FFDher se-in luv again(pg 153)Note-pg155

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi guys ,ya this is Ayesha,i am thinking writing another FanFic about sagar and vidya ofcourse,right now i am sitting at my friends computer who went to get pizza leaving me behind so to pass time i wanna type another FanFic but i also hope u enjoy this one

Setting: vidya is not an illetrate she does know much english can write and read ...Today Sagar's family is coming to see Vidya (to tell u there is no chacha chachi .but is shalu who has been grown up by vidya's mom since childhood because chacha chachi died in a train crash).

And sagar ofcourse is not very good he is a very awara pagal guy...They have come to find a girl for sagar to make him good.A girl with manners ,respect ,and pateince,which is all in vidya and they've noticed. Sagar is against the wedding but sagar's dad begged him so then he agreeed.

Vidya's house.

V mom- Shaluuuuuuuuuuuuu Vidya tayaar ho gayi hai.

Shalu-yes yes maaji vidya ready hogi hai or very beautiful lug rahi hai.

suddenly theres a knock on the door.shalu races to get it. she opens the door there stood Pratapji, his wife, chinu, and ofcourse Sagar.

S- Namaste uncle or aunty or app subko.

S dad and mom-namaste beta.

then all of them enter, vidya's mom also greets them and they take there seats.now here comes vidya rani.she's dressed beautifully in a pink beautiful salwaar kameez and silvar long earrings to go with it.she is holding a tray of snacks and tea and walks towards everyone.Sagar cannot take his eyes of vidya. he thinks to himself.

S- not bad. she can be my ghar wali or koi or bhar wali.

Vidya places the tray on the table and takes the blessing of sagars maa bap.

S mom- Vidya beta yaha oho humaray saat bato.

V-ji

Vidya goes an sits between sagar and sagar's mom .now she looks at sagar and turns away shyly.on the other hand suddenly sagar grab vidyas wrist which was behind her back without anyone noticing.she makes a worried face and struggles so sagar can let go .But he doesn't chinu notices this.

C- arrey humari honay wali babhi kay charay pur kuch parayshani hai

S dad- ha beta tumhay yeah rishta manzor nahi.

vidya's mom makes a sad face and looks at vidya with anger vidya notices and then replys.

V- ah ah asi koi baat nahi hai woh bus hum kuch gubra rahay hain.

Sagar smiles and lets go.

Shalu- muche lug tha hai vidya or chote thukur ko thori dher lonely meet karna chahi hai.

C- good idea

the elders agree and vidya mom tells her to lead sagar to the terrace so she does and he follows her.There in the terrace it was silent so sagar breaks it.

S- ahhhh Vidya right. Vidya nods.

S- cool amagine Vidya Sagar Pratap Singh.....Then he laughs. Vidya on the other hand is confused and shy.

S- vidya abb toh intazar nahi hota mai toh dad say kahay do ga kay muche kal purso tuk shaadi karni hai..... Vidya nods.

V-ahh humara matlub itni juldi.

sagar laughs- vidya don't worry mai sub sumaj gaya.

He grabs vidya wrist and pulls her closer to him and is about to hug her but she moves away and runs back down stairs she goes and joins others and sagar also comes down a.

S- maa Dad maine or Vidya nay kaal purso shaadi karni hai.

everyone is shocked and stands up.

V mom-pa pa pa pur chote tukur itni juldi.

S- don't worry Vidya's mom hum sub shamal lay gay.

Vidya's mom nods and then pratap ji also does the same but still is shocked.

S dad- theek hai toh kaal saagahi or purso shaadi. ub hamhay chal na chai hai kaal ki tayaari karni hai.

S mom- ijasad didjia.

sagar looks a bit disappointed but before leaving he gives vidya a fly kiss when nobodys looking.

ok guys my friends back with pizza i need to continue with my slummber party but i hope u enjoyed it. Do comment and tell me if u liked it.oh ya a little precap ofcourse.

