Teri yaad saath rahein...Updated Part 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Ruchika: Thanks for liking my siggie...thought of trying something a little different..thanks for liking it! The next part is coming soon..

Nabihah: aww you've read some of my others? aww don't feel sorry, it just makes me happy that you liked them..aww..will be writing the next soon...(day or two) PS: Love your avi...haiii such sizzling chemistry..

Ammu: awwwww...well I just didn't have the heart to discontinue trapped bird, so I will continue it..am glad you liked this one, although I like trapped bird's introduction much better..aah that's why I thought of writing this one, because the actual show is taking eons to proceed with this particular track, so thought of joining the gang of actually writing something similar and what we want instead..aah you know, If Sagar hasn't recovered (prayyy) then I have a feeling they may try to do this..it would drag a lot though, but in my story the next part would reveal it all...thankoo for liking it ammu! it's your guys' feedback that drives me to write more and more even in my most laziest modes (lolzzz)

Sravi: aww thankoo for liking it sweetie! Thought even though Sagar doesn't remember Vidya, it would be lovely for him to have this sort of attachment/attraction towards Vidya whether it's now when he doesn't know he is married to her and when later he knows this fact and refuses to accept this..

Lina: thankoo for liking it! ooh..Lina kitne bade bade sapne dekhe hain tumne mere liye..(hehe) hopefully this dream will come true some day in a dream or perhaps in reality?

sweety_07: thankoo for liking it sweetie!

aditisilawat: thankoo for liking it sweetie!


rushvi: Thankoo for liking it! aww am glad it cheered you up, it tremendously cheered me up to, cause this time the pen is in my hands not the writers of BMTD...I can manipulate the story here however I want to..and that just feels so good...


Gracella: aww thankoo for you liking it! Hmm...I am glad you all like this Sagar, he has shades of gentleness, inner goodness and sparks of arrogance and impulsiveness..

Reemz: Haila Reemz lolz..yes I am back in action, hopefully for a long time..you won't be missing SV's fairytale romance, will still continue it don't worry...I am trying to have a sort of bank of parts for trapped bird, so I can post each part on different days, so it will be like updated a lot often than it is right now..so hopefully I'll get done with it soon! between Reemz, I think you're the only other one who hasn't updated her fan fiction, aap kab kar rahe ho update? I love your fan fiction too!

Keep smiling..
Love
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Soni! yeh sapne zaroor sach honge! 😆

u're a grrreAAt writer! im sure u're book would sell like hotcakes if u publish at least even one! then we would be seeing ur picture in pprs! millionaire bestseller writer! she even beat J.K.Rowling! 😆 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Soniji...ive been updating for the past 2 weeks 😆 ive written about 7 since that long break 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awww SOni ji can't wait for ur next chapter and i'm sho glad that you will be updating Trapped Bird soon as well!! 😳 will be a treat to see two completely different stories..... Monday is the day! 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~LiNa~

Soni! yeh sapne zaroor sach honge! 😆

*fingers crossed*😛

u're a grrreAAt writer! im sure u're book would sell like hotcakes if u publish at least even one! then we would be seeing ur picture in pprs! millionaire bestseller writer! she even beat J.K.Rowling! 😆 😆

haha Lina...I don't think I can ever beat J.K Rowling...I cannot lure readers as realistically and as wonderfully into the book...such portrayal of ficticious characters with such strength can only be done by Rowling...I'm a fan of HP series! 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: *Reemz*

Soniji...ive been updating for the past 2 weeks 😆 ive written about 7 since that long break 😛

omg, and I was under the illusion that you never did..well atleast now I have a good full seven parts to read...that will entire me much more than just one part...😳 I'm so behind aren't I despite being here😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammmu

