Teri yaad saath rahein...Updated Part 3 - Page 3

YEAH! Even if it's in a fan fic, at least Sindoora is getting her just desserts, but on the other hand poor Vidya she can't catch a break here either.

Great job, looking forward to the next part and don't worry about the part being short, your quailty in writing far exceeds.

OMG!! Soni ji..!! The last scene was so intense..!! Wow..... i would imagine that would be Sagar's reaction to it, omg can't wait for the next part, am sure it will be really interesting....

oohh, he refuses to accept? 😳 😳 for some reason i think that's ... what do yu call it? hoxy! 😳 😳

lovely update as usual!

Originally posted by: stargirl345

gr8 job di! 👏
grrr sindoora! 😡
well, atleast she's gonna go to jail! 😆

-Ruchika

aww thanks Ruchika for liking it! Aah, she needs to be punished for the crime/s she committed..I'll make sure all proofs prove that she executed the plan of killing Sagar, later medicines/camp master fiasco etc...unlike in the actual show..I doubt she'll ever chakee pees...

Originally posted by: harshi21

YEAH! Even if it's in a fan fic, at least Sindoora is getting her just desserts, but on the other hand poor Vidya she can't catch a break here either.

Great job, looking forward to the next part and don't worry about the part being short, your quailty in writing far exceeds.

thank you for liking it! Aww thank you, hopefully my next part will be longer though!

Originally posted by: ammmu

OMG!! Soni ji..!! The last scene was so intense..!! Wow..... i would imagine that would be Sagar's reaction to it, omg can't wait for the next part, am sure it will be really interesting....

oohh, he refuses to accept? 😳 😳 for some reason i think that's ... what do yu call it? hoxy! 😳 😳

lovely update as usual!

aww thank you for liking it ammu little di!😛 Ooh yes, it would be "hoxy"😆😳 especially because Sagar is not the child-like Sagar anymore, more adult like...hmm..probably anybody knowing after you wake up - in his case that you're married to someone for months, and you don't recognize them at all, must be shocking I guess....so atleast I can proudly say I'm not making Sagar an extremely "bad" human being!😳

Soni that was a wonderful update....I loved how you showed Vidya soo nervous with Sagar even though she had been married to him for soo many months...that is soo naturla...But ofcourse I can expect that from you because of your wonderful wirting ability that amazes me every time 👏 👏 👏 ...you are right it was too short..but can't wait for the next one.... 😳

Originally posted by: rushvi99

Soni that was a wonderful update....I loved how you showed Vidya soo nervous with Sagar even though she had been married to him for soo many months...that is soo naturla...But ofcourse I can expect that from you because of your wonderful wirting ability that amazes me every time 👏 👏 👏 ...you are right it was too short..but can't wait for the next one.... 😳

aww thank you Rushvi for liking it...hmm..yea I thought since Vidya has always been with the Sagar who was child-like, and now with this drastic change, it's like she's meeting a new man altogether, so thought she would be a little nervous, anxious, shy more than usual..😳

SsSooonniiii!!! Tht was really good!! 👏 👏 👏

i really wish in could see this scene on my tv screen! im like dying here to see an angry Saagar! A Mature Saagar! A man-like Saagar! 😳 😳 😆

But reading ur update is a s good as seeing it!

cant wait for ur next part! 😆

👏 👏 I just started reading your FF. I like it 😛 wait i mean i love it 😃 cant wait to read the next part.