Scenes between Tush-Vidya - Page 6

Of course it will not be a disaster 😡 😳 😆 do try writing one! we see so much talent in this forum... makes me feel so proud of my fellow doston and members!! 😃 😳

so true there is so much talent in this forum! 👏 😛 It is a matter of pride! 😳 (Ok I have to stop blushing, warna like reemz said, tomatar jaise hojayega 😆 )

Yah Soni ji... i can already see some permanent red on your face!! 😳 😆 in fact, me cheeks even feel warm when I come here... and dream about SV 😳 uff, what is wrong with me?!

(my story starts at the time when sagar has just recovered and he still hates Vidya....... guys this is an updated version in case u read old one!!!!!! )

(tushar is really anxious to see love of his life, his Vidya happy… Vidya's pain is fully visible in his eyes ………… Uff………… how badly he wanted one cute smile on vidya's face!!!!!!!!! How badly!!!!!!!!!! If given his way, he would have killed Vidya for being so sad………why does she do that to him!!!!!!!! damn!!!!!!!!! Could he really do something???????? Yes. Yes………. He could and he would………… He was again preparing a cunning plan!!!!! His face again gets filled with some hidden determination and confidence…………………… )

"Vidya, tum samajh kyun nahi rahi?????? sagar ko phir se pane ke liye ab yahi ek rasta hai !!!!!!!"

"haan, tusharji…………. Shayad aapki bat hi sahi hai!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Hame kuch to karna hi padega……… Ham inhe aise apne se dur hota nahi dekh sakate!!!!!!!!!!!! Ham inke bina ji nahi sakate!!!!!! Akhir ham kare to kya kare???? Pahele to ham inhe kitne pasand the? Hamari har bat pe wo kitna khush ho jate the!!!!!!!!!! Aur ab????????? Ab to hame dekhate hi inke muh pe jo udasi, jo nafarat cha jati hai, wo ab hamse ye baradast nahi hoti……… 😭 man hota hai ki kahi bhag jaye!!!!!!! par na to ham unhe chod sakate hai, na to ham unke pas reh sakate hai……… 😭 Kya kare????????"

(Oh!!!!!!!!! Tushar's heart was aching with pain to feel dard in Vidya's voice, even he was fully disgusted with what sagar did!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! How could he???????? How could he ever do that????? How could he not see true love in such cute fairy's eyes. How could insult her???? 😡 How could he not see her divine beauty………????? 😡 More and more he tried to find the reasons, more and more he got hurt with his deep love for Vidya…… he tried to say sth, but his voice just choked and didn't allow him to speak…………So he let Vidya continue and pour her heart to him!!!!!!!!)

"ham ye to achhi tarah se jan chuke hai ki unhe nafarat hai hamare anpadh hone se, hamare sidhe sadhe dekhav se, hamari har bat se……… 😭 isi liye to ........... haan isi liye to ab ham koshish to kar rahe hai na???????"

(she is fully disheartened! Just then Vidya looks intently into his eyes and not being able to control himself tushar comes closer to her, gives her his shoulder to cry on!!!!!!! she just closes her eyes and tries to relax with help of her best friend 😛 !!!!!!!!!!!! )
(Par bichara tushar!!!!!! he was just burning inside with such closeness... He wanted to hug her tightly……… how difficult it was for him to stay away from her and not rap her in his hands!!!!!!!! wish he could do that!!!!!!! Wish!!!!!!!!!!!! But, He wakes himself up and starts searching for words to console her)

"Vidya, main janata hoon ki tum koshish kar rahi haun, par itni jaldi har man jaoogi to kaise chalega????? Abhi to sirf shuruat hai, aage aage dekho hota hai kya? ab manzil dur nahi!!!!!!!!!! ab please piche mudake mat dekho………bas thodi si himmat aur rakh lo………Sagar ke liye!!!!!!! Mere liye!!!!!!😳"

"par tusharji!!!!!!!!!!! Aap to hame achhe se samajhate hai na??????? phir aap hi bataiye ham ye kaise kar sakate hai????? "

"main samajhata hun vidya ki yeh tumhare liye ye kitna difficult hai..........sorry mushkil hai"

"nahi hame yad hai, difficult matalab kathin, hain na????? nahin.......... wo kya tha......... (tries to remember hard)....... haan..... correct?????? sahi kaha na hamne???"