Awww SOni ji can't wait for ur next chapter and i'm sho glad that you will be updating Trapped Bird soon as well!! 😳 will be a treat to see two completely different stories..... Monday is the day! 😉

yes..yes ammu little di, Monday yani today is the day, although the part will be posted a bit late today, but it will be posted unless something unwanted occurs which I doubt..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh soni!!!!!!!!! exactly as ammu said, i had mixed feelings by seeing this FF. But thank god u r not leaving Trapped Bird in half way......... So glad....... and do i even need to say? as usual you are the best! thanks for giving me sth to do apart from reading those sad BMTD updates (i have now decided to watch it again only when sagar recovers 😡 )
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

oh soni!!!!!!!!! exactly as ammu said, i had mixed feelings by seeing this FF. But thank god u r not leaving Trapped Bird in half way......... So glad....... and do i even need to say? as usual you are the best! thanks for giving me sth to do apart from reading those sad BMTD updates (i have now decided to watch it again only when sagar recovers 😡 )

awww...well I haven't quit on Trapped Bird, will write it as soon as I can! awww am glad you liked it..was trying to pen something that would make me feel better! And there writing my dream-like story for BMTD is what clicked for me!

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Teri yaad saath rahein… - Part Two



Recap: Vidya turns around is about to walk, when she trips over her sari and falls...she lets out a small yelp....but to her surprise she doesn't find herself on the floor but in someone's strong armship...she looks up to find herself staring to eyes so familiar, eyes that she's seen every single day and loved...Her heart pulsates as he pulls her up and brushing his soft cheek against her hair...Vidya's cheeks turn a deep shade of crimson as she blushes with the near close proximity she and Sagar had ever shared since he recovered...


Continuation: Sagar helps Vidya stable her footing and then they both stand next to each other silently fidgeting…

Vidya bites her lips, turns to look at Sagar and says "shukriya" Sagar smiles his full dimpled smile "you're welcome…I mean isse mein shukriya ki kya baath hain? Main yahan tha, aur tum gir ne waali thi, maine samhala, koi badi baath nahi hai"

Vidya nervously smiles, somehow even though she's lived with Sagar for so many months, the first moment alone with him was awkward as well as comforting…She was never jittery in front of Sagar yet today something was different…even his unwavering gaze jolted something inside of her…Vidya thinks to herself…

She proceeds downstairs…when Sagar calls out to her "Vidya..rukho…tum kya shaadi shuda ho?" Vidya freezes on the spot, weighed down with anxiety and nervousness as she stiffly turns to face Sagar…"jee woh hum.." but if abruptly interrupted by another booming voice "HAAN yeh shaadi shuda hain" Sindoora appears from the dark shadows of the night on the terrace bringing night with her..Sagar looks at her doubtingly 'Kaun hain who?" Sindoora simply smiles "TUM" Sagar smiles "oh acha.."

Then looks at Sindoora in shock as her words sink in….his world seems to be hazy now as he looks back and forth from Vidya to Sindoora in shock…and then begins laughing sardonically "Sindoora yeh bohoth ganda mazaak hain.." Sindoora although feeding on the glory of Sagar's unhappy state, is a little upset with Sagar speaking to her like that…

Vidya gapes at Sindoora in shock.."yeh aap kya ke rahi didi, yeh sach nahi hain" and then turns to Sagar "yeh sach..sach nahi hain.." Sagar ignores Vidya and marches inside furiously banging doors as he rushes downstairs and into his room…Sagar shakenly looks at his room in bewilderment…he wondered why his room resembled that of a child's and why…WHY..he walked into his room picking up a picture frame in horror…the picture frame was of him and Vidya in wedding outfits smiling candidly…

In a furious outrage, Sagar throws the frame on the floor, covering his ears as the noise of the picture frame shattering echoes in his ears…He watches angrily as the glass over the picture frame shatters into tiny shards…He rushes to his cupboard adding further to his misery as he throws sari after sari onto his bed…He rushed his fingers through his hair desperately wanting to believe what he saw was false… "Yeh nahi hosakta..no.." Sagar mutters angrily to himself…

PS: I know it's a bit short, but will try and write another part as soon as possible tonight/tomorrow perhaps!

Preview: Sagar refuses to accept that Vidya is his wife, and sends Sindoora to jail...

Keep smiling…
Love
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago

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