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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: nishtha

i would like to write small scenes like..

My story start after this:When Sindorra and Surily have accused him that he likes Vidya and thrwon him and Vidya out of the house 😕

In his home Tushar is stting alone thinking about the days he spent with Sagar..Bharat and Chinu..ahh how much fun..and Sagar the innocence of his face..which made me even closer to him..how would i live my life without them.
Suddenly bell rings..its Vidya..he is amazed to see her at his door..he turns back and asks Vidya to leave..Vidya questions back..Why to you wnat me to leave Tusshar..you are the one who said na call me Tusshar and not jee. your are the one who taught me how to face the World..and esp Sinodrra and Surily now.. when its time to face the world and reality you just can't turn your back to me.. it would be insult to our friendship our Special bond that we share.. 😕

Tushhar tries to pacify Vidya by saying see Vidya.. for me you've always been my best friends' wife for whom i can give away my life..but i just can't see the hatred on those face..thinking i have.. leave i can't even utter that word.

For me..you have always been a source of inspiration whom i respected and and i would advice you to somehow go back to Sagar as i knwo he still love you alot..mera kya hai..i've lived my life always like that..i can handle it.... my parents never had time for me..they were busy in their life..i've got family but God can't see me happy he has taken it even that away from me..and started crying.. 😭

My story will continue hope you alllike it if not..then plz dont hesitate to post your views..i won't dare to write again 😆

I loved it Nishita plz continue soon 👏👏👏

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Posted: 18 years ago
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haila rushvi u really liked it thanks buddy.. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: rushvi99

Amazing work CherryPrincess 👏 👏 👏...I loved it..you are a wonderful writer..and your hindi wasn't bad at all... 😉

Oh!!!!!!! How relieved I am to hear this!!!!!!! Thx for ur lovely comments rushvi!!!!!!! 😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: nishtha

i would like to write small scenes like..

My story start after this:When Sindorra and Surily have accused him that he likes Vidya and thrwon him and Vidya out of the house 😕

In his home Tushar is stting alone thinking about the days he spent with Sagar..Bharat and Chinu..ahh how much fun..and Sagar the innocence of his face..which made me even closer to him..how would i live my life without them.
Suddenly bell rings..its Vidya..he is amazed to see her at his door..he turns back and asks Vidya to leave..Vidya questions back..Why to you wnat me to leave Tusshar..you are the one who said na call me Tusshar and not jee. your are the one who taught me how to face the World..and esp Sinodrra and Surily now.. when its time to face the world and reality you just can't turn your back to me.. it would be insult to our friendship our Special bond that we share.. 😕

Tushhar tries to pacify Vidya by saying see Vidya.. for me you've always been my best friends' wife for whom i can give away my life..but i just can't see the hatred on those face..thinking i have.. leave i can't even utter that word.

For me..you have always been a source of inspiration whom i respected and and i would advice you to somehow go back to Sagar as i knwo he still love you alot..mera kya hai..i've lived my life always like that..i can handle it.... my parents never had time for me..they were busy in their life..i've got family but God can't see me happy he has taken it even that away from me..and started crying.. 😭

My story will continue hope you alllike it if not..then plz dont hesitate to post your views..i won't dare to write again 😆

haila Nish, you too should start a fan fiction! You write so well! The way you described Neil's feelings and Vidya's situation!👏😛 Lovely!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Lajja you write so well too! Ever think of writing a fan fiction? Your writing exhibits depth! Absolutely lovely! 👏 😛 Hope you liked the flowers, specially picked!😳😛

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

Lajja you write so well too! Ever think of writing a fan fiction? Your writing exhibits depth! Absolutely lovely! 👏 😛 Hope you liked the flowers, specially picked!😳😛

are aapne hame itne pyar se phool bheje to hame pasand kaise nahi aayege?????? 😛 wl i m right now not sure if i wud b able to devote enough time for a FF......... but that's now on my list esp looking at gr8 comments from all of u!!!!!!!! 😊 i wud try it may b in a vacation!!!!!!!!!!! 😊 writing is a deep pleasure!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: soni595

haila Nish, you too should start a fan fiction! You write so well! The way you described Neil's feelings and Vidya's situation! Lovely!


thanks alot soni 😃 well i was not that great as you..lajja and everyone is quite ahead but..just treid 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey nish! thanks but i am seriously saying ur writing is gr8!!!!!! beautiful and cute!!!!!!!! in a short and sweet way u described complicated emotions of vidya and tushar was awesome!!!!!!!!! 😛 i agree with soni, u sud start ur FF soon!!!!!!!!! btw thx for liking my story!!!!!!!!! 😛😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: CherryPrincess

hey nish! thanks but i am seriously saying ur writing is gr8!!!!!! beautiful and cute!!!!!!!! in a short and sweet way u described complicated emotions of vidya and tushar was awesome!!!!!!!!! 😛 i agree with soni, u sud start ur FF soon!!!!!!!!! btw thx for liking my story!!!!!!!!! 😛😳

oh thanx lajja you are soo sweet and generous to me😃 though plz you you should continue urs loved it😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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angad4life, ur fanfic is so beautiful!👏👏 it was so full of heartfelt emotions that i had a tear in my eyes after reading it. ur a born writer!😃 write more such stories for us please!

CherryPrincess that was a great effort! keep it up!👏👏

Nistha, i loved ur story. it was short & sweet. is there another chapter to it?😉

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