"are wah tum to badi jaldi sikhane lag gayi haun? " (smiles at her with pride in his eyes)

"ham inke liye na itni koshish to kar hi sakate hai na! " (her face is full red like rose just with a thought of her sagar, but then on the next moment!!!!!!!!! Quack!!!!! Oh!!!!!! she realizes where she is!!!!!!!!! sagar is no where near her!!!!!!! no love!!!!!!!!!! )

(her face quickly turns white with the clear tension not understanding what to do)

"ha to bas thodi aur himmat………. Akhir tumhe ye ladai jitni hi hai!!!!! "

(hearing sagar's name again, vidya's heart is finally full with hopes and with some new determination, new zest.......... some secret smile appears on her face suddenly remembering past , she feels as if her sagar is just in front of her, holding her hand and she can go to any extent to get him back now!!!!!! )

(tushar, knowing her since ages!!!!!!!!! (that's what he thought at least) , reads her mind & continues..............after a small pause )

"vidya, vidya............ kaha kho gayi tum???????? meri bat suno....... believe me this would surely work!!!!!!!! ye sach me kam karega!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Aur tum dar kyun rahi haun??????????? akhir tum kuch galat thodi kar rahi haun??????? Tum to sirf apne hak ke liye, apne sagar ke liye lad rahi haun.............. mujhe to bharosa hai na tumhe????? "

"haan, aap pe to pura bharosa hai hi na........... aakhir aap hi to hamare sabse pyare dost hai! aap hi no to hame ab tak kitni musibato se bachaya hai!!!!!!!!!!!!! to ham aapki bat kaise tal sakate hai??????????? hame pura bharosa hai ki aap jo karoge thik hi karoge........"

(hearing this tushar's face suddenly shines with inner happiness )

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I m sorry guys, if i bored u, it's my first try!!!!!!! sorry if it was boring!!!!!!!! I would be eagerly waiting for your comments, as this is my first try to write anything! any criticisms or comments are more than welcome and appreciated!!!!!!!!!! Enjoy!

btw, soni and nishita......... i m glad that u liked my writing!!!!!!!!!! and soni u r my guru...... i m trying to learn from u, so plz plz tell me if i m wrong somewhere!!!!!! wl, my hindi was a disaster but improvement u see is only cause of my friends!!!!!! and thanks for your wonderful gift!!!!!!! i adore it!!!!!!!! 😊

Originally posted by: soni595

Specially for you Lajja!😛 Haila so true..lol Tush is no where close to how much SV was dicussed here, even though the topic was about him, but I did write a scene for him too😳 and aah , you write so well, lovely scene yaar! Your hindi is so much better than mine!👏😛

i love ur gift soni!!!!!!!!!!! i m so relieved to know that u liked it!!!!!!! wl wait for ur new comments for my new update!!!! 😳 i was left behind else i might have tried to write sth for SV, but now can't think of it as all of u have left nth much for me!!!!!!!!!!! 😉 so i m trying to now use this tushar track to quench my writing thirst!!!!!!!!! but sadly,,,,,, he is only friend for vidya for me, so m not able to write intimate scenes like "angad4u" did!!!!!!!! 😭

angad4life: wow!!!!!!!! what a wonderful scene!!!!!!! u absolutely have gr8 imigination!!!!!!!! u sud seriously finish ur FF once u get time!!!!!! it's awesome!!!! looking at ur write-up i feel how inferior mine is!!!!!!!! 😭 but i can't even help it!!!!!! how to think tushar and vidya's as lovers!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😭 it's still not sinking into my heads!!!!!!!!! 😭

Originally posted by: nishtha

guys you are making me feel..scared more as i wanted to post mine but now aprehensive 😕 as u guys are stupendous!!! 👏 👏 👏
both lajja and cherry

hey, nish atleast u don't get afraid of me!!!!!!!!!! i have seen ur writing!!!!!!!!! (ur dissections are gr8, so know ur FF is also going to be really gr8.......... moreover u can even imagine Tushar-vidya in ur dreams, but i can't..... so i am afraid i cudn't feel it up with real emotions like u wud!!!!!!! btw lajja and cherry are same persons!!!!!!!!! 😆

I loved your short story angad4life it was amazing work 👏 . I never thought i would be this much intrested in the story that did not have SV in it as a couple..but that was amazing writing you should create a FF... 😃

Amazing work CherryPrincess 👏 👏 👏...I loved it..you are a wonderful writer..and your hindi wasn't bad at all... 😉

i would like to write small scenes like..

My story start after this:When Sindorra and Surily have accused him that he likes Vidya and thrwon him and Vidya out of the house 😕

In his home Tushar is stting alone thinking about the days he spent with Sagar..Bharat and Chinu..ahh how much fun..and Sagar the innocence of his face..which made me even closer to him..how would i live my life without them.
Suddenly bell rings..its Vidya..he is amazed to see her at his door..he turns back and asks Vidya to leave..Vidya questions back..Why to you wnat me to leave Tusshar..you are the one who said na call me Tusshar and not jee. your are the one who taught me how to face the World..and esp Sinodrra and Surily now.. when its time to face the world and reality you just can't turn your back to me.. it would be insult to our friendship our Special bond that we share.. 😕

Tushhar tries to pacify Vidya by saying see Vidya.. for me you've always been my best friends' wife for whom i can give away my life..but i just can't see the hatred on those face..thinking i have.. leave i can't even utter that word.

For me..you have always been a source of inspiration whom i respected and and i would advice you to somehow go back to Sagar as i knwo he still love you alot..mera kya hai..i've lived my life always like that..i can handle it.... my parents never had time for me..they were busy in their life..i've got family but God can't see me happy he has taken it even that away from me..and started crying.. 😭

My story will continue hope you alllike it if not..then plz dont hesitate to post your views..i won't dare to write again 😆