that would be a perfect sequel to AD's story. It's a little weird because I am making Sagar, the male protagonist as AD's son and Vidya as Sarah and Sharad's daughter. Kind of goes against BMTD's sequence. No offence anyone. I was procrastinating and this story came to mind. Even though its probably something you guys won't like as much, but for some reason its begging to be written. Lets see how it goes. Hope its not too horrible! Thanks for all the encouragement everyone. You guys are the best! Love you loads!
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Chapter one: The Prince of Delhi
16 years later….
The alarm went off. I pressed snooze and dozed off again only to be disturbed by the annoying sound after 5 minutes. Sometimes it reminded me of mom. The only difference was, it didn't pour cold water on me and didn't make the best Parathas in the whole world! I sat up yawning like a baby and went for a cold shower and got ready for school.
Then it hit me! Econ midterm today! Gosh I hate my life! College would have been great if we didn't have these stupid exams! New York was cool too but Delhi is something else! Believe it or not, I did miss my family a lot. Not only mom and dad and Sanvi but also Sharad uncle and Sarah aunty. They really spoiled me. Specially Sharad uncle, he is really my best friend. He taught me how to drive, how to whistle and even some cool pick up lines! I didn't miss Vidya, Sharad uncle's daughter that much. She was a nerd, head buried under a thick book all the time, had seriousness hung over her face 24/7. She was no fun. But for some reason Sanvi loved her! Must be a girly thing!
I totter across the hallway to my kitchen of this tiny apartment and started devouring my favorite cereals—'coco puffs'. I know, no where near mom's Parathas, but hey, it didn't come with daily dose warnings like "behave in school Sagar, don't forget lunch Sagar, be back home by dinner time Sagar and so on." Don't get me wrong, I love my mom more than myself, more than anything in the world but she can get on your nerves sometimes!
My phone vibrated. Who could be calling at this ungodly hour? The screen showed, Sureli calling
Wow! Sureli calling me? Did the sun rise in the West today or what!
"Hey Sue, what's up?"
"Please don't call me that. My name is Sureli, make SURE you remember it! To answer you question, nothing much is happening. I was wondering what are your plans for tonight? Are you busy?"
This was getting really strange, Sureli, the purported campus queen, heart throb of many was calling me at seven in the morning to know if I was free at night; something was wrong. May be she dialed the wrong number—it had to be it.
Should I tell her that? Nah! Where was the fun in that? On second thought, I was Sagar, the Prince of Delhi, the apple of my mother's ocean deep eyes! Now come to think of it, it shouldn't be a surprise that she would call me! She was hot in a way but she doesn't warm your heart, you know what I mean, right? Mostly the desi guys dig her, she's a bit too snob for my taste, its fun to go out with her but definitely can't take her to meet your mom. I smirked at my whole analysis. Oh! I am so smart! I can hear her impatient sighs on the other side. It's time for action then. Let's play along sweet Sureli—let's see how sure and superb you really are!
"Um. I am free. What did you have in mind?"
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Nishi !!
Great to see you Back in action !!
Hmm..... Sagar is a wierdo.....
Loved the start ...👏
No wonder this part too will come out in flying colours...👏👏
I'm sure..
You're writing skills are just palmary , (I know you wont agree , but still)👏
I'm eagerly waiting for you to give us more shockers with each update sooon enough!
Please , try not to take a loooonnnggggg break between the updates..AmI being a bit selfish here???
If at all I am being a selfish , its all because of you fantastic writing !!
Great Great Start yet again !!👏👏👏
Loved it
Please continue when you have time!
Thanks a lot for such a pleasant intro..
Thanks !!
All The Best
Vidya😊
Edited by Vidyaa - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Aawww.....yay!! You're writing again!!!

Anyway...I'm loving this sequel already!! Sagar is just tooooooo sweet...and I'm soooo glad that you decided on this sequel...thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you sooooo much Nishi!!!
I can't wait for Sagar and Vidya's love story to kick off...and something tells me that you are planning something very, very special 😃😃
So when's the next update??
Edited by Suha_18 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
^^ Hey Suhana !
How're you?
Well , doesn't Nishi alway has something or the other SPECIAL stored in her brilliant mind for us???
Lets see , what she's upto this time..
Vidya😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
mine! 😛

*unreserved*

Sagar defintiely seems like a "cool dude"😆😆😆 Love his intro with the comparision of NYC and Delhi, and ahhh why am I not surprised that his Sharad uncle taught him pick up lines?😳 He doesn't like Vidya?? 😔😆 Ah he'll change his mind soon!😛

Surili?? In here??😭 Not sure I like that idea too much...

Ah whew! 😳 Sagar isn't affected by her!😆

Can't wait to see what happens next! 😛

Love you,

Meera😳
Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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