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Posted: 18 years ago
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Teri yaad saath rahein - Part Three



Sagar furiously kicks his cubboard door and holds his head tightly as it throbs in distress and anger "Yeh ho kya raha hain?" A few minutes later, Sagar summons everyone in the family to the living room. After everyone appears in the living room, in an icy tone, Sagar says "Kya meri shaadi Vidya se huwi thi?" there is dead silence in the room, as everyone recovers from the shock of Sagar finding out the truth. Sagar's mother bites her lip and slowly says "Beta woh.." Sagar raises his hand to stop her "Maa..haan ya na?" Sagar's mother keeps quiet tears welling in her eyes...Aniket puts his hand on her shoulder and calms her "haan Sagar par.."

Sagar is shocked and in denial "isse shaadi ko main..main nahi maantha...aur kya kya hua hain jo aap logon ne mujhse chupayi hain?" Aniket worriedly says "Sagar tumhe araam ki zaroorat hain, ithna stress tumhare sehath keliye achi nahi hain.." Sagar shakes his head "nahi jiju, mujhe abhi ke abhi sab kuch jaana hain, aapko bathana hi hoga" Aniket then narrates to him what all happened in the past one year, his father going to Benares, Vidya marrying him, His father passing away, adoption of Sameer etc...tears roll down Sagar's eyes and he thinks of his father..Vidya sits on the stairs crying uncontrallably as she watches Sagar's state and then his words keep ringing in her ears "main..isse shaadi ko nahin maanta"

Just then there is thunderous burst of knocks on the door, Sagar goes to open the door and invites the people in...everyone stands up in shock as police men come in...An officer says "aap main se Sindoora Pratap Singh kaun hain?" Sindoora is dead shocked, sweat trickles down her forehead and mentally kicks herself for not anticipating this and doing something...she stutters "main...main hi hoon Sindoora Pratap Singh, aa..apko mujhse kya..kya kaam hain?" The officer comes forward saying "humare paas aapka arrest warrant hain" Sindoora raises a hand in the air "what nonsense, kisse jurm main..aap..aap mujhe giraftaar karsakte hain?"

Sindoora breathes heavily as she sweats in anxiousness..Sagar smirks "di..aapne jo khel khel ka accident banaya tha, usse jurm main.." Everyone is shocked and Sindoora shivers even more...Sagar mother's dimisses Sagar's words "yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Sagar, saaf saaf kyun nahi kehte?" Sagar sits down on a sofa and calmly says "Sindoora di ne mera accident karvaaya tha, in fact jab mein unko madad keliye pukaara tha, unhone mere accident karne waale ka truck driver ko paise diye aur mujhe dekhthi rahi, par meri madad nahi ki.." The officer sends two police women to handcuff Sindoora who protests and protests as she looks at her son sobbing and then running up to his room...Sindoora is dragged out by the police women then Sagar shuts the door. Without saying another word, he rushes up the stairs ignoring a sobbing Vidya on the stairs. ("tujhse naraaz nahin zindagi..heraan hoon..heraan hoon.." plays)

After an hour, Sagar goes to his room to find Vidya making the bed. Vidya sees him and smiles "aap aa gaye, chalo jaldi se haath moo dol lijiye, hum aap ke liye garma garam dood le aate hain" Vidya happily walks a few steps when Sagar's mocking voice stops her.. "MAIN BACCHA NAHIN HOON, humph chali aaye dood lene" Sagar then rolls his eyes and strides over to where Vidya is standing and continues "apne aap ko meri patni samaj ne ki bhool kabhi math karna" Vidya gasps, as tears well up in her eyes, threatening to spill out and taking a deep breath says "agar humse..humse koi bhool ho gayi ho to hume maaj kar dijiye.." sagar grits his teeth, "tumhari sabse badhi bhool kanooni thor par meri patni hona hain"

To be continued...

Keep smiling...
Love
Soni

Edited by soni595 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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holding the first spot 😉

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Omg Soni i'm blown away 👏...I just loved how you described Sagar's anger....the emotions were exactly how you would imagine it the way he was crying for his dad 😳....I am tottaly awed by your wrting yaar 😳. and finally Sin got what she deserved 😃. and the last line Sagar says 😲...I'm sooo glad you updated.....and hope too read another one soon.😃

Edited by rushvi99 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Soni that was AWESOME! Marvelous job! This is a really good FF! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aaaaaaaaaah...she's in jail!!me sooo happy 😳

awesome part soni!! loved the way vidya was going to get back to the old ritual...she forgot and continued treating him like a baccha 😳 and of course loved his answer 😉

amazing part hun!! 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushvi99

holding the first spot 😉

EDIT:

Omg Soni i'm blown away 👏...I just loved how you described Sagar's anger....the emotions were exactly how you would imagine it the way he was crying for his dad 😳....I am tottaly awed by your wrting yaar 😳. and finally Sin got what she deserved 😃. and the last line Sagar says 😲...I'm sooo glad you updated.....and hope too read another one soon.😃

awww thankoo Rushvi, dekho mere gaal laal hogaye hain😳😆 Yes, you would read another one soon, working on the next two parts, and then perhaps I can get back to trapped bird...it's good to see your posts, I've noticed you haven't been as active as you used to be!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: noodles

Soni that was AWESOME! Marvelous job! This is a really good FF! 😃

Thanks for liking it, it's going pretty slow right now, but I'm trying to speed it up, aadat se majboor, I can't avoid writing the details..so hopefully some intense scenes can be written soon..

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: inavars

aaaaaaaaaah...she's in jail!!me sooo happy 😳

aah one of the most glorious moments, although it isn't nice to cheer on someone's loss or pain, she deserves to be punished for her crimes...

awesome part soni!! loved the way vidya was going to get back to the old ritual...she forgot and continued treating him like a baccha 😳 and of course loved his answer 😉

yea I thought, it's got to take time for her to adjust/come to terms with the real Sagar..I feel bad to keep making Vidya cry, but then how are we going to get the arrogant Sagar😳

amazing part hun!! 👏 👏

thanks for liking it Sravi!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow, beautiful part soni di! 👏
i luvvvvvvvvvvvvvvv ur writing.
itz so vivid nd descriptive. 😛
especially the way u portray sagar's feelings nd thoughts. gr8 job! 👏


-Ruchika
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

awww thankoo Rushvi, dekho mere gaal laal hogaye hain😳😆 Yes, you would read another one soon, working on the next two parts, and then perhaps I can get back to trapped bird...it's good to see your posts, I've noticed you haven't been as active as you used to be!

Yea i have been busy with School lately...so I'm missing IF all the time ...and when i am online at night everyone is offline 😆 But I have noticed your very creative posts lately and today when I get home I am going to post in all of them 😃......

I'm glad you are going to update Trapped Bird I miss that lovely fairytale 😳....Can't wait for the update for here also 😉

Love,

Rushvi 😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Omg Soni ji, you updated..!! 😳 😳 😛

And what a lovely update it is! OMG.. Sindoora's in jail...... haha, haila..!! I absolutely loved loved loved the way Sagar sat down on the sofa and calmly said everything... uff *faints*.. 😳 she gets what she deserves then..!! Don't hate Sindoora and don't completely dislike her, but.. for what she's done... eggjactly what she needs!

And Vidya still acting normally.. and then "main baccha nahin hoon"... oh God, the last part he said to her, so firm, so strong!! wonder if Vidya will be just as bold... can't wait for the next part!!

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