FFDher se-in luv again(pg 153)Note-pg155 - Page 21

awesome update! Vidya rocks in this story! 😃

hey ayesha!!! great job once again!!! im readin ur other one 2, tat one is also superb!!!.im sry tat ppl didnt comment in the first few updates... if i had started 2 read when u started.. i would hav def told u tat ur ff is really really good... im still not caught up though... my mom made me stop "wasting time" and start studyin😉(midterms in a week 😔) vidya is sooo cool in ur ff!!!😃 i c cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!! 😊 ~niti~

wow this was super 😉
it was really really gr8 😃
i jus lovedddddddd it 👏

plz plz plz plz plz plzplz plz plz plz plz plzplz plz plz plz plz plzplz plz plz plz plz plzplz plz plz plz
cont soon
thanks


-rabiah 😳 😛

Originally posted by: infiniti1215

hey ayesha!!! great job once again!!! im readin ur other one 2, tat one is also superb!!!.im sry tat ppl didnt comment in the first few updates... if i had started 2 read when u started.. i would hav def told u tat ur ff is really really good... im still not caught up though... my mom made me stop "wasting time" and start studyin😉(midterms in a week 😔) vidya is sooo cool in ur ff!!!😃 i c cant wait 2 c wat happens next!!! 😊 ~niti~

No worries Niti..(right) thats what my mom makes me do sometimes get off the computer and start studyin or do house chores...But that never stops me from continuing my stories....U know thats the reason i run 2 stories becuz i wanna be writer when i grow up...

Ayesha..😊

hi guys thanx for the commnets 😃 ...I am bored again( 😆 )so i'll update...If u wanna read the other one it's also updated.....

India:Sindoora dails this number on her cell phone...She puts it to her ear..
Sin-Hello...
In the airport Surili also recives it...
Sur-Hello...
Sin-Airport pounch gahi...
Sur-Ji bus abhi 10 minute baad plane take off karnay walla hai..
Sin(smiles)-Yaad hai na konsay hotel mai woh dono ghay way hain..
Sur-Ji app fikar na kijiyeah mai sub sammal loon gi..
Sin-good...Best of luck...Acha bye...
Sur-Bye...
They hang up...Sindoora in her room...Standing happily...U know her sin sin sindoora background music plays on..
Sin-UFF!! ub muche kuch sukoon millay ga...Surili ub waha jahay gi or Sagar or Vidya kay sweet say honeymoon ko hell bunanay....
Then she starts to laugh like crazy...
Scene switches to Canada hotelroom..Vidya is smling to herself when Sagar asked her if they can go out somewhere and it's her choice...
S-Come'n Vidya tell me...
V-Woh app kya bata rahay thay koi Indain place kahi gerrade street..
Sagar's happiness fades...
V-Kya hova laykar humhain jahain gay na app...
S-Vidya hum plz down town nahi ja sukthay hain waha per bohut achi cheesay hain...
V-App he nai toh kaha tha kai humari murzi hogi toh...
Sagar puts on his fake smile....
S-As u wish..Ok then get ready...
Sagar and Vidya gets ready to go out...They step out of the hotel...
S-Vidya tum subway mai travel kurna pusand karo gi ya Taxi mai...
V-Konsa cheap hai...
Sagar makes a weird face at Vidya...
S-Subway...
V-Ok so hum subway mai chulay gay....
Sagar suddenly remembers something..In his mind he thinks why the hell did he tell her about subway because in public everyone would see her wearing a sari which looked fancy...
S-Vidya it's ok hum loog taxi mai chulthay hain.
V-KiYOU ?????
S-Kiyou kay yaha per koi subway station nahi hai...
V-Oh ok...
So they hire a taxi and heads off to the gerrade street..
They get there and Vidya feels at home there because that street was filled With Indain and muslim stores and resturants....First Vidya shops For some long skirt and kurta's to go with them so Sagar doesn't feel as embarrassed...The she begs him to eat there in a resturant...So again they hire a taxi and heads back to the hotel..(Now it's 7:23 p.m)In the taxi..Vidya rested her head on Sagar's shoulder and held soo many bags in her hands...
V-Kitna muza aya tha na...
Sagar-Well pheley muche nahi jana tha waha... per tumharay saat bohut muza aya....Lekin tumnay meri jeeb dhili kardi ajj...
Vidya laughs...They reach the hotel...They go back to their room...Vidya puts all her stuff on the bed...And also sit down same with Sagar...Sagar picks up this shopping bag which was beside him...He hands it over to Vidya...Vidya looks at him..
V-Yeah kya hai?
S-gift tumharay liyeah...
Vidya gets happy and hugs him and gives him a kiss on the cheek...
V-YEAHHHHHHHH!!!!!Humaray liyeah Gift...
S-Vidya mai chatha hoon...
Suddenly his cell phone rings.Without checking the number he recives it...
S-Hello...
A ladies voice in a worrie tone-Hello Sagar...
S-Yes...
Lady-Thank god!!!!Sagar it's me Jessica i really need ur help...
S-WHAT!!!What happened?
Jess-I can't tell u on the phone just come to my room it's urgent....
S-If it's urgent why don't u call 911...
Jess-I did and i need u too..
S-Fine what room number...
Jess-21...It's on same floor as ur's...
S-I'll be there...
They hang up...
V-Kisska phone tha...
S- ahhh mai baad mai bathoon ga ok..Abhi mai chultha hoon..Per mere anay tuk mere gift ko pahen kay rukna...
Saying this Sagar rushes out of the room...Vidya looks inside the bag and takes out a dress lets say a short short Nighty...Vidya gets horrified...Then there she see's a note attached to it...
Vidya unfolds the paper and reads it out loud...
V- Meri pyaari cute si wife...Tum yahi souch rahi hogi kay yeah gift kaha say aya jubkay hum toh India buzar gahay thay...Yeah toh main India say laya hoon...Or iss bag mai issliyeah ahi hai kiyou kay yeah nighty mai appnay saat laykay gaya tha..Yeah itni choti hai kay woh mere jacket ki buri wali pocket mai fit agayi..Or yeah manay tumharay liyeah iss liyeah hai tukay u know right...So agahar tum muchsay pyaar kurthi ho toh tum yeah mere liyeah paheno gi...Tumhara Pati Sagar...
Vidya looks at the dress and then at the note...She looked confused...
Precap:Surili reaches the hotel..
Hope u liked it plz do comment..
Ayesha 😊

nice update
plz plz plz cont soon
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Originally posted by: nikitaira

nice update
plz plz plz cont soon
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thanks once again..😃

wicked!!! this is awesome!!love the update..omg jess is such a drama queen 🤢

Hey Ayesha 😊

Great update 👏

I hate Jess 😡

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳

great job ayesha!!! i hope u can become a writer becuz u are very good!!!! in the future when ur a famous writer... ill proudly say tat i knew ayesha when she wasnt a famous writer n i had the opportunity 2 read her superb ffs!!!! ~niti~