’Somewhere’ - My Stream of Thoughts; UPD - Page 2

Thanks again everyone 🤗

Oky, so apparently my brain wants to keep on going!😛

I know I said that if I would update, it wouldn't be until later, but this thought was in my head today, and I wanted to write it down... I'll keep writing as long as my imagination keeps running with this... so here it is!

I apologise for the slowness in the story here, right now, this is what I picturised, so I penned it down...

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Divya looked at him, flabbergasted. "'Kahin bhi nahin' ka matlab kya hai?"

He now turned his face fully to look at her, still with that same half-smile - she stifled her gasp, noticing how hardly-etched his facial features were.

"You'll see."

Divya's eyes narrowed, sighing. There was no point in getting anything more than 5 words from him... they continued to look ahead, and she saw a tree in the distance. Her legs were really getting tired; she began to slouch slightly, yet couldn't walk any slower because of Sagar. Nothing was said between them for a while after that, which allowed her to think...

What had she just done? Let some random person take her somewhere - and this 'somewhere' was a place she didn't even know? Why didn't she stop him? Why couldn't she stop him?

A sudden jolt in their grasp brought Divya back to her senses - Sagar abruptly let go of her hand, and skidded his footsteps to a halt, right in front of the tree she saw earlier. He walked a few steps ahead, and fully turned around, now facing her.

"What was that for?", Divya blurted out. She didn't expect for him to let go of their grasp so suddenly - it seemed so tight, so secure, for so long, that she became accustomed to his hold on her hand...

"What?" His eyes shifted over to her hand, which was still cupped around in the same position, as if they were still grasped together.

Divya suddenly became conscious of where his eyes moved to - she quickly shook her hand and brushed it off, and coughed slightly.

"Ummm... nothing. Where are we?"

His eyes still intense, that same half-smile formed across his face.

"You tell me."

Divya looked at him, trying to scrutinize his face. She couldn't make out any underlying emotions from anything - all she noticed was how fierce his gaze at her was, and how tight his mouth remained, even while smiling. She looked away quickly, not wanting to stare at his burning eyes.

Frustration finally overcame her, and she just let the words roll out of her mouth. "Aur uska bhi matlab kya hai? Sagar, I just met you yesterday, and here I am, allowing you to just hold my hand, and now you've brought me to God knows where --"

"I'm not holding it anymore," he said quietly, his gaze still fixed on her.

This brought her out of her revelation for a bit - Divya closed her mouth, feeling slightly intimidated, but started on her rant again.

"Anyway, I don't even know where we are, I don't even know why I went with you, pata nahin dhimaag mein kya chal raha tha, aur main aapko jaanti bhi nahin..." She stopped, the words sputtering out without her really thinking.

"Well... mujhe tumse milna tha."

"Kya?" Sagar really took Divya by surprise now - she didn't expect this to come out of him. He took her far away, in front of a tree, just to meet her? Surely this couldn't be the reason... it had to be something else.

"We met yesterday... didn't we?" Divya tried to study his face, thinking that she could get a real reason out of him, but he still remained as unfathomable as before.

"Did we really? A two minute 'hi' and 'bye' doesn't really suffice, Divya... all we found out about each other were our names."

A full sentence finally came out of Sagar's mouth, which threw off Divya slightly. For some reason, she just couldn't take away the intensity from his face...

She tried to change the subject, determined to get a proper answer out of him."Toh mera haath pakadne ka chakkar kya tha?"

His smile vanished; he raised his right eyebrow. "Hmmm... well, I thought that was obvious." He looked at her expectantly, waiting for her to respond back with an answer. Divya still stared at him, stumped as ever.

I'd like to thank your brain, for wanting to continue! 😉 😳 😳

I loved it, once again, amazing!!! 👏

How can you write soooo amazing Ammu? This is just a fab, I at least expect this to turn into an SS, and I know you're busy with exams, but one part a weekish is fine too! 😳 😳

He's def reminding me of Edward here, which by the way, you're making him a much better one than what I tried in my twilight one! 😉

He's got this sense of mystery about him, and I totally love it! 😳

Continue asap, warna main danda lekar aaungi! 😉 😆

I loved it Ammu...how do you write so well?
I know exams are part of life; but the good thing about them is they are over after a period of time, only to be back again, I knowww...but they do end...

So when the exams are over, please make your brain work overtime and now as Meera said once a week update will have to do...see we are soooo considerate... 😆

I do love the mystery surrounding S...and the emotions of D...sooooo cute...
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Wow Ammu!! Yes, your writing is very intense - really thorough descriptions of emotions and those emotions are usually intense 😉

I LOVE this Sagar...so mysterious! And I want to know about their first meeting...maybe we could have a flashback? Or a dream?😳

Good luck on your exams!! Continue whenever you can...as long as you continue! 😛

Oh wow! I'm so overwhelmed by all the comments, I didnt realise that my imagination would be appreciated this much 😳 😆

Meera - My brain most appreciates it, thank you 😃 Oh wow, he reminds you of Edward?? That's interesting, I had not thought of that... Actually, I've always pictured this kind of Sagar before as well, someone really intense, but who's got charm.. I think now though, after reading Twilight, any person who has really appealing features will remind us of Edward 😳 😆 Thankooooooooooo! 🤗🤗

Mandy - Thanks so much yaar, like I said, as long as my imagination for the scene keeps running, I'll keep updating.. i'd like to continue this though, and see how far I can go with this scene, so let's see 😳 thankoo! 🤗

Nishi - Haha, I love your consideration, thankoo 😳 😆 Exams ke baad, I promise, if I will feel this scene can go somewhere, I'll try and update more regularly, thanks so much for your kind words yaar! 🤗

Sravi - Hmmm, I do want to write what their first meeting was, though it will be really short, since their meeting wasnt long 😳 😆 thank you so much 🤗

I apologise for making Sagar so ambigious, I promise there's more to him, once I figure out what that is, will let you all know! 😳 Thanks so much again for all the lovely comments! 🤗

its a splendid job really 👏 👏 👏

awesome job! 😃 you are an amazing writer, keep it up!