Precap- It's there engagement day and they're on the terrace away form the crowd .Sagar trying to force vidya on u know what.(cuz he's bad).😡

INDEX

Pt 1: pg 1 Pt 9: pg 11 Pt 17: pg 21 Pt 25: pg 29 Pt 33: pg 37

Pt 2: pg 1 Pt 10: pg 12 Pt 18: pg 22 Pt 26:pg 30 Pt 34:pg 39

Pt 3: pg 2 Pt 11: Pg 13 Pt 19: pg 23 Pt 27:pg 31 Pt 35:pg 41

Pt 4: pg 5 Pt 12:Pg 14 Pt 20: pg 24 Pt 28:pg 31 Pt 36:pg 43

Pt 5: pg 6 Pt 13:pg 16 Pt 21: pg 25 Pt 29:pg 32 Pt 37:pg 46

Pt 6: pg 8 Pt 14:pg 17 Pt 22: pg 26 Pt 30: pg 33 Pt 38:pg 49

Pt 7: pg 9 Pt 15:pg 18 Pt 23:pg 27 Pt 31: pg 34 Pt 39:pg 51

Pt 8: pg 10 Pt 16: pg 19 Pt 24: pg 28 Pt 32: pg 36 Pt 40:pg 54

Pt 41:pg 56 Pt 49:pg 72 Pt 57:pg 88 Pt 65:pg 111 Pt 73:pg 143

Pt 42:pg 58 Pt 50:pg 72 Pt 58:pg 90 Pt 66:pg 113 Pt 74:pg 146

Pt 43:pg 60 Pt 51:pg 74 Pt 59:pg 93 Pt 67:pg 117 Pt 75:pg 148

Pt 44:pg 62 Pt 52:pg 76 Pt 60:pg 95 Pt 68:pg 122 Pt 76:pg 149

Pt 45:pg 64 Pt 53:pg 79 Pt 61:pg 98 Pt 69:pg 126 Pt 78:pg 150

Pt 46:pg 66 Pt 54:pg 82 Pt 62:pg 100 Pt 70:pg 131 Pt 79: pg 153

Pt 47:pg 68 Pt 55:pg 84 Pt 63:Pg 103 Pt 71:pg 136

Pt 48:pg 70 Pt 56:pg 86 Pt 64:pg 108 Pt 72:pg 140

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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh wow....why is sagar so evil in this one lol but i like it....plz continue ...i cant wait for vidya to work her ms nice charm on sagar 😃 😃 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank you so much to the 3 of u i just can't wait to type more of my story and plus i can't go to sleep cuz this stupid tooth ache.Need to go to a dentist. 😡
anyways back with my new story.

