FFDher se-in luv again(pg 153)Note-pg155 - Page 22

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Posted: 17 years ago
fabulous
job ayesha
i loved it
ab surili bhi kebab ki hadi bane gi
lol
cont soon
RABIAH

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: infiniti1215

great job ayesha!!! i hope u can become a writer becuz u are very good!!!! in the future when ur a famous writer... ill proudly say tat i knew ayesha when she wasnt a famous writer n i had the opportunity 2 read her superb ffs!!!! ~niti~

Really Niti ur comments make me quote on them...Thanks yaar.....You know what i might become a lawyer because i am gonna be going to law school ...And trust me it's a long way to go...Just can't wait...becuz It's my first year in middle school...NOOOOOOOOOO!!!!But thanks a ton for liking it....

AyeshaπŸ˜ƒ

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: Rabiah

fabulous
job ayesha
i loved it
ab surili bhi kebab ki hadi bane gi
lol
cont soon
RABIAH

😳

Rabiah ji thanks ur comments also make me quote on them...Well don't wanna ruin it for u but u know that in this FF Vidya is a super women right so u see what i mean...She can handle 2 at once....HAHAHAH!!!!πŸ˜†

Ayesha

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi thanks for the comments..As usaul i am bored because i am staying up all night and schools are not opened yet so ya...


Vidya is totally confused she looks at the Nighty and then the letter..
V-Hey Shambunath yeah kiss musibaat mai daal diya hai humhay...Ek toh hum asay bayhoda kupray nahi pahenthay uper say yeah letter jismay lika hai aghar tum muchsay pyaar karthi ho toh...Koi humaray dil say pouchay kay hum unsay kitna pyaar karthay hain per istara ka pyaar..
Scene switches to Sagar when Sagar was about to knock on Jessica's door but he see's that the door is actually halfway open...
In his head-Jessica kahay rahithi kay woh kisi musibaat mai hai kahi mai late toh nahi hogaya..
He peaks inside and finds Jessica dressed in her ugly NIGHTY spraying body spary on her hands and neck while doing that she said out loud...
Jess-Yupppiiiii Now Sagar would be here anytime then his wife will see what i can do...Hope the video camera captures everything that i am gonna do...
Hearing this Sagar was like seriously shocked...Jessica turns around and see's Sagar standing there...She was stunned...
S-So thats what u needed help in.U are such a b-----...
Then he leaves from there in anger...
Jess-Oh damn it...Why are all my plans frikin failing...This guy is really in love with his stupid wife..I think i should do somethin about her first...
Back in the room Sagar is knocking on it but it's locked..Sagar calls for Vidya to open the door but she doesn't...Inside Vidya is panicing because she wore that nighty That was above her knees and there was no slives...Vidya gets an idea..She wraps the bed spread around her and walks to the door and opens it..
S-Yaar itni....He stops when he looks at her...
Sagar closes the door behind him and walks towards Vidya...Vidya starts to walk backwards...
S-Vidya tumnay sheets kiyou lapathi whi hain..
They stop walking...
V-Appko pata hai..
S-Vidya u know i am your hushand so tumhay shurmanay ki koi zarorat nahi hai...
Vidya gets a bit tensed...
V-Ub appnay humhay dhek liya ok bye...
She runs towards the washroom but the bed spread falls of her body and abiously Sagar is not gonna lose the appurtunity because She bent to pick it up but Sagar grabed Vidya from the back...Vidya screams...
Sagar put his other hand on her mouth...
S-Shhhhhh...
Then he takes it of he lets go of her...She stands in front of him he stares at her....She again try's to escape but Sagar manages to grab her wraist and pull her towards him and quickly puts his arms around her waist...Vidya stares at him in the eyes n feels somethin...They both stare at each other...Vidya just hugs him....Sagar was standing close to the wall to he closes the light..And now u know what happens...
Next morning Surili is shown checking in the hotel...unforunately she gets the room on the same floor as Vidya and Sagar and beside Jessica's room..
Surili goes to her room throws her bag on the bed and yawns....
Sur-Agar yeah Vidya na ati toh ajj mai or Sagar yaha per apnay honeymoon pay ahay hotay...Ub jo aha he gahi hoon toh kuch toh kurna puray ga...Per abhi muche suna perayga....Bohut thuk gahi hoon.
She jumps into bed and falls asleep on the other hand Sagar and Vidya awoke from their sleep which they didn't really go to form about 5 in the morning but the alarm woke them up...Vidya was in Sagars arms sleeping sleeping calmly but alarm woke her up..She opens her eyes and looks around and smiles...She see's that Sagar is still sleepin so she turns off the alarm and takes his arms of her gently..Now she wrapped the blanket around her and went to the washroom Sagar started to shiver he opened his eyes and looked around for Vidya...He could hear the shower...He sits up and yawns and smiles wickedly...
Precap:Vidya meets Surili...
Hope u liked it plz do comment... πŸ˜ƒ
Ayesha 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
Hey Ayesha 😊

Great update πŸ˜‰

Now Surili is here too 😑 😑 😑

Can't wait for your next update πŸ˜‰

From Shireen 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
very romantic update! glad Surlli fell asleep! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 17 years ago
i hate jessica's character 😑
now surili is here more trouble 😑
but i still love ur FF 😊
and great update 😊
Edited by riyadesai - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Thanks Riya,Shireen,and Sonali ji...Thanks u soo much..
Everyone really hates Jessica and Surili... πŸ˜† I also do but to make it a bit interesting thats why i need them...Sonli ji i thought kay this was not romantic but oh well to u.. 😳 Shireenji and Sonali ji as i said they are never gonna creat problems to SV..Ok πŸ˜ƒ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
uh oh...surili is back!! i think surili n jess are gonna combine there forces of evil BUT wont be able to beat vidya hehe=)) nice update
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey ayesha!!! ur only in middle school!!! WOW!!! u liv in canada rite?? do u liv near toranto? i liv in michinan which is lik 5 hrs from canadas border!!! i cant believe tat ur sooo young n rite sooo well!!!! good job!!! hope u can b wateva u want.. lawyer ya writer... i personally wanna b a doctor... great update!!! πŸ˜›

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