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@-Unknown-22

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#721

And it ends....please please please can we have an epilogue...i loved the endingg i am soo happy he didn't die in the end a well deserved ending....hope i get to chat 2 you soon Bua and take good care

P.S im reading the Twilght series ..i thought i'd let you know as i know how big of a fan you are hehe

Edited by *|Heena|* - 16 years ago

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Pooja

@--Pooja--

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#722

Nishi....it was such a beautiful story......the ending was the best that could b there......u hav so much insight into people......
I reallly don't know wat to say......ur just wonderful....please don't stop writing.....ur a very gifted writer....
May God bless u.....

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bmtdluver

@bmtdluver

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#723

Originally posted by: Isha

OK my lovelies, here is the final chapter, written in a rush as I have to leave town. I am sorry for ending it so abruptly, I lost interest in the story and my writing skills have dwindled down to nil! I hope you guys are not tooooooo disappointed. Thank you sooooo much for reading this FF. This is probably the last story of my short writing career. So adieu my sweet readers. You can't imagine what you mean to me. Love you with all my heart! Please forgive all my mistakes!nooooooooooooo!! you're not writing anymore!!!!!!!!😭

"Yes two super stupid best friends whom you can only adore! They better be on their best behavior, otherwise with our punishment scheme I don't see how they could possibly make any progress in their competition!" Divya replied with huge grin on her face. lol!!! really cute, awesome, sweet update!! awesome end!! yay!! amar is still alive!!! soooooooooo sweet!!! i can't believe this is the last update!! (not that it wasn't good enough, just that this ff will always be missed!!) this was a fantastic ff and im so sad to see it go!!!

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Ravjot

@rainydays.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 16 years ago

#724

I read it and I think it's awesome but I gotta so I shall edit this when I get back =)

*Edit*

K so first of, I dunno what you're talking about. You have amazing writing skills. Please refer to previous pages and read the arguements we already had before trying to deny it

Aww Divya and Sarah are friends? Sarah's brother is my hero!!! Thank god Sharad opened up to Sarah and she was able to help. I knew you wouldn't give us a sad ending😊

And I'm glad Divya said no to Amar's last wish. Kinda felt bad that Sharad got rejected by the same girl twice but he didn't love her so it's all good.

And the punishment🤣🤣🤣 Well I agree with it. He totally deserves it. But then again I guess he didn't want her to be alone and wanted someone to take care of her. And I guess he didn't know Sharad loved Sarah and that's why he asked Sharad to marry Divya. But honestly, I love how Divya and Sarah were both like no, I love you and I'm not giving you up.

Sharad and Amar are going to have a competition?🤣🤣🤣 I wonder who'll win🤣 Those two crck me up. They really are best friends. Love em both.

Loved the update Nishi and loved your ff. It was amazing. I know you think I'm just saying that but I'm not. You really are an awesome writer. The way you wrote and described everything, I could easily picture it in my head and the way you described the emotions affected me as well. Your FF made me happy, sad, laugh and cry. I don't even get like that when I read a book. Just wanted to say, thank you for writing this wonderful FF. There are no words to describe it😊

Edited by ravioli_11 - 16 years ago

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Aditi

@aditi...

Explorer

Posted: 16 years ago

#725

Nisha, that was such a wonderful ending. It was perfect with Amar being there and everyone so happy. Though, the sad part is that this was your last FF. I'll miss your FF's. Actually, this was my first FF that I read in the BMTD Forum, and now's it's completed. You're an awesome writer with such a skillful talent. Thanks so much for writing this.

Wishing all the best,

Aditi

BTW - the ending had my name with AD in it!

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Suhana

@Suha_18

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#726

Someone come and pinch me...I think I'm dreaming...this was the last part??!!???!! 😭😭 Aww....seriously..this was the last last last part of this FF?? No way...awww I'm sooo gonna miss your writing Nishi!! Oh...why do you have to end this FF?? It's one of my favourites!!

Anyway...coming to the update...I loved it!!! It was...uff...I have no words to describe it...I'm just speechless... 👏👏👏 I must say that I was as surprised as Sarah was...I didn't know that Amar could be like that too....I thought he was the serious types...and Sharad...well don't get me started on him...aaww...AD and SS both together and both happy......Nishi...thanks sooo much for giving us this wonderful FF!!

And what about the other FF that you had started...'Unexpected'...are you gonna continue with that one?? Please say yes....well...the decisions yours...but I'm sure gonna miss your writing...if possible...can you please, please, please write a little epilogue for this FF??

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Meera

@indiandoll89

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#727

Mine! 😳 I shall read asap!

Last story? seriously nishi? why?😭😭😭

But anyways onto the update!😛

omg!! He's safe!!! *jumps for joy* Thank god for Sarah1!!!😳 I'm sooo soo relieved now Nishi!😳

Love the punishment for Amar!😳 good job divya!

Those two guys...are crazy!!!😳 and kinda besharam!😉😆😆

This Nishi was just the best you've written, I honestly can't believe it's over so soon!😭😭😭

Please do write more stories, you can't just leave all your loyal readers like that!😭😭😭

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Edited by indiandoll89 - 16 years ago

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Sonali

@adventure_gurl

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#728

yeah please don't leave the fanfiction or short story world! You are really great at this, don't you forget that! I loved this one! Even if it's not bmtd related pm a link or email me the file, I would love to read it!

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emmy21

@emmy21

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#729

hiiiiiii.....

i've just found about this thread..spent 4 hours reading all posts.....

this was a fabulous story....love amar, divya, sharad..... it was gr8...it serves as a model for true love......😍 there was everything in it....youthful love, true/adult love, friendship...it was funny, sad, romantic.......awwwwww...you have such a gr8 talent!!!!

you should not stop writing ss yaar...you are really good at it!!!!

hope you'll write another one......😉

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Nishi

@Isha

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#730

Hello friends,

THANK YOU SOOOOO much for all the wonderful comments. I am so humbled by those. I almost cried when I read the reviews.

I thought the ending was rushed and horrible! But you guys are soooo nice. I am so happy that you liked the story.

Some of you wanted an epilogue and some of you wanted a new story. Honestly I don't feel like writing anymore. But since you guys have been nice and I had a story in mind, I will think about a sequel to this story. Its going to be about Amar and Divya's son Sagar. Now the problem is Sharad and Sarah's daughter has to be named after AD. Can their daughter be called Adeeba Vidya Malhotra? Is this a okay name? Would the story be weird if Sagar and Vidya were the main protagonists?

Let me know! I have think a little but last night when I was busy procastinating, my favorite pass time, this story came to mind and it would go nicely with AD and SS's friendship!

About "unexpected" I have no idea when I can get back to it. I will definitely try. I hate keeping things unfinished but I don't like to compromise and write something that you will hate! I know you will never say that to my face!! I saved either way. haha

I am so sorry for not replying to you individually. But each review, each comment meant the world to me. Thank you! I love you more than you know!

Edited by Isha - 16 years ago