FFDher se-in luv again(pg 153)Note-pg155 - Page 23

Originally posted by: infiniti1215

hey ayesha!!! ur only in middle school!!! WOW!!! u liv in canada rite?? do u liv near toranto? i liv in michinan which is lik 5 hrs from canadas border!!! i cant believe tat ur sooo young n rite sooo well!!!! good job!!! hope u can b wateva u want.. lawyer ya writer... i personally wanna b a doctor... great update!!! 😛

Thanks again Niti...Ya i live in Toronto...Man u live in Michinan my ralatives live there...I might come there someday.....Ya i am one of the young members here...Ur comments really make me feel good so i like quoting on them...😃Thats a smile that comes on my face....Thanks once again...

Originally posted by: ramsha1990

uh oh...surili is back!! i think surili n jess are gonna combine there forces of evil BUT wont be able to beat vidya hehe=)) nice update

Di you're right some where there ,but Not on that jess and sur part...Just wait and watch.....Soon i'll be doing something evil to them...HAHAHAHA😈

Originally posted by: afzeel

sweety plz cont soon as posi😃

Thanks Fariya ji...Long time no see huh...Thank u once agian...I'll update tomorrow..😉

Originally posted by: chand pari

Rabiah ji thanks ur comments also make me quote on them...Well don't
wanna ruin it for u but u know that in this FF Vidya is a super women
right so u see what i mean...She can handle 2 at
once....HAHAHAH!!!!😆

Ayesha

Hey Ayesha

I read ur part it was super nice ESP the sv cute nightie scene 😳
I know that since vidyA is a super strong girl she'll be able to take surili n
jessica n maybe more but I hope there's no more except sindoora u can't
have a sv story with out the famous evil sindevi

Cont soon n it was gr8 loved it

Rabiah

Originally posted by: Rabiah

Hey Ayesha

I read ur part it was super nice ESP the sv cute nightie scene 😳
I know that since vidyA is a super strong girl she'll be able to take surili n
jessica n maybe more but I hope there's no more except sindoora u can't
have a sv story with out the famous evil sindevi

Cont soon n it was gr8 loved it

Rabiah

Rabiah ji Thanks for the comments....SV nightie scene makes me blushe becuz i am not use to that type of stuff...U got it dude Vidya is a super girl and she can take more then 2...😃

Sindoora devi ji is the reason for surili going there...But let them go back then to india Vidya will handle that Sindoor...😈

I'll continue this one today...😉

Ayesha😊

Hey superb yaar.....
cute part
reaally really nice
u r good writer
👏 👏 👏

now two gals around sagar
jessica n surili 😡

Originally posted by: nikitaira

Hey superb yaar.....
cute part
reaally really nice
u r good writer
👏 👏 👏

now two gals around sagar
jessica n surili 😡

Thank u soo much...😃I love it when ppl say i am a good writer....Thats what i wanna be...Thanks once again...Don't worry about urili and Jessica ok just don't worry Vidya is there...😉

Hi guys..Thanks for the comments...Just to tell u i also updated on Romance ff...