recap: sagar and vidyas wedding is fixed which would me taking place in 2 days.
It's night vidya's in her bed getting flashbacks of how sagar was being naughty.Suddenly theres a knock on the door her thoughts are intrupted.
V- undur ayai.
vidya's mom comes in with her engagment outfit in her hand.
V mom-vidya meri beti kuch he dino,mera mutlub parso chor kar ja rahi hai.
A tear rolled down her faded cheek.
Vidya gets up and hugs her maa.
V- maa hum humaysha apko yud karay gay lekin kiyou muche jana paray ga bhoola na.
V mom-arrey pugli her beti ko ek na ek din apnay pati kay ghar jana he hota hai.
V-lekin muche nahi jana hai.
V mom- asa mut kahay vidya. yeah achi baat nahi chul muchsay vaada kar kay toh singh parivaar ki subsay achi bahu baan kay dikhay gi.
V-thik hai maa main vaada karti hoon.
V mom -arrey ha yeah kuch zevaraat or kupray hai toh inmay say chun kay kaal payhan layna.ub may chul thi hoon or bhi bohut tiyaaria karni hai.
V-ji maa. vidya's mom leaves.
Next morning lets say evening.
Vidya's house is all decorated beautifully and all the guests are here and sagars faimly only thing they're waiting for is vidya.
now vidya comes down again dressed damn beautiful in a light blue lahanga with diamond jewellry.sagar is also dressed up in a blue kurta which also makes him look cute.
S DAD- chalo beta sagahi ki rasum puri karay.
V MOM- ha ha kiyou nahi.
Now sagar and vidya are standing in front of each other to put the ring on each others fingers.they do and people clap.now music plays on (can't think of any shaadi songs)Chinu and shalu seems to enjoy them selves together while they danced same with the others.Sagar pulls vidya out of the crowd and leads her to the terrace.Vidya is too shy to say anything.
S- thank god us crowd say nikal gay hum. vidya tum subsay kubsoorat lug rahi ho and i mean it.
V- ji dhanay vaad.
now sagars walking closer and closer vidya doesn't feel right becuz of the experssion on his face so she's backing off.
S-arrey vidya kya hova humari kul shaadi honay wali hai.
V-ji par. now vidya can't go back any farther becuz she just hit the wall.
Now sagar is very close to her touching her whole body at once.HE IS ABOUT TO KISS her on the neck when she pushes him away.
V- yeah kaya kar rahay thay app.
now she's about to leave when he grabs her by the wrist.
S-roko!!!!!
he pulls her back again and hugs her vidya struggles to get free from his grip.FINALLY SHE succeeds she pushes him back and slaps him.
V- humari or apki abhi shaadi nahi hovi hai toh yeah sub gulat hai.
SHE couldn't believe she'd done this without saying another words she runs away crying.on the other hand sagar is really mad of what she'd done.
S-ajj tuk kisi bhi ladki ki zara si himat na hovi sagar pratap singh per haat utanay ki.or iss chotay shar ki ladki ki itni himat.Don't worry i'll get back with u Vidya.woh bhi istra say kay tum bhi yaad ruko gi.
Vidya runs to her bedroom and closes the door behind she goes and sits on her bed feeling very afraid.
V- yeah humnay kaya kiya humhay maafi mangni hogi unsay.maa say humnay achi bahu or patni honay ga vaada kiya tha.
theres a knock on the door vidya quikly wipes her tears and walks towards the door to open it.It's sagar.
HE ENTERS.
V-ahh suniyeah humhay maaf kijiyeah ga .
s-vidya maafi tumhay nahi muche mangni chahiyeah .pata nahi muche kaya hogaya tha manay kubhi asa nahi kiya.so i am sorry.
Vidya smiles.
S-so friends again .
V-friends.
sagar smiles wickedly to himself.
he thinks in his head-poor poor vidya iss ko toh pata bhi nahi kay isski zindagi may kitna bura tufan anay wala hai.jo kaal say suro hoga.

precap-it's sagar and vidya's shuag raat and sagar is beating vidya up.Vidya's bleeding.

Thats it 4 now i am bit sleepy now plus todays school.i need to get 5 hours of sleep atleast. till then hope u enjoyed it and plz do comment. 😃

Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG 😲 he such a baddie!!! but i love him 😛
Btw great start..
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG SAAGAR IS PURE EVIL LMAO!! possesed by sindoora's ghost only more agressive i can not wait to read more...is he gonna be mr.nice guy soon thou!! i really wanna see the nice side of him
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Posted: 17 years ago
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noooooooo plz dont make sagar beat her 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: afzeel

noooooooo plz dont make sagar beat her 😭u

yaar kaya hai i don't wanna ruin ot 4 he will become nice ok beating her up is just a start and there's a reason behind this ok. , so don't worry😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
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ok ok im sooory by the way its sounds interesting sagar beating vidya and kind a sad but reaally im enjoying it hahahahahaa😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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HI thanks to who enjoyed and some people thinking why the heck is sagar gonna beat her up well now u'll know.
Today is sagar and vidya's wedding day.
Some girls are putting henna on vidya's palms .I mean they're done.She had already washed her hands.
Shalu-arrey vidya look look tumharay hands pay mehendi kitni beautiful lug rahi hai.
some other girl-vidya zara apni mehendi toh dikaho.
Vidya shows one of her hands which had such a dark colour of mehendi.
Other girl-wah vidya tumhara pati toh Tumsay bohut pyar karay ga.
VIDYA BLUSHES.
oTHER girl- or doshra haat.
so vidya shows them the other.everyone gasps .it is because the other had such a light colour.
After that nobody says anything.suddenly vidya's mom comes in with her bridal stuff.
V mom-bus hagaya ub chalo vidya ko taiyaar kardo kuch dhayr may barat any wali hai.
Then she leaves handing vidya everything.
Now they show vidya alone in the room almost ready.Then she hears the band.she runs to the window with joy.she peaks and sees sagar is dressed up in a golden and red sheerwani,sitting on the horse with a pugri around his head ofcourse which made him look like a real takur(i think thats what he is)with people dancing around.She kept on staring at him when there's a knock on the door.
Shalu-vidya vidya hurry up UR barat is here now.
VIDYA FROM INSIDE-Sha sha shalu humhay bus dus minute do tum jao.
Shalu-acha ok may 10 minute may coming.
v-thik hai.
then shalu leaves.
SCENE SWITHES TO SAGAR SITTING IN THE PANDAD.
There comes vidya looking amazingly preety as ever before sagar can't take his eyes of her again.so he thinks in his head.
S- god man i am getting a beautifulliest wife ever....How can i take revange from her... She's too innocent.

