’Somewhere’ - My Stream of Thoughts; UPD - Page 3

Oh yay I didnt know you updated 😃 Wonderful job! This was even cuterr than the last one. 😛 I love how he is soo mysterious....reminds me of Edward also.

And she just walked away with him 😆 He could be a bad guy for all she knows 😛 (even though that's not possible 😳 😆 )

Please, please update this soon! I want to know more 😛

oh wow the beginning was just great....plez continue this...plez 😊 😊

ohhh haha i never realized that u continued....oh well that one was also sooo sooo good 😃
plez do continue 😃

The earliest I can update is probably Wednesday, hopefully I can get some time then 😛

Thanks so much again everyone, I really appreciate all the comments 🤗🤗

Wednesday is perfect Ammu!!! Any day is perfect!! 😉

And yes, I guess you're right about the similarties to Edward, being the way he's described! 😉 😳

Shammu, I am going to dishum dishum you! How could I miss this thread? I still remember your previous FF. Sravi is totally right! You are an extremely intense writer who also adds the right amount of mystery and tension between the two characters. Brilliant!

*hides from the dishums*

Reeemmzzz! 🤗 I'm so glad you're here, thankoo chooooo much yaar 😳 😳

Thanks everyone again for all the lovely comments, I know I said I was going to update on Wednesday.. but due to lack of sleep (which means 2 hrs of sleep 😛 ) and school finalisations, I couldnt... hopefully, if I'm thinking properly and I can get my brain to work nicely, I can write the next continuation of the scene in a bit..!

Aww okay sweetie, sleep is way more important! 😳

His smile vanished; he raised his right eyebrow. "Hmmm... well, I thought that was obvious." He looked at her expectantly, waiting for her to respond back with an answer. Divya still stared at him, stumped as ever.

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Yesterday

If she could be anywhere, this is the place she would want to be.

Her park, her friends... what more could she want than to spend a whole day with some of the closest people in her life? Divya smiled happily to herself, feeling the cool breeze sweep across her face.

"Divya, meet Sagar."

She opened her eyes more widely for a second, and suddenly realised that two people were standing in front of her - one was a friend, yet the other she couldn't recognise. She smiled at him and took his hand as he shook it. His hand was soft, softer than normal... yet she felt a slight apprehension in his fingers. "Hi, Sagar, nice to meet you... I'm Divya."

He laughed, releasing their handshake abruptly. "Woh toh main kabse jaanta hoon."

She gasped. "Kaise?"

Her friend tapped Divya on her forehead, shaking her head. "Arey buddhu, abhi bhi kahaa ki tumhara naam Divya hai.. are you not thinking?"

"Oops... sorry."

"It's alright. Nice to meet you, Divya. Hope to see you around later."

Sagar stared into Divya's eyes for a moment and smiled, then turned around and left, going to meet her other friends. Divya was caught off guard for a moment, but shook it off and left with her friend, feeling slightly off than before.

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There is the 'short' (😛) flashback of their meeting, and I'm so sorry that it's not written that well, I had to keep making so many changes, and originally, it was going to be much longer but I cut most of it.. i know it's a horrible place to end, but my bheja isnt working anymore at the moment, so will update soon later😳

It's written amazingly well!!!! 👏

Honestly Ammu, I love the way you wrote this! 😳 It's just so mysterious, yet adorable! 😛 😳 Yes it was short, but we know you'll make the next one super long right? 😳