Precap:Surili checks into the hotel...Sagar and Vidya had the big night... 😳


Surili is awoken by a noise by her next door neighbor...She hears a loud rock music sounds...She sits up in her bed...And covers her ears with both pillows on each her ear...She groans....
Sur-Ub kya musibat hai...
She gets up and knocks on Jessica's door..Jess who is too busy dancing on it doesn't hear the knocks..later when Surili bangs on it she turns of the music and opens the door...Both looked shocked to see each other...
BOth:YOU!!!
Sur-Jessica what the heck are u doing here?
Jess-If i ask that question to u?
Sur-Well i am here for holidays...And u?
Jess-I am here becuz i don't have a house...
Surili laughs...
Jess-Stop ur stupid laugh!!!
Sur-Oh my god i knew that would happen one day...U can never stike with a husband..
Jessica gets mad..
Jess-How about u?Sagar also married Vidya and dumped u i guess..
Surili stops laughing and gets mad too.
Sur-How do u know all this?
Jess- Because they are living in the same floor..
Surili's eyes widens...
Sur-Really!!!
Jess-Yes and i...She pauses...But y do u wanna know old enemy...
Sur-Becuz i want sagar back..
Jess-Oh really well u won't be able to becuz i am getting him back...
Both querrel over howz gonna get him back and then they challange each other and Surili goes back to her room..Scene swithes to Sagar and Vidya's room..
Sagar smiles Wickedly hearing the shower and walks upto the washroom door to open it..He turns the knob around but the door didn't open...Sagar's evil smile turns into sadness.
S-Oh man...
He gets an idea again...
S-Vidya!!!!Muche blanket chaheyeah...
V-Hum bus ahra hain hain daythay hain...
S-Damn!!!
Sagar goes to the balcony to get some morning chilly air..He breathes in and out...When he hears Vidya calling for him again...
He goes back inside...
S-Kya hai Vidya...
V-Kya app humari sari day sukthay hain closet say...
Sagar again smiles...
S-Nahi doonga toh...
V-Kya kahain rahin hain app...
S-Jo tumnay suna...
V-Phir hum washroom say nahi nikalain gay...
Sagar knows that won't happpen...So he thinks of a plan...
S-Oh my good Jessica!!!
Vidya on hearing this quickly wears her nightie and runs straight out...
V-Kaha hai???
On the other hand Sagar is laughing his heads off...Vidya looks at him and makes a mad face...
V-App apni yeah hurkathay kabhie bhi nahi choray gay na...
S still laughing-Nahi...Per tumnay mere saamnay asay anay ki himmad ki...
Vidya looks down at herself and feels shy for a while but then..
V-Aa ah ah i i i issmay kya hova ap ap app hum - humaray pa pa pati hain...
S-Oh really..
Vidya walks to the closet takes out a sari...Sagar smiles...She looks calm at the momment but suddenly she runs towards the washroom to change again..This time Sagar wasn't in a mood to catch her...Later that day Vidya was looking down the balcony...While Sagar prepared to go swimming in the indoor swimming pool...
S-Ok Vidya mai ja raha hoon...Jub mood ho toh ajjna...
V-JIII!!!
He leaves...Then later Surili peaks through her door hole and see's Sagar with his swimming stuff that goes for Jessica too...So they also decide to go swimming..They couldn't decide what to take which took them half an hour...While Vidya in the room got bored...
So she also decided go check on Sagar...She takes the elevator down to the main floor ...While Surili and Jessica missed it...So they both took the stairs...
Vidya got there and saw Sagar Swimming she walks around the swimming pool and talks to Sagar while he swam...
V-Suniyeah ub chulay....humhay boring ho raha hai...
S-No yaar vidya abhi tori dher or yeah meri favourite hobbie hai...
Suddenly Vidya slips and falls into the swimming pool ...Thankfully Sagar was there to help...He catched her on time...She landed in his arms..She got completely wet...Both of them have a eye lock session..While Surili and Jessica arrived both they gasped...Hearing this Vidya see's them and puts a grin on her face...
V In her head-Great itna acha momment burbaad kurnay kay liyeah ahgahi cudailay....
Sagar in his head-y did i have girlfriends..why??
Surili-Oh my god..Yeah toh akela gaya tha Vidya kaha say agahi...
JESS IN HER HEAD-I wish that was me...
Precap:Vidya kicks Jess out of the hotel... 😃
Hope u liked it plz do comment.. 😛
Ayesha 😊

hi ayesha!!! once again.. GREAT JOB!!!! i have relatives in toranto 2!!!! where do u relatives live??? i liv in troy, a hour away from detroit... do u mind if i ask ur relatives name?? cuz maybe i no em.. wouldnt tat be cool??? 😉 if u dont want 2 u dont havta.. i dont mean 2 be soo intrusive... its becuz im curious.. by the way my full name is niti patel... cant wait 2 read the next part!!!!!! 👏

Hey Ayesha 😊

Great update 😉

Jess and Surili have a little competition of there own now 😆 😆 😆 Both will loose to Vidya 😉

Can't wait for your next update 😉

From Shireen 😳