Now vidya sits beside him she looks at him and blushes.sagar smiles back.now they've took the saat phere sagar had put sindoor in vidya's mang and manglesutra around her neck which means they are married.time 4 baydayi.
Vidya and sagar take the elders blessings and now vidya hugs shalu and cries now her mom for about 5 minutes .sagar thinks to himself what a waste of time.
S- chalay vidya.
vidya wipes her tears and then says jee.
she waves bye to her mom while sitting in the car and her mom is left alone crying.
Sagars room which is decorated good too it's now the shug raat scene.
Vidya is sitting on the bed like every bride does with the gungat over her face ....sagar enters and comes to sit beside vidya his bride...VIDYA BLUSHE TO MUCH...
S- vidya
v-hmmmmm
S-mai gungat hata lo.
V-ja ja ja ji.ya ya yeah app ka huk hai.
S-oh woh manay sucha tum ajj bhi kaal ki tara. AND LAUGHS.
vidya doesn't like that.he takes the dupaata off vidya's head .now he's coming closer vidya is feeling shy so she's backing of a little.
The song from bhool buliya plays on lamho ko.
vidya is now lying and sagar's on top of her(i am feeling shy over here.)He's about to kiss her somewhere ok fine the lips( 😳 ).but vidya moves away she gets up from the bed sagar pulls her back vidya lands in his arms.She closes her eyes .
sagar could see how scared she is (song ends).He pushes her away.Vidya is shocked.
S- MAARO jub say dheky ja raha hoon dheky ja raha hoon kay to muchsay dor ja rahi hay.
v-Woh hum
S- shhhhhhhhhhhhh. and slaps her, vidya puts her hand where he had slapped her.
Sagar now pulls vidya's hair and makes her stands up.
Vidya shouts in pain.
V- choriyeah humhay.
S- acha .
sagar lets go but he pushes her towards the wall she bangs her head on the wall and drops to the ground holding her head sagar walks towards her Now the he is kicking vidya. vidya is screaming out loud.
V- HUMHAY CHORDIJI!!!!!!!!
But he can't quit kicking her.
Hearing this everyone comes including the servants,they start banging on the door.but nobody from inside is able to open it.
S MOM- kahi sagar ko phir say attack toh nahi agaya.hey baagwaan.
S Dad-chinu daarvaaza thor do.
Chinu-ji
chinu and two servants help break the door they do and enter.they see sagar still kicking vidya and she's crying and bleeding.
Chinu-dadda choray bahbi ko.
now the two servants hold sagar back while chinu put an injection on sagars arm.then sagar faints they comfort him on the bed . now sagars mom walks towards vidya to comfort her but vidya tells her to go away cuz she's scared and still thinks every person in the room is sagar.everyone leaves .vidya cuddles herself in a corner puts her knees against her chest and hids her face and cries all night.

PRECAP- sagar gets up and finds vidya in the corner, and asks her what happened to her where did she get those wounds?Vidya is shocked to here that.

I hope now u get the story and what might happen next.Till then i hope u enjoy it.please do comment. 😊

Edited by chand pari - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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so he has illness, he needs to get treatment soon. poor Vidya.

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